I like that it tells you a story. I didn't understand it though. What the four words supposed to be used for? I thought it might be something to do with the freedom of The Untied States, then I though probably not. My apologies for not understanding. It was beautifully written.
I have to partly agree with you. I do think with can get the best moments in the fast times, but also in the slow times. The times where we are with those we love. The slow moments that we cherish as we get older.
I love your way with words. I like how I can picture what you write in my head as well. I also like how it doesn't rhyme. Keep it up. You are an excellent writer and I look forward to reviewing you again.
Not bad. I take it if I read it correctly. This is a story about a man thinking about a lost long ago, right? Or is it about a recent love? either way I believe that you got the feelings that you MC feels accurate, Ny sister said that she like the fact that you used matcha tea in your story.
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