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Review by Mrs. Populatery
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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Great Speech!
I think kids are such in hurry to grow up because basically everyone controls what you do in your life up to 18.
You hardly get to decide anything.
I can't even decide what I'm having for dinner.
But I think If you really want to do something you should, no matter how old you are you only have one live to live so you might as well live an awesome one.
I think it's cool you still feel like a kid at the age of 40.

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Review of Funny Things  
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This is a fantastic poem!
I loved how you described the man you had a crush on with so many things.
I thought that was very creative.
I hate it when you like someone but they don't want to go out with you because they're scared of going to jail.( this is a joke)
I think it's always good to tell people how you feel if you like them enough to write a poem about it.
Do you ever regret not telling him?
I really enjoyed this poem I think I'm going to read another.
Keep up the good work! :)

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Review of At 17  
Review by Mrs. Populatery
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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Great Poem!
I could really feel the emotion in it.
Everyone does things that their not proud of.
This poem flowed very well.
My favorite part was: "I cannot say sorry and I can't say why,
I don't think I knew what I was doing but it's enough to make me cry,"
Good Job!
Keep up the good work! :)

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Review of Broken  
Review by Mrs. Populatery
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Excellent Poem!
I could feel the emotion.
I love how you described yourself as a vase to make people understand your pain.
I thought that was very creative.
My favorite part was: "I'm tired of being broken,
of never being free,
from the chains and bonds,
that are holding me."
It really drew me in to the poem.
Good Job!
Keep up the awesome work! :)

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Review by Mrs. Populatery
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Rated: 13+ | (3.5)
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I'm not really sure how snow on the first day of winter has to do with death.
Is there a deeper meaning to this?
If so could you help me understand it?


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Review of Really, dad?  
Review by Mrs. Populatery
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Rated: ASR | (4.5)
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Great Poem!
Sometimes parents have a hard time letting go of their children when they grow up.
You must help him understand that you don't need his help as much as you used too.
Talking about problems help solve them.
Good Poem!
Keep up the good work! :)

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Review of What if  
Review by Mrs. Populatery
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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This poem was really good.
I thought it was super sweet!
You also raised some good points true love is when people stay through the hard times.
Keep up the good work!
This poem was awesome! :)

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Review of The Love We Share  
Review by Mrs. Populatery
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Excellent Poem!
I loved every minute of it.
The poem flowed really well.
I love how even the words that didn't rhyme seemed like they did.
You've written this very well.
My favorite part was: "If loving you is a crime then I want a life sentence
If loving you is bad for the society
Then I am a menace"
I thought this part was kind of funny but sweet at the same time.
Keep up the good work! :)

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Review by Mrs. Populatery
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Great Poem!
I thought it was super funny especially the ending.
It made me laugh.
I think it's cool that you made a poem about only rhyming.
I think that's very creative.
Keep up the awesome work! :)

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Review of Poem 1  
Review by Mrs. Populatery
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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Awe this poem is so sweet.
I loved how not one word rhymed in this poem.
Rhyming sometimes get's annoying if you do it all the time.
This was written very well.
Keep up the awesome work! :)

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Review of UNTOLD  
Review by Mrs. Populatery
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Rated: E | (3.5)
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Great Poem!
I'm not really sure what you're trying to say in this poem but I love the rhymeing.
This poem almost reminds me of a rap or something.
Good Job!
This is written very well.
My favorite part is: "ANGER DEEPLY BREWING
HELD INSIDE STEWING"

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Review of It's Limerick  
Review by Mrs. Populatery
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Great Poem!
I think this poem is about when people judge other people without getting to know them.
They can carelessly point and laugh at other people but when it's there turn they get all offended.
Good Job!
This is written very well.
My favorite part is "I'll just shrug my shoulders, "It's a Limerick,"
So just give me your worst, if you're daring."
Keep up the good work!
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Review by Mrs. Populatery
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Excellent poem!
I loved your message that a child is blessing.
They are blessing sometimes I would give anything to be a little kid again.
You don't have to deal with all the problems of the world.
They're filled with so much love and happiness.
I think we can learn alot from children.
Keep up the awesome work! :)

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Review by Mrs. Populatery
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This poem is really good a touching.
Sometimes I feel the same way I go to the nursing home it's sad
to see old people alone with no family to come visit them.
I couldn't stand the fact of living some where when no one came to see me.
I'm trying to stay as healthy as I can so I don't have to experience that.
Excellent Poem!
I love poems that have a meaningful lesson.
Keep up the awesome work! :)


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Review by Mrs. Populatery
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
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Excellent Poem!
I thought this poem was very sweet.
I think my favorite part was: "I will call you my beautiful baby girl.
You will call me father.
My precious child come run with me, follow me, stay with me."
I think I like the father part the best.
I didn't see any errors,
This poem is written very well.
Keep up the good work! :)

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Review by Mrs. Populatery
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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Great Poem
I hate it when buses are lat especially when it's raining outside.
Sometimes I wonder if it's coming at all.
Good Job!
Keep up the good work! :)

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Review of Holiday at Work  
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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Great Poem!
I don't have a job yet but I can't imagine working on popular holidays.
I don't understand why stores are even open on that day it's not like
anyone's gonna come in and buy stuff they're at home spending time
with their families like the people working should be doing.
The last part really made me laugh: "I head to lunch to nourish myself,
and return to a rumor which surprises thyself.
As I was gone, on my favorite break,
VTO was offered for everybody to take."
Keep up the good work! :)

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Review of Covered Trails  
Review by Mrs. Populatery
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Awesome Poem!
It was sow sweet I loved the part when you said to stop his heart from turning blue.
I said "awe how cute." lol
But my favorite part was: "To lie, to die, I sure can do
to save your heart from turning blue
I smile a mound for you to see,
destiny says, "We're meant to be"..."
The last line really spoke to me.
Keep up the good work! :)

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Review of She's Happy Now  
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Great Poem!
The title fits it perfectly.
I'm not sure if the man is asking himself where you went or are you telling him.
Keep up the good work!

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Review of "The Hobo"  
Review by Mrs. Populatery
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Great Poem!
I love to read stories about hobos they're awesome!
Keep up the good work! :)

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Review of "The Bus Stop"  
Review by Mrs. Populatery
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Rated: E | (4.5)

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For an imagist style poem shouldn't you add more details?
That happens on my bus stop sometimes I rains in the morning and
I'm the only one smart enough to bring an umbrella so everyone tries to get under it.
Good Job!
Keep up the good work! :)

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Review of Altzhimers letter  
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lol That was super funny.
I loved the part about the teeth and the ending made me crack up the most.
"LOVE ALWAYS, YOU FOREVER FRIEND,
WHOEVER I AM XXX "
That was hilarious!
Keep up the amazing work!
I'll be looking forward to your next comedy poem.


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Review of Lost  
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Good Poem!
Ummm I know this poem is suppose to be about soul searching but, it seems more about nature to me.
Good Job!
Keep up the great work! :)


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Review of My Baby  
Review by Mrs. Populatery
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This poem Is so sweet.
I smiled the whole time while I was reading it.
I loved how you told lots of stories in the poem and not just about how you feel.
Judging by all your stories I think you have a keeper! :) lol
Keep up the good work!

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Review of Alone in a Cell  
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Fantastic Poem!
I love every minute of it I could feel the emotion.
I think this poem is about a guy who was falsely accused of something he didn't do and went to jail for it.
Now the person who lied about him has came to visit him in his cell. In his mind he knows the man will get what he deserves in time.
Good Job!
Keep up the excellent work! :)

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