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Review by Deviously Brazen
Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
Although this piece is very sad, I really enjoyed it. It is thought provoking and heart felt.

Thank you for sharing it.
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Review by Deviously Brazen
Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
I really enjoyed this piece. I loved the word flow! I only saw two things.

In line two I think "it's" should be "its"
and in line ten there needs to be a space between "plot,not".

Other than that, I thought it was wonderful! I look forward to reading more of your work.
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Review of I pine  
Review by Deviously Brazen
Rated: E | (4.0)
This is a wonderful piece. I feel the emotion that lies behind it. The only thing I feel that could be improved is the use of the word "but". It is such a hard word for the softness of this piece.

My favorite from this stanza is:

I know
a lifetime together means
countless sacrifices and pardons.
But tell me, sweetheart, do we ever find
thornless shrubs of roses, in the gardens?

Fantastic write!

~Miss D.
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Review of Vast Moonrise  
Review by Deviously Brazen
Rated: E | (5.0)
You already know how much I love this piece... nothing else needs to be said. *Wink*
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Review of Lost My Light  
Review by Deviously Brazen
Rated: E | (4.5)
How do you do it? I loved it! But then, what else is new?
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Review of El Soñador  
Review by Deviously Brazen
Rated: E | (5.0)
Everything I have read of yours is wonderful. You have a beautiful way with words that touchs my soul. Fantastic write!

Miss D.

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Review by Deviously Brazen
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
What a sweet tale. If only it worked out this way... well maybe it does for some... and I just haven't found it yet.

Either way, I really enjoyed this write.

Miss D.
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Review of People are People  
Review by Deviously Brazen
Rated: E | (5.0)
Very cute children’s story! In some parts it reminded me of the rhyme in Green Eggs and Ham.

Good luck getting this published. It's great!

Miss D.
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Review of Only Human  
Review by Deviously Brazen
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
This is a very well written peice that I truly enjoyed. Thank you for sharing it.

Your fellow poet... Miss D.
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Review of Breathless  
Review by Deviously Brazen
Rated: E | (5.0)
This is absolutely beautiful and brought tears to my eyes. The love you feel and/or felt when you wrote this is incredible. What a fantastic write! It has been awhile since I have read something with such emotion behind it and I have to say you captured it perfectly! Wow!

One thing I wanted to point out though is you are missing a space between "neverthought" in the ninth line of your piece.

Thank you so much for sharing this! It is nice to know that the words you captured so well exists in this world.

Best of luck to you... Miss D.
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Review of Empty Tomb  
Review by Deviously Brazen
Rated: E | (5.0)
I am new to this site and I have to say, this peice is absolutely splendid! I love it. I look forward to reading more your work!

Happy New Year!

Miss D.
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Review of Favorite Sport?  
Review by Deviously Brazen
Rated: E | (5.0)
I'm giving you a 5 because you picked football. *Wink* I love football! I am a huge GB fan. Which is your team of choice?

Miss D.

P.S. Can you believe there are only 8 voted for football?!?!?! I thought everyone loved it. *Wink*
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Review of A Vile Visitor  
Review by Deviously Brazen
Rated: ASR | (4.0)
Very well written!
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