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Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
Hi Purple Princess,

This is a fantastic piece. The title is direct and to the point. The reader knows exactly what they will be getting out of the piece. You launch into the piece without introduction or preamble. This takes all the reader's attention and focuses it completely on the topic and the piece. They will read to the last word. You have provided the reader with a list of common terms used in erotic writing. I am just beginning writing erotica, and this will be very helpful to me. You have done your research here. You are conversant with your topic and easily make it comprehensible for your reader. The length is perfect. You completely develop your topic without belaboring the issue and making the piece tedious. You use a formal, organized style that is very appealing to the reader. Great job.

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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
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Hi Mysha.ember,

This is a fantastic story. The tone is tinged with unease. It grabs all the reader's attention and makes them want to read on. The reader is wondering if Iqbal will realize he is injured and get treatment. They will read to the last word to find out. In the story, a doctor in a military battle tends to his patients when he discovers he, himself, is injured. The conflict is well defined. There is no doubt about what is going on here. The characters are well developed and believable. They come across as real people. The dialogue is well done and realistic. The characters speak like real people. The description is detailed and vivid. It puts the reader all the way into the story. As a part of a longer story, this is perfect. It is neither too long or too short. I have been in many medical situations, and the character interactions seem natural to me. The story is well structured and consistent in terms of point of view and tense. Great job.

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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Hi charlie,

This is a fantastic story. The tone is formal. It suits the story and plot very well. The reader is wondering how much jeopardy Juma might be in because of the existence of the Tree of Life. They will read to the last word to find out. The story is about a native from the Amazon rainforest who discovers the Tree of Life and tries to keep its existence a secret. The conflict is well defined. There is no doubt about what is going on here. The characters are well developed and believable. They come across as real people. There is no dialogue but it is not needed here. The description is detailed and vivid. It puts the reader all the way into the story. The story is well structured and consistent in terms of point of view and tense. Great job.


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Review of My Bio  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi Bill,

This is a fantastic piece. The title is direct and to the point. The reader knows exactly what they will be getting out of the piece. I should have read this piece when I first encountered your portfolio. I began to read right away to find out more about you. You launch into the piece without introduction or preamble. This takes all the reader's attention and focuses it completely on the topic and the piece. They will read to the last word. You have written a autobiographical piece. I was delighted with the look I got at you as a person as well as a writer. The length is perfect. You completely develop your topic without belaboring the issue and making the piece tedious. You use a formal, organized style that is very appealing to the reader. Great job.

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Review of The Great Mentor  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi Claude,

This is a fantastic piece. The title is enigmatic and attention grabbing. It tells the reader very little about what the piece is actually about. They are intrigued and will begin to read to find out more. You introduce the topic by briefly discussing the great Mentors in history. This takes all the reader's attention and focuses it completely on the topic and the piece. They will read to the last word. You have honored the man that mentored you in this piece. The reader is delighted with the look they get at you as a person as well as a writer. The length is perfect. You completely develop your topic without belaboring the issue and making the piece tedious. You use an emotional style that is very appealing to the reader. Great job.

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Review of Happy File 2024  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi tracker,

This is a fantastic piece. The title is enigmatic and attention grabbing. It tells the reader very little about what the piece is actually about. They are intrigued and will begin to read right away to find out more. You introduce the topic by telling the reader exactly what they will be getting out of the piece. This takes all the reader's attention and focuses it completely on the topic and the piece. You have shared some of the positive things that were said to you or written about you so far this year. The reader is delighted with the look they get at you as a person as well as a writer. The length is perfect. You completely develop your topic without belaboring the issue and making the piece tedious. You use a formal, organized style that is very appealing to the reader. Great job.

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Review of History Repeated.  
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Hi Mary Ann,

This is a fantastic piece. The title is enigmatic and attention grabbing. It tells the reader very little about what the piece is actually about. They are intrigued and will begin to read to find out more. You launch into the piece without introduction or preamble. This takes all the reader's attention and focuses it completely on the topic and the piece. They will read to the last word. You have written about the sad history of a Scottish family. You have done your research here. You are conversant with your topic and easily make it comprehensible for your reader. You use a formal, organized style that is very appealing to the reader. Great job.

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Review of Cold  
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Rated: E | (4.0)
Hi cowboy,

This is a wonderful piece. The title enigmatic and attention grabbing. It tells the reader very little about what the piece is actually about. They are intrigued and will begin to read to find out more. You launch into the piece without introduction or preamble. This takes all the reader's attention and focuses it completely on the topic and the piece. They will read to the last word. The piece shows us that we should have concern and compassion for our homeless population. I feel like we need to help to protect our homeless population more. The reader is delighted with the look they get at you as a person as well as a writer. The length is perfect. You completely develop your topic without belaboring the issue and making the piece tedious. I did come across one structural issue that needs your attention:

1)You have neglected to either double space or indent between paragraphs. You should remember to consistently do this to keep your writing clear for your reader.

You use an emotional style that is very appealing to the reader. Great job.

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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Hi Nadnerb,

This is a fantastic poem. The tone is formal. It suits the poem and subject matter very well. The poem is about how humans persevere in the face of hardship. I believe that whatever doesn't kill you makes you stronger. Whoever said that was very wise. I loved this poem and read to the last word. The free verse works well in this poem, and you have handled it very well. There is a wonderful rhythm here. The poem flows extremely well. It is a pleasure to read. You have used punctuation and grammar consistently in this poem. There is nothing to distract the reader from their reading pleasure. Thich Nhat Hanh would be honored. Great job.

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Rated: E | (4.0)
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Hi Zeke,

This is a wonderful story. The tone is filled with impatience and guilt. It grabs all the reader's attention and makes them want to read on. The reader is wondering how Lauren will manage to take care of everything she is responsible for, including Shag. They will read to the last word to find out. The story is about a girl who is taking care of her alcoholic uncle after the death of her mother in a car accident. The conflict is well defined. There is no doubt about what is going on here. The characters are well developed and believable. They come across as real people. The dialogue is well done and realistic. The characters speak like real people. The description is detailed and vivid. It puts the reader all the way into the story. I did come across one structural issue that needs your attention:

1)In a few places you have neglected to double space between paragraphs. You should remember to consistently do this to keep your writing clear for your reader.

The story is consistent in terms of point of view and tense. You have accomplished a great deal in just a few words. Great job.

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Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
Hi KingsSideCastle,

This is a fantastic activity. The title is enigmatic and attention grabbing. It tells the reader very little about what the activity is all about. They are intrigued and will begin to read to find out more. You launch into the activity without introduction or preamble. This takes all the reader's attention and focuses it completely on the topic and activity. They will read to the last word. You give the reader instructions all the way through. It's fun! You have given the reader a fun activity to take part in, a chance to collect some really nice trinkets and a wonderful introduction to an interactive story. A bit of a different piece. The length is perfect. You completely develop your topic without belaboring the issue and making the activity tedious. You use a light style that is very appealing to the reader. Great job.

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Review of The Zodiac Killer  
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Rated: E | (4.0)
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Hi Helen,

This is a wonderful essay. The title is direct and to the point. The reader knows exactly what they will be getting out of the essay. I have seen many shows about the Zodiac Killer and was anxious to begin to read to find out more. You launch into the essay without introduction or preamble. This takes all the reader's attention and focuses it completely on the topic and the essay. They will read to the last word. You have written about the murders committed by The Zodiac Killer and the investigation into these murders. You have done your research here. You are conversant with your topic and easily make it comprehensible for your reader. The length is perfect. You completely develop your topic without belaboring the issue and making the essay tedious. I did come across one structural issue that needs your attention:

1)You have neglected to either double space or indent between paragraphs. You should remember to consistently do this to keep your writing clear for your reader.

You use a formal, organized style that is very appealing to the reader. Great job.

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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Hi pen,

This is a fantastic article. The title is enigmatic and attention grabbing. It tells the reader very little about what the article is actually about. They are intrigued and will begin to read to find out more. You launch into the article without introduction or preamble. This takes all the reader's attention and focuses it completely on the topic and the article. They will read to the last word. You have written about the specifics of introducing automated chatbots into the education system to better assist teachers and students. My mother is a retired teacher, so your topic fascinated me. The length is perfect. You completely develop your topic without belaboring the issue and making the article tedious. You use a formal, organized style that is very appealing to the reader. Great job.

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Review of Chromism  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi Mina,

This is a fantastic word search. The title is enigmatic and attention grabbing. It tells the reader very little about what the word search entails. The reader will begin to read right away to find out more. You provide your search grid and words to find without introduction or preamble. This takes all the reader's attention and focuses it completely on the activity. They will pull up their sleeves and dive right into the word search. I loved word search puzzles as a child, and I still like doing them every now and again. The word search is well organized and easy to follow. Very easy to do. Great job.

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Review of The Voice  
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Hi FireWriter2012,

This is a fantastic piece. The title is enigmatic and attention grabbing. It tells the reader very little about what the piece is actually about. They are intrigued and will begin to read to find out more. You launch into the piece without introduction or preamble. This takes all the reader's attention and focuses it completely on the topic and the piece. They will read to the last word. You have written about your favorite opera singer and your mental illness. The reader is delighted with the look they get at you as a person as well as a writer. The length is perfect. You completely develop your topic without belaboring the issue and making the piece tedious. You use a formal, organized style that is very appealing to the reader. Great job.

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Review of Skip  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi IE,

This is a fantastic story. The tone is full agitation and worry. It grabs all the reader's attention and makes them want to read on. The reader is wondering if Barney will find Skip. They will read to the last word to find out. The story is about a little boy who is looking for his lost dog. The conflict is well defined. There is no doubt about what is going on here. The characters are well developed and believable. They come across as real people. The dialogue is well done and realistic. The characters speak like real people. The description is detailed and vivid. It puts the reader all the way into the story. The story is well structured and consistent in terms of point of view and tense. You have accomplished a great deal in just a few words. Great job.

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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Hi Detective,

This is a fantastic story. The tone is formal. It suits the story and plot very well. The reader is wondering if these three men will go looking for the money they are discussing. They will read to the last word to find out. The story is about three men who are discussing whether or not to go to find a substantial amount of money stashed away by a mobster. The conflict is well defined. There is no doubt about what is going on here. The characters are well developed and believable. They come across as real people. The dialogue is well done and realistic. The characters speak like real people. The description is detailed and vivid. It puts the reader all the way into the story. The story is well structured and consistent in terms of point of view and tense. You have accomplished a great deal in just a few words. Great job.

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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi Tim,

This is a fantastic poem. The tone is full of anxiety. It grabs all the reader's attention and makes them want to read on. The poem is a warning to the reader of those who want to take things from you, or take advantage of you. You cannot trust everyone in this world, and the best thing to do is to wary of requests and not let yourself be taken. I loved this poem and read to the last word. The rhyme is well done and consistent. It gives the poem a wonderful rhythm. The meter is consistent from line to line. The poem flows extremely well. It is a pleasure to read. You have used punctuation and grammar consistently in this poem. There is nothing to distract the reader from their reading pleasure. Great job.

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Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
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Hi CSCJR,

This is a fantastic piece. The title is enigmatic and attention grabbing. It tells the reader very little about what the piece is actually about. They are intrigued and will begin to read to find out more. You launch into the piece without introduction or preamble. This takes all the reader attention and focuses it completely on the topic and the piece. They will read to the last word. You have written about a time when you were feeling lost and depressed. I am hoping that your outlook has changed and you are feeling more at peace. I read to the last word to see if this happens. I am delighted with the look I got at you as a person as well as a writer. The length is perfect. You completely develop your topic without belaboring the issue and making the piece tedious. You use an emotional style that is very appealing to the reader. Great job.

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Review of The others  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Hi Ayla,

This is a fantastic piece. The title is enigmatic and attention grabbing. It tells the reader very little about what the piece is actually about. They are intrigued and will begin to read right away to find out more. You launch into the piece without introduction or preamble. This takes all the reader's attention and focuses it completely on the topic and the piece. They will read to the last word. You have written about how you find it curious that people's minds work in different ways and that everyone is different. The reader is delighted with the look they get at you as a person as well as a writer. The length is perfect. You completely develop your topic without belaboring the issue and making the piece tedious. You use an emotional style that is very appealing to the reader. Great job.

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Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
Hi Fiction Diva the Word Weava,

This is a fantastic poem. The tone is full of joy and delight. It grabs all the reader's attention and makes them want to read on. The poem is about someone asking their lover to go out with them and just have fun, and some romance, in the rain. I am hoping that this couple, who are obviously so happy together, will stay together. I read to the last word to see if this happened. I loved this poem. The rhyme is well done and consistent. It gives the poem a wonderful rhythm. The meter is consistent from line to line. The poem flows extremely well. It is a pleasure to read. You have used punctuation and grammar consistently in this poem. There is nothing to distract the reader from their reading pleasure. Great job.

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Review of A Lover So High  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi Tim,

This is a fantastic poem. The tone is full of love and devotion. It grabs all the reader's attention and makes them want to read on. The poem is about the love you have for your girlfriend. It is obvious how much you mean to each other. I am so happy for you and read to the last word to see if the relationship survived. I loved this poem. The free verse works well in this poem, and you have handled it very well. There is a wonderful rhythm here. The poem flows extremely well. It is a pleasure to read. You have used punctuation and grammar consistently in this poem. There is nothing to distract the reader from their reading pleasure. Great job.

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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Hi Iguana,

This is a fantastic piece. The title is enigmatic and attention grabbing. It tells the reader very little about what the piece is actually about. They are intrigued and will begin to read to find out more. You launch into the piece without introduction or preamble. This takes all the reader's attention and focuses it completely on the topic and the piece. They will read to the last word. You have written extoling the virtues of the narrator of your audiobooks. The reader is delighted with the look at the relationship your have with your colleague. The length is perfect. You completely develop your topic without belaboring the issue and making the piece tedious. You use a friendly style that is very appealing to the reader. Great job.

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Rated: E | (4.0)
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Hi Timothy,

This is a wonderful article. The title is direct and to the point. The reader knows exactly what they will be getting out of article. I love pieces which tell me something personal about the authors around here. I began to read right away to find out more. You launch into the article without introduction or preamble. This takes all the reader's attention and focuses it completely on the topic and the article. They will read to the last word. You have written introducing yourself and your business to the people here on the site. The reader is delighted with the look they get at you as a person as well as a writer. The length is perfect. You completely develop your topic without belaboring the issue and making the article tedious. I did come across a few structural issues that need your attention:

1)Im just-Should read "I'm just"

2) I also do work for people. Mainly proof reading and retyping books. Should read "I also work for people, mainly proof reading and retyping books.

3)well-Should read-"we'll".

You use a formal, organized style that is very appealing to the reader. Great job.

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Rated: E | (4.0)
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Hi John,

This is a wonderful story. The tone is full of excitement and anticipation. It grabs all the reader's attention and makes them want to read on. The reader is wondering if the class will enjoy their first experience of the White House. They will read to the last word to find out. The story is about a child who is excited about their field trip to the White House. The story is narrative as opposed to conflict based. This is rare in literature and very interesting. There is no doubt about what is going on here. The characters are well developed and believable. They come across as real people. The dialogue is well done and realistic. The characters speak like real people. The description is detailed and vivid. It puts the reader all the way into the story. I did come across one structural issue that needs your attention:

1)You have neglected to either double space or indent between paragraphs. You should remember to consistently do this to keep your writing clear for your reader.

The story is consistent in terms of point of view and tense. Great job.

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