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Review of Worth Less  
Review by Lonnie
Rated: E | (4.0)
Interesting theme here, that seems to be changing tone as it takes shape! Works for me on multiple levels!
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Review of Beyond the Black  
Review by Lonnie
Rated: E | (4.0)
Intriguing poem that makes one think in different terms and feel in new ways! Great stuff!
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Review of Is it Love?  
Review by Lonnie
Rated: E | (4.0)
An honestly sincere look into what dreaming of love can do to the soul! Very well-penned!
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Review of My New Tenant  
Review by Lonnie
Rated: E | (4.0)
Witty and whimsical, this piece provokes thoughts on several levels, and takes the reader into warm, fuzzy places!
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Review of The Red Room  
Review by Lonnie
Rated: E | (4.0)
Passionate, poetic anger! Something more than just a typical rant, this one speaks volumes about betrayal, bitterness, and eventual revenge! Very powerful and nicely written!
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Review by Lonnie
Rated: E | (4.0)
Unless I miss my guess, this is a poem about a deceased Serviceman, and as a Vietnam veteran, I salute your talented pen!
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Review of If I Stay  
Review by Lonnie
Rated: E | (4.0)
Excellent poem! Nice flow, good word-usage, and bitingly honest! One small typo, last verse, line one, JST I believe was meant to be JUST! This is great work!
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Review of Hidden  
Review by Lonnie
Rated: E | (4.0)
Very honest and truthful poem that puts its message forth in no uncertain terms! Well-written and well-thought-out!
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Review by Lonnie
Rated: E | (4.0)
A colorful and concise poem that spans time and human endeavors with solid honesty! This is one I will remember!
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Review of Rubbish  
Review by Lonnie
Rated: E | (4.0)
Nice take on an old problem! Has excellent flow, imagery, and lots of gritty truth!
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Review of Burning Desire  
Review by Lonnie
Rated: 18+ | (4.0)
Whew! One almost needs a cold shower after reading this passionate piece! It is well put together, has good imagery, and flows along like a whit-water river! Great stuff!
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Review of Revision Too  
Review by Lonnie
Rated: E | (4.0)
Nicely written poem on playing with old school poetry! Has excellent rhyme and meter, while at the same time spoofing same! The flow is very even, making the poem roll effortlessly off the tongue, and it also contains a wonderfully witty use of language! Very good!
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Review of Dead Rose  
Review by Lonnie
Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
Brilliant poetry! Gives new meaning to the old cliche, 'Til Death do us part'! Extremely well-written!
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Review of For What You Are  
Review by Lonnie
Rated: E | (4.0)
Terse and intense, provocative and powerful, full of terrible truth! This is another gem from a talented pen!
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Review of Here's to You  
Review by Lonnie
Rated: E | (4.0)
A difficult subject dealt with very tastefully and tactfully! Makes some very good points as it kicks you in the gut! Nice job!
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Review of Poet’s Block  
Review by Lonnie
Rated: E | (4.0)
Been there, done that, didn't buy the tee-shirt! LOL!! Cute little verse that pretty much tells it like it is when one is feeling empty of ideas! Very cool.
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Review of mirror  
Review by Lonnie
Rated: E | (4.5)
Exceptional piece that deals truthfully with a person coming to grips with their own reality! The reflective aspect of the imagery is very powerful and intense! Great stuff here!
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Review of Night Music  
Review by Lonnie
Rated: E | (4.0)
A very soothing poem that touches one with its simple message and makes you feel warm and cozy!
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Review of Meditation  
Review by Lonnie
Rated: E | (4.5)
One of the best short poems I have seen here! Very powerful despite its brevity! Great job!
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Review of Release  
Review by Lonnie
Rated: E | (4.0)
I wasn't sure where this was going at first, but upon a second read, I believe I get it! Good theme, great imagery! Exceptional work!
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Review of Green Eyes  
Review by Lonnie
Rated: ASR | (4.0)
A truthful, to-the-point piece about a final break-up that is skilfully written and uniquely memorable! It touches one with its down-to-earth language, and simple, yet poignant profundity! This is a quality piece of work and should be acclaimed as such! Nicely done!
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Review of Ode to New Year's  
Review by Lonnie
Rated: E | (4.5)
A beautiful example of structured poetry that bounces off the inner ear with joyful exuberance! Well-worded verses that faithfully reflect the spirit of the poem and the New Year! This gem has excellent flow, good imagery, and an over-all feel of optimism that we all desperately need! Great!
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Review of Reflections  
Review by Lonnie
Rated: E | (3.5)
This piece could have more power and intensity if not quite so convoluted theme-wise! I like the way its put together, but feel it needs some good, solid tweaking to become a more memorable piece of poetry!
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Review of love in reality  
Review by Lonnie
Rated: E | (4.0)
Amen to the sentiment here! Bravely-written piece that pretty much tells it like it is regarding any relationship! Bravo!
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Review of Chalice  
Review by Lonnie
Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
A very intense and poignant piece that packs a delicate yet powerful punch! Nicely penned!
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