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Review of Trust Me  
Review by Mary Ann Chidlow
Rated: E | (4.5)
How true, how true.

This sounds so like something I would go through before I finally catch on and trust Him.

This is so well written. It was easy to follow and flowed so nicely.

I could easily see the steps you were going through to get to the answer - the one I was hoping you would get to.

Thank you for writing this.
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Review by Mary Ann Chidlow
Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
How depressing, but how true.

As one reads it, it seems so confusing and too much going on - that is, unless you have been through it.

This is so well written and so true to life. Those who do not suffer from depression may be able to get a glimpse of it from this. It is so involved to try to explain.

Thank you for writing this.
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Review by Mary Ann Chidlow
Rated: E | (5.0)
I have not looked at the links but am so glad to find some more to check on to see if they will help me with my writing.

I look forward to looking at the POV ones.

And, the one for query letters will be helpful. I struggle with that.

Thank you for sharing these.
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Review by Mary Ann Chidlow
Rated: E | (4.5)
I guess I am going to spend the next little while reading the rest of this. You have me hooked.

It is written so well and the story flows so smoothly. I never found myself going back to try to follow it again.

Thank you for writing it. I am going to have an enjoyalbe afternoon.
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Review of Sick of Hiding  
Review by Mary Ann Chidlow
Rated: E | (4.0)
What an important message you have managed to tell in such a few short words. I pray others will find the message in this easy to understand verse.

This is so well written and flows so well. Finding no spelling or grammar errors was such a joy.

Thank you fir writing and sharing this with us.
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Review by Mary Ann Chidlow
Rated: E | (4.5)
I have no contact with autistic children but what I have read and seen on educational t.v. channels, I think you have captured it and captured it very well. It gives one a lot to think about.

Your writing is so clear and easy to follow. The poetry flows effortlessly.

Thank you for sharing this with us.
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Review of Reviewer's Club  
Review by Mary Ann Chidlow
Rated: E | (5.0)
I looked at your portfolio and I love the fact that you are here to support others in their writing. Thank you very much. The world needs more people like you.

I love the fact that you are encouraging others to review others as with this contest.
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Review by Mary Ann Chidlow
Rated: E | (5.0)
This is wonderful. I thought this was for little ones until I saw the size of some of the words. Then, I did not feel so silly enjoying it to the maximum degree. LOL

What a delightful play on words and it flows so effortlessly. Thank you for sharing it with us.
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Review of Small Indulgences  
Review by Mary Ann Chidlow
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
When I saw it was a monologue, I had to read it.

It is very good. It flows so well. I find no spelling, word usage or punctuation errors.

I felt like I was right there with them wishing I could tell her not to mail it. She just complicated so many lives.

It is very well written
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Review by Mary Ann Chidlow
Rated: E | (4.0)
First stanza -second line: "It" should be "It's".

This was such fun to read.

It flowed so well and other than that one problem, I found no grammar errors.

I hope someone in your family is writing these memories down. I wish I had started much earlier. They are precious memories now.
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Review of Alanna Ember  
Review by Mary Ann Chidlow
Rated: E | (5.0)
How polished for a "newbie".

I pictured someone I know who fits this as I read it. It really came alive for me. She is this very picture and yet just as gracious as she can be.

I found no spelling or grammar errors. This was a joy to read.

Thank you for writing it and sharing it with us.
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Review of Just Desserts  
Review by Mary Ann Chidlow
Rated: E | (4.5)
Oh, how wonderful. I would love for all children to read this. It does seem a bit long but with pictures I suspect it would be fine for the younger ones.

What a wonderful message.

It flowed so well and I found no errors in grammar.

Thank you for sharing this. I really enjoyed it.
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Review by Mary Ann Chidlow
Rated: E | (5.0)
As I read this, I kept thinking "She has been to my beach". Then I remembered you live up the coast from me.

I will be spending two weeks at St. Pete Beach at the end of August and this poem is just making me wish the time would come much quicker.

I love the beach and you make it come alive.

Thank you for sharing this.
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Review of Poem's  
Review by Mary Ann Chidlow
Rated: E | (4.0)
I can tell you love that baby. This was so uplifting to read.

You express yourself so well to be a "newbie".

It will be fun to read more as you add to your portfolio.

It was refreshing to find no spelling errors.

Thank you for sharing this with us. I look forward to more.
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Review by Mary Ann Chidlow
Rated: E | (5.0)
Wow! Isn't He awesome?

Thank you for sharing this. It so follows so much of what I want others to understand. God works in mysterious ways. And, he takes such good care of us.

I am in awe. We serve such a wonderful God. Who else would share His Son for our benefit.

I am truly blessed by this.
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Review of True Worship  
Review by Mary Ann Chidlow
Rated: E | (5.0)
Oh, how joyous! What praise. I think this is what God wants to hear. As I read, it expressed what I want to say. To me, this is prefect.

As I read, it flowed. I kept waiting for what you would express next. I found no spelling or grammar errors.

Thank you for sharing this with us.
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Review of Harmony  
Review by Mary Ann Chidlow
Rated: E | (4.0)
Oh, I agree. Music can transport your thoughts any place. That's freedom to me.

This flows from thought to thought effortlessly. I never had to stop and go off in another direction.

I sing and play insturments so I can identify with this.

Thank you for writing this. It was such fun to read.
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Review of THANK YOU, GOD  
Review by Mary Ann Chidlow
Rated: E | (5.0)
I love this. It can be prayed right back to God as a prayer just as it is. It covers just about everything.

I love that your writing was pointed out to me. It is such a blessing.

It flows so easily and is such a joy to read. I found myself reading right through it.

Thank you for writing this and sharing it with us.
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Review of Sinner's Prayer  
Review by Mary Ann Chidlow
Rated: E | (5.0)
This is very well written. I found no spelling or grammar errors and it flows so well. I never lost my chain of thought.

I learned things about the mining community that I did not know. I did not realize that it was not easy to become a miner.

Thank you for writing this.
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Review of Glory  
Review by Mary Ann Chidlow
Rated: E | (5.0)
As I read I kept on saying give me nore. And, you did. This is a beautiful poem and expresses so many truths.

It flows so well and I did not see any errors. I thought I saw one but when I checked back, I could not find it.

Thank you for sharing this. It was a blessing for me.
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Review of The Flight And...  
Review by Mary Ann Chidlow
Rated: E | (4.5)
I am not familiar with Icarus so I may have totally missed the whole idea from this poem.

With that said, it caught my attention right away. The first verse just flowed so that I was hooked. The second verse was even better. It is so easy to read as it just flows.

I had a good time with this. It is making me want to go find out who Icarus is.
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Review by Mary Ann Chidlow
Rated: E | (5.0)
Oh, how wonderful. Did you write this for me? I read it as a prayer and sang it as a song of hope.

I found no errors and it flows so easily from verse to verse.

What a joy to read this and I will be back to read it again.

Thank you so much for sharing this. It blessed me
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Review of Distracted  
Review by Mary Ann Chidlow
Rated: E | (4.5)
Thank you for writing this. If we are aware of our distractions, maybe they will not be. And, yet, some distractions take us back when. Soem, give us ideas of what we might write about next.

Thsi is well written and flows so well.

I really enjoyed reading it.
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Review of Them  
Review by Mary Ann Chidlow
Rated: E | (4.0)
Oh, if those who are allowing someone else to run their life would just read this.

I found it for the most part easy to read and follow. I would take the second line in the fourth verse and turn it into two. To me, it is cumbersome to read. I kept waiting for it to end.

Thank you for writing this.
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Review of Waves  
Review by Mary Ann Chidlow
Rated: E | (4.0)
As I am dealing with this tropical storm, this sounds familiar. LOL

I like this. I cold follow it very easily. I love the beach and your writing made me wish I was there.

It flows so nicely and is so easy to follow.

Thank you so much for sharing this. I enjoyed it.
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