haha so true running late for work and wondering if the boss is going to get annoyed with you. Although you do capture the situation very well in your poem which is great and it is also easily relateable to readers. Descriptive wording and a great effort.
what a neat poem. Great use of descriptive wording. i like how some if it rhymes and it is easy to imagine your words in real life. It actually looks if you are telling a a tale of woe in a place that is slowing dying and devoid of most aspects of life. Good one
well you must have spent a lot of time on this poem to make it rhyme so well in places. i like how you explain at the end about it being friendship. great use of descriptive words too. Any reason that it is written in caps? Yes you are correct. It is a thesis of a real life.
oh god how embarrassing for you but very funny for everyone else!! You also dealt with losing your top very well and your mates sounded like reasonable people. Good writing too. Well structured and you had me reading writing the end chuckling away at how funny it was.
This is pretty cool. It almost reminds me of a psalm with the first line of each stanza. That aside I like the visualisation as it is easy to picture the words and create imaginary of actually watching a waterfall or more specifically a drop of water as it makes its way from the rain to the water fall.
This was really interesting. I liked the explanation at the bottom. The use of words for visualision is great too.
You certainly nailed the present tense, involving movement and a conclusion in the last stanza. This is really well thought out and great rhyming. Nice.
I liked the short story. It is very descriptive and pulls on the emotional strings as the reader.
The imagery is great too, almost pulling the reader into the story and being a bystander.
There is some tension of suspense of the unknown that comes with self discovery.
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