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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello,

I liked how this poem was written. Good flowing lines. Good rhymes and rhythm. I really liked how this piece unravelled at the end, it was a lovely surprise. A well expressed piece of writing and had great meaning. I enjoyed reading this work through. Good work and write on!!!

Spiritual Dawning

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Review of Awardicon Envy  
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Hello,

I thought this piece from you was great, it made me smile. Great rhymes, great flowing lines. I see you got your awardicon for this poem, good work. The originality of the poem was superior. I have not read a piece with this kind of humor in it. Good work and write on!!!

Spiritual Dawning

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Review of Inkwell  
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Hello,

I thought you expressed yourself so very well here. The dark side to this poem was great. I also liked how you ended the poem. The last line was good. I enjoyed reading this poem through. The poem was well executed and presented. Good work and write on!!!

Spiritual Dawning

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Review of Death Beckoned  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello,

I thought your poem here was great. I loved the journey you undertook. There was a triumphant feeling across me as I read this through. You managed to say a lot in just a few lines. I enjoyed reading this through. I liked the length of the poem too, it kept my attention levels high. Good work, write on!!!

Spiritual Dawning

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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
~SilverMoon~

This was a dramatic occassion for you all. Nicely written and conveyed. I am glad you all made it home. Experiences like this can stay with us for many years and can change the future. A real-life situation here made this enjoyable to read through. I am glad it all ended well. Thank you for sharing this story.

Spiritual Dawning

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Review of Especially Sweet  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
PiriPica

Here is a review to celebrate your promotion to YELLOW case.

I thought this poem was lovely. There was such a beautiful flow to each word and line. The poetic power was lovely. There was also a lot of innocense coming from each line. You are a great little writer. This poem left me wanting to read more and more of this. It was very addictive. Good work and write on!!!

Spiritual Dawning

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Review of Intertwined  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Amethyst Angel🌸📝🪽

Here is a review to celebrate your promotion to YELLOW case.

I thought the rhymes in this piece were perfect, they helped the flow of the poem very well. There was lots of positivity here and much love. I felt humbled as I read this through. Great presentation and looks good centered on the page. You mentioned how the love and togetherness can see you both through the darkness, this summed love up very well. I enjoyed reading and reviewing your poem. Good work.

Spiritual Dawning

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Review of Ocean Fling  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
MJones

I thought your poem here was great, I really enjoyed reading it through. The theme was unique and inviting. I loved the title and also loved the humorous lines. There was a lovely sense of happiness over me as I read this through. Good writing and well done...

Spiritual Dawning

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Review of Am I...  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
~SilverMoon~

I thought this was a lovely little poem. So cute the way you wrote this out. Nice rolling rhymes, great flow and rhythm. The affection was clear and the love and desire was evident here. A simple yet effective poem, and spoke to my heart. I felt the love you have for this person. No errors and punctuation errors found. Cute writing. Well done!!!

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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
~SilverMoon~

This was a very precise item indeed, very detailed. We all know for lovers to be at their best and for love to thrive it needs to be a two-way street. Give and recieve without question. Love lost has to be the most dangerous experience one can go through. It can lead to suicide in the extreme. On the other hand, love found is the highest of all emotions. The world becomes brighter.

After reading your item and thinking about it, it is nice not to be too deep in love. This way the heart is safe but on the flip side, also alone.

Are there any winners?

Spiritual Dawning
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Review of A Mother's Love  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Jeanette

This was a beauitful piece of writing. There was great imagery coming from the words and lines. You managed to make me feel emotional as I read this through. The beauty of little children sleeping was well captured here in this poem. A moving piece of writing. Great work.

Spiritual Dawning

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Review of Autumn Symphony  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Grace Anne

This is another beautiful piece of writing from you. The poetic meaning of this poem was lavish. You wrote this out perfectly. You also captured the feel of autumn very well. I see you are new here, I hope you decide to stay and post more delightful pieces. Great writing and keep going.

Spiritual Dawning

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Review of A Blessing  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Grace Anne

I thought your writing here was beautifully executed. Lovely poetic power in each line. There was a true blessing in this poem. Great work. There was also a Godly sway in this poem, an angelical feeling. Good flowing rhythm in your writing, nice flowing lines. I loved it all.

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Review of Death, Stay Away  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Pumpkin

In this poem, you managed to make me think about my own passing and I found it scary. I never thought of writing about this subject, I guess it could be revealing to the author themselves. Nice writing style used here in your poem. I found the poem to be quite original by theme. Good work and write on!!!

Spiritual Dawning

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Review of Town Of My Youth  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Toni S

I related very well to your poem here, it was exactly the same for me when I was young. Nice flowing rhythm, nice feelings about this work. I have written about the younger days too, it makes great poetry. You did a fine job here. Good work.

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Review of The King of Kings  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
intuey GoT Survivor!

Just popped in for a bit. I picked this poem because of the picture you used as the cover. The hand being held out called to me. The poems words were superb, strong, noble and powerful. The grace of the higher power was evident here. The positivity which came with this piece was beautiful. Well presented on the page. I enjoyed the lovely feel of this poem. Great work.

Spiritual Dawning

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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
VictoriaMcCullough

Well presented on the page, looks great. I liked the poetic sway to this piece. The romantic power was great. There was good imagery coming from the words and lines. I really liked the last two lines, they summed the sweetness of the poem up really well. Good work and write on!!!

Spiritual Dawning

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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Sum1

I read this through because the title was very attractive to me. I enjoyed this piece from you. There was good imagery coming from the story you told. The ending was special and inspired me to think. I think you took a piece of truth from a real veteran, I mean, this poem could easily be a true story. It was very real to me. Great work.

Spiritual Dawning

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Review of Nothing is wrong!  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello...

I liked the depth of your writing here in this piece. I feel this came from the heart when you wrote it out. I also liked the philosophy here. The voice in our heads can be very deep sometimes and lead us astray. I am guessing this is a letter to yourself? I related to it quite well.

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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello...

Great rhyme and flow to your poem here. The flow was almost musical and it was very joyful. Lovely descriptive words and lines. I do believe special things happen in summers evening, where the sun sets with love for all. I enjoyed reading your poem through. Good work.

Spiritual Dawning

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Review of Play Place  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello..

I thought your poem here was very original by theme. I liked the way you ended this writing, you made me smile. The imagery coming from your words and lines was great. A nice refreshing piece of work from you. The title was fitting for the poem. Nice work and write on!!!

Spiritual Dawning

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Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
Hello...

I love your positivity here in this writing. Your mindset is always so happy and vibrant. I believe in miracles too. I think people could learn from you how to conduct themselves. A positive outlook is always a good start. Yes, writing.com is an awesome website for writers.

Spiritual Dawning

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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello..

After reading this through, I felt an immense sense of freedom. I loved your carefree attitude here. There was great imagery coming from this little poem. It seems like you lived your younger years to the fullest. An interesting story to write about. I enjoyed it all.

Spiritual Dawning

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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello...

I thought your writing here was great, I was gripped to every word and line. Your grammar and story telling was good. You painted a lovely picture with your words. The philosophy was indeed special. The length of the story was inviting and kept my attention levels up high. I enjoyed reading this work through.

Spiritual Dawning

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Review of My Soul is Fire  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello...

Wow, this was an amazing piece of writing. I loved the flow and the rhymes were great. A lavish feel to this poem. This writing cannot be improved, it is perfect the way it is. It sounds like we have the same souls, vibrant, deep, powerful. I loved the poetic sway about this poem. It was beautiful to read through. Great work and write on!!!

Spiritual Dawning

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