I enjoyed reading this through. I liked the angle in which you wrote this out. The philosophy was good. Again, nice word crafting, nice flowing lines. I am glad you are writing again. I found no way to improve your item here, it was decent enough as it is. Good work and write on!!
I thought you expressed yourself very well here. You wrote of a love that has little reward or return. This must be very annoying. Good word crafting, good flowing lines. A sad theme but was still very effective. I enjoyed reading this through. Nice work and write on!
I liked the flowing lines here from you. I couldn't help but feel sad as I read this through. To me there was an air of emotions and feelings. I like how you said in the preview, that you're going home to heaven, I thought this set up the poem very well. A lovely poem to read through. Good work and write on!!
I thought your little poem here was cute and very emotional to me. A nicely expressed piece of writing. You bared your feelings for all to show. Nice length of a poem, keeping the readers attention high. You managed to say a lot in just a few lines. Nice work and write on !!
Great writing from you here. I loved the factual power of this item. Great imagery came from the words and lines. Your philosophy was vivid yet so true. You said so much in just a few lines. I really enjoyed this writing. Good work and write on!!
I almost cried at the emotions in this poem from you. I think you spoke for all animal lovers here and those who have lost their pets. A simple yet effective item. A simple and inviting title, matching the items words. Nice emotional writing. Good work.
I liked this little piece from you. The theme gave me good imagery of a mother elephant. A sweet and effective poem. The title was simple and matched the writing well. I enjoyed reading this through. I am not familiar with the form you used but it worked anyway. Good work and write on!!
I liked this item from you here. It was well written and displayed. The romantic power here was inviting and strong. Nice imagery came from the words and lines. A nice poetic sway in this piece. I liked the length, it kept my attention levels up high. Good work and write on!!
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Nice expressive tone to this writing. A deep and powerful poem. A good length for a poem, keeping my attention levels up high. I liked the title, so simple and effective. It seems as though you are running from something here. Good work and write on!!
I liked this romantic acrostic from you. It was sweetly written and displayed. A true love that has lasted many decades. I enjoyed reading this through. The title was simple yet effective. You managed to say a lot in just a few lines. Great work and write on!!
Nicely written and displayed on the page. This was a very nice accolade for your friend indeed. I enjoyed the positivity that came along with the poem. Birthdays are special and writing a poem for her is the best way to celebrate and show respect. Good work and write on!!
I liked this item from you. It was a good read through out. A loving piece and a great feeling came over me as I read this through. Good presentation, it looks good on the page. A powerful piece to write. Nice work, good theme and well written. Write on!!
I really liked this form and the way you executed this writing. It was a lovely read. The theme was a little sad but I still enjoyed the read. Nice length for a poem, keeping my attention levels up high. You did a fine job here. Good work and write on!!
I thought this was a lovely little poem from you. Written very well with a lot of care. There was a sweetness about this poem here. There was plenty of rewarding, loving quotes here. I really enjoyed reading this acrostic through. Nice work and write on!!
I looked the word up in the dictionary and found that you used the word very well. Great flowing structure and good rhythm here. I thought this was very clever of you to write this out the way you did. As I read this through, there was a nice feeling over me. Good work and write on!!
I liked this little poem from you. I thought it was written very cutely. Nice thoughts and nice writing here. You expressed yourself very clearly. I liked the poetic power of each line you wrote. I enjoyed reading and reviewing your poem. There was a nice feeling over me as I read this through. Good work and write on!!
I thought your poem here was lovely. The romance was great and powerful. Nicely written, nice flow and good rhythm. A good length for a poem, it kept my attention levels up high. The title was very romantic. I liked the poem centered on the age, it looks good this way. Overall, good work and write on!!
I thought your writing here was great and rewarding to me. I liked the way you wrote this out. Your writing style here was good. I couldn't help but feel sad for the woman in your poem. Nice romantic sway to this writing too. Good presentation and nice font used. Good work and write on!!
A nice length for a poem, it kept my attention levels up high. I thought this poem was lovely and refreshing to read through. A simple theme. Nice imagery came off the words and lines here. I enjoyed reading this through. I found no errors and no way of improving the item. Good work and write on!!
I liked the darkness in this piece from you. Nice flow, good rhythm. I have never written a dark piece like this. There was good imagery coming from the words and lines. You crafted this item very well. I liked the line..."The worms enjoy me"....I thought this was very graphic and gory. lol. I enjoyed reading your poem through.
I decided to review your poem because I noticed it in the newsfeed.
Lovely piece of writing. So full of wisdom and direction. A sense of hope filled me as I read this through. This held a biblical power in the way you wrote this out. In parts I thought I was reading from the bible. Incredible work, well done and write on!!
I thought this poem from you was very well presented. Good font used and was enjoyable to read through. The poem was a little sad but that is life all over. A dark theme with wise words and lines here. I also thought this was very deep and thought provoking. Nice work and write on!!
I thought this poem was well constructed and displayed on the page. Nice flow, nice rhymes and good rhythm too. There was plenty of emotion in here. A sweet, loving poem and you expressed your feelings very well. I enjoyed reading this poem through. Good work and write on!!
What an amazing piece of writing this truly is. Such great rhythm, such great flowing rhymes. If this had have been written this year I would have nominated this for Quills. Not only is the structure perfect the meaning was so beauitful. There was a deep chord struck in me as I read this writing through. There was lots of empathy and emotions running here in your writing. This has to be one the finest pieces I have read in the last year. The thing that made this writing have a deep imapct was the ending quote that your poor niece took her own life. I find this hard to bare too. And I am sorry for the loss. Great, special, rewarding, clever writing. Amen.
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