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Great font used here, nice effect centered on the page. Nice word crafting, nice rhythm too. A little darker than I am used to but still a great read. The title was very fitting for the poems words and lines. I was gripped from start to finish. Nice writing.
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Lovely rhymes here, nice flowing rhythm too. I enjoyed the poetic power coming from each line. To me there was good imagery coming from the story. This was well written and executed. Nice writing, I enjoyed every word and line. Write on!!
I hope the anger and issues have passed since posting this rant. You expressed yourself very well and it sounded like you were at the end of your patience. This is what writing is all about, expressing, venting, harnessing feelings and thoughts. Nice work and write on!!
Great rhymes and great rhythm to this piece from you. A simple yet effective poem. I really liked the sweet nature of each line. I also liked the positive theme here. Nice sized poem keeping my attention levels up high. An enjoyable read, thank you.
Aww. I thought this piece from you was very emotional and powerful to me. I loved the flowing rhymes and rhythm. You expressed yourself so very well here. This was very well written by you. I really enjoyed the emotional ride you gave me here. Thank you for writing such a beauty.
I thought this piece of writing from you was beautiful. Summing up your surroundings so very well. There was an air of freedom in this piece. Great imagery came from each line. Nicely presented on the page. The poetic power here was great, beautiful and loving. Good work and write on !!
I thought this poem from you was unique and powerful. Such a lovely piece of writing. I also found it emotional to read through. The words and lines all spoke of great love and friendship. Whoever you wrote this for should read it through. It was a lovely item to read. Thank you and write on!!
I thought you expressed yourself very well here. Nice flowing lines and words. The writing had a lot of meaning to me. I found no way to improve the item, it is fine the way it is. A good length for a poem, not too long and not too short. Nice work and write on!!
I thought your little poem here was special. You summed up the loss of a pet very well. You also expressed your feelings very clearly indeed. The picture made the writing even more emotional for me. Nice presentation, centered on the page. I enjoyed reading this through. Thank you. Write on!!
Aww, this piece from you was very sweet and direct. The flow was good, the rhythm was good too. A simple smile goes a long way in life. I liked the positivity here in this poem. I found no errors and no way of improving the item. It was a nice, special read. Thank you for sharing this lovely poem here. Write on!!
I thought your poem here was very well expressed. A simple message for the reader. I liked the title, it drew me in to the poem. No errors found and no way of improving the item. I liked the length of the poem, it kept my attention levels up high. A good all-round piece from you.
I thought your little item here was great, powerful and rewarding. Sad though it seems, there was a lot of positivity to come from the words and lines. A heart-felt piece of writing. I found it emotional to read through. Great size of a poem, it kept my attention levels up high. Great writing, well done.
I really enjoyed the romantic power of this small piece. To know it is about a real relationship is even more poetic. I liked the length of the item, it managed to say so much more. I am sorry for your loss, God Bless!
A nice simple message of love and flowering feelings. Great writing as usual.
I thought your item here was very simple to read through. I liked the positive attitude towards the doggie. I think this poem is good for children to read through. The imagery and feel of the poem was of joy and fun. Nice rhythm too. Nice work and write on!!!
I thought your little poem here was very sweet and inspiring. I am touched by your words and the meaning of this poem. You managed to say so much in just a few lines. I think you spoke for many people here with your words. Good work and write on!!!
I enjoyed reading this through. I really liked the picture at the bottom of the writing. I could imagine a banquet of food, dancing and embraces. This fantasy poem was uplifting and inspiring. What a lovely world you created here in these words and lines. Great work and write on!!
Nice expressions here. A dark subject turned into light by the poetic power of your words. I often feel this way too and writing helps the mind feel easy. I liked the length of this piece, it kept my attention levels up high. You managed to say a lot in just a few lines. Nice work.
A great story here. I related well to what you had written down. It is true, life does operate on many different levels, levels that some people are not aware of. It could be the spiritual world pushing you both together. Dreams and day dreams are powerful too. Anything can happen in the dream state of mind. Nice work.
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