You listed groups you donated to, but you forgot my group, which you donated to: "Invalid Item" . I also wanted to thank you for your donation because it helped us to meet our goal of giving a merit badge to zevavrahambn for his birthday.
Each week for the past year, every since Randy Moss was elected President during last year’s Super Bowl and general election, strange new questions have been added to the interview list.The word every should be replaced with ever.
just an interviewer, Jenna’s security clearance isn’t high enough for her to have possession of software for analyzing football statistics, but she know’s of a possible solution.There shouldn't be an apostrophe in the word knows
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I think you all need to add some writingML to your entries. It just looks very monotonous, and it's all one color, with no bolding or underlines.
Perhaps you all might also consider double spacing at the end of a paragraph? It makes it easier to read.
In a poem, you can use much poetic license, but your grammer seems to be very sporatic. You add punctuation in one stanza but not the stanza before it. It has no rhyme or reason. This poem has good content, but its form needs to be reworked.
This piece is so sad, and it touches on a very controversial subject: euthanasia. I like the title... I think it's appropriate and fitting. This piece, although short, said all it really needed to say, and the fact that it was so short conveyed a sense that "Life is short."
There are problems with the text wrapping. There are several places where, in the middle of a sentence, and the middle of the screen, it goes to the next line. It has absolutely no rhyme or reason. I believe it's probably an error in copying and pasting, but it needs to be addressed.
You are a very talented writer, and I am just curious... are you published at all?
I don't think that there is any one singular reason why I write... Perhaps because that's the way God made me? With writing in my soul, and words that flow from my brain to my fingers on the keyboard before I even know I've thought them.
This is so incredibly sweet! A poem and a game! Your boyfriend is very lucky to have such a wonderful girlfriend to write poetry and make love-y dove-y word searches for him. I wish I was so talented that I could do such a wonderful thing for my boyfriend.
This is a great piece, and it is rather humorous. This piece has a lot of grammatical errors where verbs don't agree with their subjects. Reread it aloud, and you might be better able to see the mistakes. Keep up the good work, and WRITE ON!
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You had one typographical error. It's less than $7 a week.
You still made me laugh, though, and I will send you some GPs from the group fund Thank you for your entry in my contest.
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Thank you so much for all of the Gift Points for my reviews. It really makes me feel as if my reviewing efforts are appreciated... and it brings me one step closer to another merit badge for being in the top 100 credited reviewers.
Wow... this story totally caught me by surprise! I thought it was a personal story about you, and was about to write a review saying how sorry I was that that had happened to you, and then, there's a surprise ending...
I also love how the woman doesn't look like a monster in the end, but acts like one... so she's a metaphorical monster.
** Images For Use By Upgraded+ Only ** This looks like it will be very interesting. I look forward to seeing what sorts of items are up for grabs. With regards to your logo, if you had made it in a .gif file instead of a .jpg file, you might have been able to avoid those wavy squiggly lines around the text.
In number four, you have a type, it should read, "... his name is Steve" instead of "... is name is Steve."
As someone whose father is a member of Spongebob Anonymous (he got the whole rollercoaster train to sing the Spongebob Theme Song at Dorney Park last summer), I was grateful for this list of warning signs. He exhibits all of the symptoms.
I think that this is a great "In and Out"... I needed to relax, and found some great tips among the simple pleasures listed here. Most of these simple pleasures don't even go anywhere near that "R" rating though... most are closer to "G" rated.
Great Poem! I don't really like the fact that you capitalize at seemingly random places...
I do love that you made note that you use Canadian spelling, because so many people here tell me I spell things wrong when I spell things the British way, which is very similar to Canadian (if not exactly the same).
This is a really great place to request reviews, but I don't really understand the difference between this Review Request Page and the Shameless Plug Pages. Can you please clarify? Because, I just always assumed that if someone plugged something, they were looking for a review, so why this separate place to request reviews?
I really like the way that you introduce these items in the folder, and I like the fact that you used just a little bit of writingML... it's not over the top.
You're very creative too... I love your work in this folder.
I think that this a wonderfully put together short story. I love everything about it!! It flows extremely well, and it ties up all the loose ends, of whether or not he will invite his parents. Perhaps you can write a sequel saying whether or not his parents decide to show, but even if you didn't, the story would be complete, as is.
Try as I might, I can't seem to get my friends on the writing.com bandwagon... they don't really write so much, but I have gotten many of them to view my port and they have told me that they love what I've written. it's a great confidence builder. I know so many people who are great writers and are too shy to share their work... even in this semi anonymous setting. I have put a link to this site on my webpage, though, and on several of my friend's webpages.
I really appreciate that you value our input and have this place for us to suggest new merit badges and customicons. I think that you're very talented, because the graphics for the merit badges are awesome... they actually look like patches I would sew on my boyscout uniform.
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Each week for the past year, every since Randy Moss was elected President during last year’s Super Bowl and general election, strange new questions have been added to the interview list. The word every should be replaced with ever.
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I love how you encouraged the use of WritingML in reviews. I often, while reviewing, encourage authors to use more WritingML in their items.