Review To: Carol Marsella
Reviewed by: pnalayab
Date: 09-29-07
Rating: 5.0
Item title: A MADISON COUNTY EVENT
I.D. #: 1153533
Review Follows:
Dear Carol,
PERSONAL NOTE: Covered bridges are favorite historical structures of mine, and those who know me well, like writeartista, knew that I would find this article an interesting read. Therefore, writeartista recommended to me (and others) that I read this. Note the date when I wrote this review. I forgot to send it to you, and I just found it now. Well, better late than never, as they say.
I am writing this little intro with a painting of Indiana's most famous Bridgetown covered bridge, which crosses over the mill pond created by a mill dam. I bought this painting years ago during a tour of Brown County Indiana in the fall.
It's not only the subject of the Bridges of Madison County in Iowa that writeartista thought I would find worth reading, but the friendship of two people through the end and beyond. Writeartista and I have become very good friends, not only because we share the same cultural heritage, but because of many other things that find two people connected spiritually. Here at WDC, this type of friendship seems to be happening more and more. Through my novel about my experiences with breast cancer, I have found many caring people, and some of them have become my friends--virtually, of course. But someday, I hope to meet some of them in person.
I digress. Sorry, back to your story. . .
My overall thoughts
About the plot: This is a story about an enviable true friendship, laced with practical jokes, between two literary women. The ending presents a sad twist that is unexpected. But overall, a thoroughly enjoyable story to read, and I would recommend it to anyone, especially women.
About the characters: The two women are three-dimensional in their presentation. No one would ever say that they’re not believable characters, not only because this is biographical, but because you, the author, has done a terrific job in making them breathe on paper.
About the language/dialogue: Your grammar is excellent. I observed virtually no error whatsoever. Your spelling and punctuations are dead on. This is written in essay format so there’s hardly any dialogue to comment on its believability.
My favorite part: It’s hard to choose because I like the whole story. But this part made me think of myself when I’m about to indulge into a solitary read. “I turned off the phone and the computer, inserted hours of Bach into the CD player, picked up my favorite fuzzy throw, and made my way to the sanctity of my favorite chair for a reader’s version of an afternoon delight.”
My least favorite part: How sometimes your sentences tend to run on, which makes me pause and think hard. (We don’t want that, right?)
My technical suggestions or comments: About NATIONAL GEOGRAPHIC (sic). I had to stop and think whether names of periodicals, like National Geographic need to be all-caps, as you’ve typed here. I don’t think so, do they?
My final comment: This is a thoroughly enjoyable read. I look forward to reading more of your work. Keep writing, and when you find the time, I’d appreciate a similar visit from you.
Write on.
P.S. Since I read this the first time, you've inevitably changed and added a few things, making some of my comments/suggestions moot. I like the part about visiting the covered bridges in Lancaster, PA, and thought about Connie. I'd like to go back to Brown Country, Indiana someday. It's beautiful this time of year there. I've never seen autumn as vibrant anywhere.
You've also added an appreciation note to writeartista for giving you a great review. I don't think she knows about this acknowledgment from you. I'll let her know.
Orientpearl
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