I thought your little poem here was special. You summed up the loss of a pet very well. You also expressed your feelings very clearly indeed. The picture made the writing even more emotional for me. Nice presentation, centered on the page. I enjoyed reading this through. Thank you. Write on!!
Aww, this piece from you was very sweet and direct. The flow was good, the rhythm was good too. A simple smile goes a long way in life. I liked the positivity here in this poem. I found no errors and no way of improving the item. It was a nice, special read. Thank you for sharing this lovely poem here. Write on!!
I thought your poem here was very well expressed. A simple message for the reader. I liked the title, it drew me in to the poem. No errors found and no way of improving the item. I liked the length of the poem, it kept my attention levels up high. A good all-round piece from you.
I thought your little item here was great, powerful and rewarding. Sad though it seems, there was a lot of positivity to come from the words and lines. A heart-felt piece of writing. I found it emotional to read through. Great size of a poem, it kept my attention levels up high. Great writing, well done.
I really enjoyed the romantic power of this small piece. To know it is about a real relationship is even more poetic. I liked the length of the item, it managed to say so much more. I am sorry for your loss, God Bless!
A nice simple message of love and flowering feelings. Great writing as usual.
I thought your item here was very simple to read through. I liked the positive attitude towards the doggie. I think this poem is good for children to read through. The imagery and feel of the poem was of joy and fun. Nice rhythm too. Nice work and write on!!!
I thought your little poem here was very sweet and inspiring. I am touched by your words and the meaning of this poem. You managed to say so much in just a few lines. I think you spoke for many people here with your words. Good work and write on!!!
I enjoyed reading this through. I really liked the picture at the bottom of the writing. I could imagine a banquet of food, dancing and embraces. This fantasy poem was uplifting and inspiring. What a lovely world you created here in these words and lines. Great work and write on!!
Nice expressions here. A dark subject turned into light by the poetic power of your words. I often feel this way too and writing helps the mind feel easy. I liked the length of this piece, it kept my attention levels up high. You managed to say a lot in just a few lines. Nice work.
A great story here. I related well to what you had written down. It is true, life does operate on many different levels, levels that some people are not aware of. It could be the spiritual world pushing you both together. Dreams and day dreams are powerful too. Anything can happen in the dream state of mind. Nice work.
I enjoyed reading this little piece through. I liked the poetic power coming of the words and lines. I couldn't help but feel sad at the end, knowing this all was a dream. You expressed yourself very well here. I thought the poem was very original. Good work.
I liked the vision here in this piece from you. Nice presentation. No errors found or room for improvement. I enjoyed reading this through. A special piece of writing. I liked how you mentioned a new age born, evolution as it were. An inspiring item. Thank you for sharing.
I thought your little poem here was sweet and it made me smile. It's good you found a picture that matches the writing. I liked the size of this piece, it kept my attention levels up high. A cute little poem and worth the 5 stars. Nice work.
Were you on the Titanic?. A story in 6 words, hmmm, difficult. Still, this item of yours still made me review it. A new romance turned into a murder? I must say cruises are becoming more and more popular here in the UK, more expensive too.
I liked the simplicity of your poem here. A heart felt piece of writing. Nice flowing lines. I liked the length of the poem, it kept my attention levels up high. A nice expressive piece of work from you and I hope you finally find the right words. Good work and write on!!
I thought you were very honest here in this piece. I related very well to what you had written down. I find comfort in solitude too. I shall not be defeated. I found this piece from you to be very spiritual and powerful. Our internal dialog matters to all of us. It defines if you sink or swim. Your positivity could be a lesson for all. Nice work and write on!!
Aww, I found this piece to be very uplifting and I related very well to this. You are so correct by writing the line; "Different-as you have not progressed into the world of acceptance" I thought this line was a life lesson for all empaths and spiritualists. Acceptance is key here, it will make the world go round in happy circles. Nice theme and it was a powerful read. Good work.
I could see the potential of your poem here. The comparing of visions of the world. I liked the theme of this poem. I liked the message you were sending. A simple little poem filled with hope. I feel there will always be people around to destroy our dreams of peace. I liked the title of this piece, it summed up the writing very well. My favourite line was; "I see the world as it could be".... I thought this line was great and you lightly inspired me by this line. Thank you for the positivity here.
I found this piece to be very emotional for me. You expressed yourself so very clearly for the reader. You certainly tugged on my heart strings with this poem. I know this was written a few years ago but I hope it is still relevant. I live in the United Kingdom and I am guessing the SPCA is the same as our service, the RSPCA; "Royal Society of Protection and Care of Animals". This service does an amazing job here in the UK. I enjoyed reading your poem through. Lovely work.
I have decided to visit your portfolio and read a few of your poems. I am doing this because you have given me review credits in the past.
I would have loved this piece to be longer so I could read more from you on this subject. Your message was simple, sweet and direct. My favourite line was "Oh God above, among the bright stars" . I thought this was very humbling. I also thought this writing was uplifting. Thank you for sharing.
This is written perfectly and flowed along so very well. You are a great writer here. Your expressive words and lines bring a poetic power to me. Love is love in any gender. I enjoyed the romantic ride of this piece, it was very sweet. Good work and write on!!!
Aww, I thought this was a beauitful piece of writing. The flowing rhymes made the writing so good and easy to read through. A lovely poetic sway and power here. The love, the spirit, the heart was all used to write this piece, great work. I loved it. Such a sweet poem. Well done!!
I thought your little poem here was nice, sweet and romantic. You made me wonder if women love any different to males. My guess is that love is love no matter what the gender be. This was a nice expressive piece and was rather humbling. I enjoyed reading this through. Keep writing.
Lovely writing here. The poetic sway was great. I loved how you ended the poem, it kind of made me emotional. The imagery was great. A sweet, humbling piece of writing. You expressed yourself so very well. Nice length for the poem, it kept my attention levels up high. I enjoyed this work from you. Write on!!
I thought this item from you held great positivity and reward. The imagery that came along with the words and lines was special. You painted a fantastic picture with your words here. A lovely, innocent poem, filled with joy and care and promise. Good work and write on !!!
Anthony.
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