Absolutely outstanding. I enjoyed reading your first 2 chapters. The charters draw you into the story. I look forward to reading more of it. Keep up the great work
Written nicely. I enjoyed it and look forward to seeing more. The story has a good rhythm. I was hoping that the girl would take him back. Wouldn't change a word. Would love to read more of your stories.
a very good piece. deep and spiritual. i enjoyed it very much. i could feel the love the Lord bestows on us on earth and above. keep writing. look forward to reading more
Lol. Lmao. I truly enjoyed your story. It makes you wonder what animals think of us humans. There's vegetables, nuts, grains and other stuff we can eat. But we can't help but yearn for more than that. It makes one wonder why we eat what we do. Keep on writing.
I lived in NY for over 30 years before moving to Tampa. Though at times I miss the cold, I wouldn't move back North. TOO COLD. But I would love to see snow just one more time. I do miss snowball fights and making snow angels. Enjoy the cold weather. I look forward to reading more of your items.
HMMM. Well let's see. Being its the age of the interweb, there are several ways for Santa to deliver his gifts. By mail, UPS, FedEx. Or you can go old school and use elf magic. I enjoyed it. Tell the reindeers to go back to work. Lol
I loathe doctors. I worked in nursing homes over fifteen years and from my experience dealing with them. None of them ever struck me as emphatic. I swear they only see patients for the money. I miss the old days when the hippocratic oath meant something to doctors. I am so glad that my grand-father who was a doctor never had to see these doctors nowadays. Lost is the time when doctors took food, livestock and other items they used to pay their doctors. And I am so glad that the person in your story had enough sense to runaway from that quack
Awesome piece. I enjoyed reading it. I wondered who the narrator was. You had me stomped. Peter Pan was definitely the last person I thought you were writing about. Short and sweet. I look forward to reading more of your work.
Lol. I didn't realize until the end where you were going with the story. I loved it. I laughed when I realized it was a dog the person was speaking to. Your piece made me laugh. I look forward to reading more of your pieces. Thanks for sharing
I love your take of the different princesses. I plan to show this to my 18 year old daughter. She loves Disney and his princesses. I myself am partial to Anastasia. There's just something about her story that I love. Look forward to reading more of your work
i enjoyed reading your piece. I know how you feel, I love watching nature. The green luscious grass, I love to lay on my hammock and listen to the birds. We need to take care of this world the way God takes care of us. Wouldn't change a thing.
I love your piece though I did not grow up in the 50's or 60's, I was born in 1968. I remember black and white tv sets, the old shows, music. I love the shows and music of that era. As I read your piece, I remember my younger years in the Philippines and watching on my grandma's tv with its dials. There was no 24 hour tv channels. After a certain time all the channels were snow. One could actually sleep in silence. I wouldn't change a thing. Only caught one misspelt word. Mini skirts. I enjoyed your piece, keep writing.
i enjoyed your story and felt as if i was standing there watching Milandra and Raleigh . It is a beautiful tribute to Princess. I hope that Princess has a loving mate that makes her happy. Only tihng I noticed you missed the word 'old' in seven years old. but loved everything in your piece. Keep on writing.
Nothing too say but Awesome. I truly enjoyed the piece. Seeing it unfold in front of our eyes makes our lives seem to be so trivial. I worked as a CNA in different nursing for fifteen years. I had the privilege of meeting and becoming a part of lives of service members throughout those years. They will always have a special part of my heart. ty for sharing.
Short, sweet and heart felt. I love the piece. We all need to go out with our sail up and be ready for what life has for us. With our faith close to our heart.
I enjoyed your piece and understand your point of view. I believe that people don't care enough to see what is deep inside a person. The outside appearance is all that matters and that is truly a shame.
Sounds so familiar, I enjoyed your piece. I grew up in NY and miss the fall and winter. Well maybe not so much winter. But Fall is my favorite season. I used to love to watch the leaves turn colors. No mistakes found. I wouldn't change a thing.
hope you understand my comments. Here goes. matagal na ako hindi nakausap nang tagalog. marami nang taon na hindi ako nakasulat o basahin sa tagalog. Nasiyahan ako sa iyong piraso. na gustohan ko talaga nang mga sinabi mo. sana maka basa uli ako nang piraso mo. Good luck.
Yes, I agree we all need to stop and breathe, relax. Look around at nature. Sit and listen to the bird. Sit by the creek and listen to the water. I love your piece. Nature is a wonderful. I remember when my husband and I were first married, we lived on cayman islands and used to sit under the moon and the stars. How I miss those days. Well done. No mistakes found
what a wonderful piece. A tribute to love. you show the good and bad. i felt each drop and each rise of your feelings. very true we do have half a heart until we find the right one to make us whole. i am happy to say i too have found mine. Here's to our beloved other half. You were eloquent i would not change a thing.
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