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Review of Just a Farmer  
Review by Mary Ann Chidlow
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Oh, how I can relate to the content of this verse.

This is well written and flows so smoothly. It is an easy read. You tell the story well.

Please do not give up on your writing. I see much potential in this. I will have to go see what else is in your portfolio.
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Review by Mary Ann Chidlow
Rated: E | (4.5)
I love learning about new poem forms. Thank you for explaining this.

I read the explanation after I read the poem. The poem was so easy to read. It just flowed right along. At first, I wondered if it was Native American inspired.

I see Psalm 23 in it. Thank you for sharing this. It was a joy to read.
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Review by Mary Ann Chidlow
Rated: E | (4.0)
Oh, how cute and what a very good lesson in wisdom.

Nonnie - I grinned all the way through this. It was such fun to read. Thank you for writing it.

It flows so well. I never wanted to quic reading because I wanted to know where the conversation was going.

I am so glad I read this.
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Review by Mary Ann Chidlow
Rated: E | (4.5)
Ahhhhhhh - Reality. And, yet so sweet. The grass is not always greener on the other side of the tracks.

I enjoyed reading this and had no trouble following it. It flowed so well with no breaks.

What an encouraging read first thing in the morning.

Thank you for sharing this.
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Review of Dreams  
Review by Mary Ann Chidlow
Rated: E | (4.0)
This is so well written. By the time I got to the second scenario, I had forgotten what the title was and was so engrossed in the story. I was so relieved to find the outcome of being under water. What a pleasure to find that it was just a dream.

I look forward to reading more of your writing.
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Review of RELATIONSHIPS  
Review by Mary Ann Chidlow
Rated: E | (4.0)
Oh, where do I start?

This flows so well. It read so easily. I found no spelling or grammar errors to break the flow.

The concepts are very thought provoking and I agree with all you have to say. Sometimes, it is hard to let go of a friendship you really want. But, if you do, you never know who is just right around the corner.

Thank you for sharing this.
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Review by Mary Ann Chidlow
Rated: E | (4.0)
I was wondering why you left Hitler off. I hope it was because you thought it would just be a run away for him.

I read the "other" but it did not reguister until after I had voted. I should not answer these things when I am not yet awake. LOL

A very thought provoking choice. I need to go back and read some of my history now. I don't remember who two of these people are.
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Review by Mary Ann Chidlow
Rated: E | (4.0)
I must admit that I knew what the outcome of the shrimp would be. I have had salt water tanks in the past and look forward to another one very soon. They are such a joy.

How wonderfully you wove the the wonder of the shrimp into letting us know that better times are coming for those of us who believe in Jesus.

It is nice and short and to the point - a good thing for those with not much time for reading.

I look forward to reading more of your writing.

Thank you for sharing this.
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Review by Mary Ann Chidlow
Rated: E | (4.5)
How wonderful. This flows so well even though it is about several different people. It held my interst as I wanted to know more and more about your wonderful family. They show so much courage.

I found no spelling or punctuation errors and was such a joy to read.

Thank you for sharing this with us.
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Review by Mary Ann Chidlow
Rated: E | (4.5)
What a wonderful concept.

This is so well written. It flowed so well as I read it with no breaks. That makes it such a joy to read.

I never had to reread anything to make sure I understood what you meant. It is well written - clear and easy to understand.

Thank you for sharing it.
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Review of BUMPER STICKERS.  
Review by Mary Ann Chidlow
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
What fun it was to find this. I knew I was in for a treat. I love bumper stickers that are funny or fun to read.

I love the ones about such things as invisible ink, also. However, after I have considered it long enough I can give myself a headache. Then it is time to go find the fun ones.

This si so well written and comvers so muh in such a small space. Thank you for sharing it.
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Review by Mary Ann Chidlow
Rated: E | (5.0)
Of course, I want to read more about Fred. I am a cat lover, too. I am feeding too many right now, but, only one is mine.

It is fun to read about other's cats - especially, when it is as written as well as this is. I laughed all the way through it. They are such fun.
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Review by Mary Ann Chidlow
Rated: E | (5.0)
I am so glad to see this poll.

Except for two times when I was new, I have never rated only. I did not mean to those two times but somehow it slipped through without the review. I still don't know how I did ntoat. LOL

I would encourage everyone to review. It helps the writer most of the time.
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Review by Mary Ann Chidlow
Rated: E | (4.5)
Oh, what a tease. I have been thinking all day long of ordering some chocolate and then I found this. Now, I am sunk. I will be ordering just as soon as I am through with this.

This was such fun to read. I could taste each piece as she bit into it.It is very well written and easy to read.

Thank you for sharing it. now, I am off to the See's Candy site. LOL
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Review of Enough  
Review by Mary Ann Chidlow
Rated: E | (4.5)
This is so well written. I found no spelling or grammar errors.

The flow of the verse is faultless and you express yourself so well.

I agree with you. Many have these feelings and don't know that others do, too. Thanks for letting them know they are not the only one.
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Review of Postcard  
Review by Mary Ann Chidlow
Rated: E | (4.5)
I like this but before I get started, let me tell you that the first word on the next to the last line should be her not he.

Now, I was intrigued and could not have laid this down no matter how long it was. It was just the right length for me.

This is the kind of writing that I enjoy. Thank you for writing it.
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Review of Most Grateful Son  
Review by Mary Ann Chidlow
Rated: E | (5.0)
I give you a five because I find nothing wrong and the content is so special. I pray everyone reads it. It would be wonderful if everyone had such a life.

I love the way it flows The transition was so smooth. It did not slow my reading down at all.

Thank you for sharing this. It was a pleasure to read.
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Review of Images and sigs  
Review by Mary Ann Chidlow
Rated: E | (5.0)
I looked at several of your images. I love the variety and so many are the types of things I love.

I love the kitty cat with the crown. He looks unimpressed by it all. Just like a cat.

You images of the wise men and the Nativity are so pretty.

Thank you for sharing these. I enjoyed them.
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Review of Invisible again  
Review by Mary Ann Chidlow
Rated: E | (4.0)
Oh, my goodness. How well you describe that feeling. I understand it so well.

This is well written and flows so well.

I do like that after all the despair that you have a plan to put it all back together and move forward. Sometimes, we have to move on even though broken.

Thank you for sharing this. I hope those who need it, find it.
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Review of Chocolate Kisses  
Review by Mary Ann Chidlow
Rated: E | (4.5)
Ah, such sweet memories this brings back. I had a grandmother like this. You could have been talking about her.

This is so well written and easy to follow. It flowed all the way through.

Thank you for sharing your memories. It brightened my day as it reminded me of mine.
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Review of Tomorrow  
Review by Mary Ann Chidlow
Rated: E | (4.0)
A very good start with poetry. I enjoyed this and it is very true and to the point.

It is easy to read and flows very well. I found nothing out of cadence that made me stop and have to pick it up.

Thank you for writing this and sharing it . I will be back to read more of your writing.
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Review by Mary Ann Chidlow
Rated: E | (4.5)
Bravo! I am so glad you shared this.

As I read it, I felt like I was right there. I was sure you were living it. It is very well written.

Even in poetry, you seemed to capture it all and it flowed so well.

Thank you for sharing it. I think it is something that needed to be written.
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Review of Somebody's Cat  
Review by Mary Ann Chidlow
Rated: E | (5.0)
Waht a wonderful story and so well written. I have cats both mine and strays, also. This was such fun to read.

One of mine comes and goes like that and I worry until he shows back up. I have been gone several days and came back yesterday. I have not seen him yet.

Thank you for writing this. It was such fun to read.
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Review of Jimmy  
Review by Mary Ann Chidlow
Rated: E | (5.0)
This is so well written. I felt like I was right there.

What a wonderful brother you had and what a wonderful way to remmeber him and share him with others. I hope it will encourage others to be like-minded.

Thank you for sharing this memory.
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Review of Twas the night  
Review by Mary Ann Chidlow
Rated: E | (4.0)
How simple and yet how profound. I think you covered it all.

This was such fun to read. It was an easy read as it flowed very well. There were not surprises. Everything rhumed where it was supposed to.

I found no errors spelling, grammar or punctuation.

Thank you for sharing this. It was such a joy to find.
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