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FIRST IMPRESSIONS:
Examining Sci Fi like this, (what little I know of it by reading it), I found it quite exciting and suspenseful. "Quorilax: High Tide" is a true and golden masterpiece. As the Hub Folder continues on, I think I will read it. Even if I don't review it, I would like you to know that it is a great undertaking on your part, and I admire you for it.
GRAMMAR, SYNTAX, SPELLING:
There were no mistakes in spelling that appeared to me. Your material was swiftly a
good piece for me to read with its congrousness, without the pain of reading through much conjectures. Material like this
is fascinating. Like a conundrum, it falls into place. I liked things in sucession and noted in "One": 'like a tiny deer caught in giant headlights"; "Two": "Had I become the pet of a giant cat?". Lines also like: "I must be um . . .a little king." and in,say,
"Five": You will be where you been thus far, with Zarbaxa." Quotes which are the fibers that you find flow amongst good dialogue
lines.
SUGGESTIONS:
Tell us more, tell us more. THus, is the reason for reading on with this piece.
FINAL COMMENT:
It is only my opinion. I openly want to admit that I love a Sci Fi channel on TV. Film sometimes
can do justice to a piece. However,in the long run, for me,it is the novel that keeps time with the causal theory of relativity in a silent, mature, and effective way for me.
Feather Duster
aka vicki
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