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Review of ~Destiny~  
Review by Mrs. Populatery
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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Great Poem!
I was really surprised at the ending.
I wonder if you save your boss's life will you still get in trouble for being late again? lol
The beginning of the poem was so relatable to me expect the coffee part I don't drink coffee.
so day I wish I could just go back to sleep.
Good Job!
Keep up the awesome work! :)


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Review of Who Are You?  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Excellent Poem!
I could feel the emotion.
I loved that every line didn't have to rhyme.
I can tell this poem came from the heart.
Your Awesome!
Keep up the good work!
5 STARS FOR JUST BEING YOU! : D

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Review of Why do we write  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Excellent Poem!
You speak the truth my friend!
I write because I like too.
I want to share my thoughts with the entire world.
I hate it when people do things for the money and not because they enjoy it.
I also loved that not one word rhymed in this poem.
I can tell this came straight form the heart!
Good Job!
Keep up the good work!
5 STARS FOR SPEAKING THE TRUTH....lol :D

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Review of Floating  
Review by Mrs. Populatery
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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Great Story!
I think this story is about a person that is going through a hard time
and is disparately trying to make everything better.
Good Job!
Keep up the awesome work! :D

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Review of Read me!  
Review by Mrs. Populatery
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
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Great Poem!
I thought it was really funny and totally true.
I love to get reviews on my work.
I really loved this part: "I'll be really happy
Just don't say I'm sappy!

But if you think that I am
I'll try not to give a damn."
That made me laugh...
Good Job!
Keep up the good work! :)

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Review of Endless Dance  
Review by Mrs. Populatery
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Rated: ASR | (4.0)
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Great Poem!
I could feel the emotion in it.
I think the poem is about the death of a relationship
more than someones life.
Good Job!
Keep up the good work! :)

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Review of Poor Little Girl  
Review by Mrs. Populatery
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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Great Poem!
I could feel the emotion in it.
I liked that everything in the poem
didn't have to rhyme that gets annoying after a while.
Good Job!
Keep up the awesome work! :)


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Review of I Walk Alone  
Review by Mrs. Populatery
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Rated: E | (3.5)
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Great Lyrics!
I don't like this one as much as I liked the other song.
I just feel like you could do more with this one.
It seems a little to simple to me.
And the first part doesn't really make since.
"I walk alone.

Yet, all I think is

You."

All I think of is you not all I think is you. That doesn't make much sense to me.
Great Job!
Keep up the fantastic work! :D


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Review of Melody For Two  
Review by Mrs. Populatery
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Awesome Lyrics!
They are really catchy!
If this ever becomes a song I wanna be the first to her it.
I can tell this is gonna be a big hit! lol
I just have one suggestion.
I notice you use bed twice in the first part maybe you should find another word.
Good Job!
Keep up the awesome work! :D


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Review by Mrs. Populatery
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Excellent Poem!
I loved that it has a wonderful message as well.
I think this poem is about a person who has changed their life around
despite all the bad qualities they had.
I thought the last part was very clever and sentimental.
"So remember as you live your life
Each days a brand new start
And the brightest star that's ever shined
Stays lit within your heart
(From the Pages of my 3rd Book of Poetry)"
This part really make me smile.
Awesome Job!
Keep up the fantastic work!
5 STARS FOR BEING AWESOME! :)

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Review of Insomnia  
Review by Mrs. Populatery
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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Lol Great Poem!
I thought it was extremely funny.
I loved the first opening line "Sleep oh sleep, where art thou?"
I though that line was very creative and different.
I hate it when I can't go to sleep at night.
I also though the last part was super funny
"I promise I won't take you for
granted anymore, and I'll try
my best to visit you more,
and make you a priority!
So please come back....I LOve YOU!!
"
If you think about it, it kind of sounds like your trying to apologize to a lover or friend...lol
Good Job!
Keep up the good work! :)


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Review by Mrs. Populatery
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Rated: 13+ | (3.5)
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Great Poem!
This poem was good but I think you could have done more with it.
I mean when I read the title of your poem
I was expecting like vivid details of forbidden love and how it feels and stuff like that.
But all your poem is really telling me is what kind of people participate in forbidden love? maybe?
Great Job!
Try to use more details not time even poems need detail sometimes.
Keep up the good work! :)


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Review of Butterfly  
Review by Mrs. Populatery
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Rated: E | (3.5)
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Great Poem!
I thought the meaning of this was good; the whole butterfly cocoon think applies here nicely.
But I feel the poem is a little to rhymey that it takes away from the emotion or meaning of the poem.
Rhyming a little here and there is good but like ever sentence rhymes.
I know this is suppose to be a break up poem but I didn't really feel the emotion of the break up.
Good Job!
Keep up the awesome work! :)

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Review of Love is  
Review by Mrs. Populatery
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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Awesome Poem!
It was so beautiful and sweet it made me smile as I read it.
I don't know much about love but I do watch lots of drama's and movies.
I've seen how love could hurt people and can make people happy.
That's how I know all of your words are true.
Love is a wonderful thing.
Awesome Job!
Keep up the good work! :)

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Review of This Stillness  
Review by Mrs. Populatery
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Rated: E | (4.0)
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Great Poem!
I don't completely know what this poem is about but I came off to me as a little dark.
The person in the poem is going through some sort of hardship.
But their telling themselves they aren't going to give up
because they know if the get through their problems it will make them stronger.
Awesome Job!
Keep up the fantastic work! :)

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Review of My Caprice  
Review by Mrs. Populatery
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
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Awe!
Fantastic Love Poem!
5 stars.
This poem made my smile as I read it.
I loved the way you used lots of details to describe how you feel about your lover.
I wish some one would write a poem like this for me!
Good Job!
Keep up the awesome work! :)

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Review of Paper Doll  
Review by Mrs. Populatery
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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Great Story!
I think this is about a girl who takes a different path from everyone else because she wants to be different.
She does care what other people think about her.
Good Job!
Keep up the awesome work! :)


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Review of defeat  
Review by Mrs. Populatery
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Rated: E | (4.0)
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Great Poem!
Everything you said is true.
No one ever really forgets the times they have been defeated.
I wonder why it is people remember the bad time more than they remember the good.
Good Job!
Keep up the good work! :)

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Review by Mrs. Populatery
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
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This was a nice little story.
It was very entertaining as well.
I loved the way it ended, happy endings are the best endings!
Good Job!
Keep up the awesome work!

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Review by Mrs. Populatery
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Rated: ASR | (4.5)
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Lol Very funny story!
I loved the part when you said the lady had a purse the size of a take out box!
The ending was kind of funny as well the lady ran out of the store crying then
the guy told the manager it wasn't even blood in the first place
and he never seen that lady before in his life.
Good Job!
Keep up the awesome work! :D

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Review of Man On The Bench  
Review by Mrs. Populatery
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Rated: 13+ | (3.5)
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Great Story!
I think it's a start to a scary story but not quite.
I'm having a hard time trying to figure out what's so scary about this man.
Is he still living is he dead? Is something wrong with his feet? I just don't get it.
I would be nice of you to explain it to me because I'm kind of lost at this point.
But I will say I love your choice of words and your imagery.
You used lots of details to describe the man on the bench.
Good Job!
Keep up the awesome work! :)


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Review of Smiles  
Review by Mrs. Populatery
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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Cute Poem!
This poem made me smile as well.
Smiling is a wonderful thing I think the world would be a better place if everyone just smiled more.
I love the way you used lots of details and showed us all the different smiles.
My favorite is when one person laughs and the way the person laughs is so funny that everyone else joins them.
That happens to me alot lol...
Keep up the awesome work and keep smiling! :)


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Review of The Last Tree  
Review by Mrs. Populatery
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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Nice Nature Story!
I sometimes feel sorry for the tress we have to cut down to make shopping malls and other fancy buildings.
I think it's cool of you to write from the tree's perspectives.
These days people don't care much about nature and trees.
They just want to tare the forest down to make room for more cities.
I hope one day people will realize we need nature as much as we need the city.
Awesome Job!
Keep up the good work! :)

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Review of It is mine!  
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Rated: E | (4.0)
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Nice Short Story!
But I'm not really sure what it's about.
When I read this i thought of a crazy drug addict...lol
or someone with a crazy addiction
It's probably far from the truth but that's all I could think of..
It would be nice if you could explain it to me.
Good Job!
Keep up the awesome work! :)

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Awesome Essay!
It's good to know you were able to stop your drinking habit.
As For me I'm only 15 years old I haven't drank any alcohol yet.(not sure if I'm planning to either)
I never knew people could get addicted to drinking I just though you could only get addicted to drugs. ( looks like I was wrong lol)
But then I read the story this guys sent me about a boy who basically drank his life away and killed his lover in the process.
It was so sad.
Good Job!
Keep up the good work!
Your essay was very helpful to me; it let me know what it was like to be a drunk struggling with the addiction.


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