What a great story. Very inspiring.
On the holidays we usually pray for the homeless but what you and your family did was take it a step further. Its great that there are people like you.
I'm sure those people couldn't thank you enough
I thought you did a good job writing this. I think you deserve the award you have on this item
Very nice. I think you have to be talented to write an acrostic that rhymes too. I think you did a nice job here. This too is a good one for children to read.
I thought the last line was very good.
I also like how you made the first letters orange to go with the theme.
Good Job
I think you did a good job writing this and have incorperated the titles in the story very well.
The story is pretty good.
I think you could introduce the friends a little better. I was reading it and a different girl's name came up every couple of sentences and it was a little confusing. The title suits the story well.
I thought this was very interesting. I was surprised to find the two boys in the beginning were in fact boys. For some reason I thought it was men. I think you did a good job writing this.
That is an interesting contest. I like how you wrote it all in dialogue. It was a little hard to tell who was speaking sometimes but the story came out very nicely.
This was a good story. I am assuming the green quotes are the quotes you had to use in the contest. You have incorperated them into the story very well.
It's funny the kinds of stories kids like to listen to these days especially before bed. I would probably have nightmares reading a story about a gnarled, old warlock lol.
I think this is great. You have wonderful imagery here.
This is a very interesting story, is it true?
whether it is or not I think you have written it well. It begins and ends great and the flow of the story is very good.
I especially liked the parts where you tell where you wear the wars.
I love how you have this set up. It's easy to read and you make some great points.
On the Key Characteristics For Reviews, I like how you make each one a different color and highlight the important words in the paragraghs. And I agree with each one.
You have done a wonderful job putting this together.
I like how you put the link to other items pertaining to the same subject also.
Thank You for having this item. It is a wonderful asset to the site. I can see that it helps alot of people get their work seen.
I like your logo, it stands out very well.
I like how you put a star next to your rules, it makes them stand out.
I love this! Every word of course reminds me of writing.com so you did well there. I love how you made this into a heart, very creative. I like how you made each word different. ie italic, bold. And the little heart at the bottom finishes it off very nicely
Great Job!!!
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