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Review of I Miss You  
Review by Mrs. Populatery
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
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Awesome Poem!
It was so sweet, sad and touching.
If I could cry I would; that's how good this poem was!
I think it's so sad when people can't be with the ones they care about the most!
This was an Fantastic poem!
Keep up the good work! :)
5 STARS!

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Review of Unwanted  
Review by Mrs. Populatery
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Rated: E | (4.0)
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Nice Story!
I don't quite get it though and some of the language is kind of strange to me as well.
Is this like sea talk or something?
I think I understand the first part,
the captain of the ship must have kidnapped a women because she was so pretty and he asked her for her name
then I got lost at the end.
What are you trying to say?
Good Job!
Keep up the good work! :)


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Review of Imperfect  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Great Essay!
When I read the beginning of the story I pictured a girl in a ballroom dancing surrounded by many people.
She had changed herself from a wild girl to an establish young lady and she wanted to show everyone how she had changed.
It kind of reminded me of Cinderella in a way. As I read the next paragraph a fell more in love with this essay. I liked when you talked about all the things the actress had been through to get where she was; how you said she wasn't ashamed of anything that happened in her life because she knew it shaped her into the women she was today.
Excellent! Bravo! Bravo!
Keep up the good work! :)


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Review of The Scarlet Rose  
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Rated: 13+ | (3.5)
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Good Poem!
I'm not really sure what your trying to say.
But I think your saying that the king killed the queen?
Because you said he was ruthless.
Let me know if I'm right or not.
Great Job!
Keep up the good work!


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Review of The Poet  
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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Great Poem!
I think poetry is a way to release your feelings also.
Even though I don't write poetry like I use to.
When I was going threw something I always wrote a pom about it and after I finished I felt so much better.
Keep up the awesome work! :)

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Review of Go Ahead  
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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Awesome Poem!
I think your trying to say you shouldn't worry about what's already happened.
You should be worried about what happens next.
Great Job!
Keep up the good work! :)

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Review by Mrs. Populatery
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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Great Haiku!
I thought this was kind of funny.
I don't know what the meaning of this poem is.
But to me I think it kind of refers to emotions.
Like some days your happy others sad or mad.
The different moons represent the different emotions.
Awesome Job!
Keep up the good work! :)


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Review of UNTITLED...2002  
Review by Mrs. Populatery
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Rated: E | (3.5)
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Awesome Poem!
I'm not really sure what this poem is really suppose to be about.
I thought your ending words held a deep message.
"TOMORROW IS GONE
FOREVER TODAY!"
Those words really spoke to me, because what you say it true.
Don't worry about tomorrow just worry about today!
Keep up the good work! :)


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Review of #32  
Review by Mrs. Populatery
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Rated: E | (3.5)
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Lol! Awesome Poem!
This poem made me laugh it's so simple and cute.
Especially the first part
Good Job!
Keep up the awesome work! :)

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Review of Love & Marriage  
Review by Mrs. Populatery
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Rated: E | (4.0)
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This is a very interesting poem.
Since you said marriage is hell or you trying to say it bad?
Or are you saying just because people get married doesn't mean their in love?
I would really like to hear why you wrote this or what this poem is about.
Awesome Job!
Keep up the good work!

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Review of Remember Me  
Review by Mrs. Populatery
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Bravo! Bravo!
Great Haiku!
I could feel the emotion in it.
Your words are so true.
When people die people always think about what they could have done better in life,
not how the person was.
Keep up the good work!
I'm glad your haiku actually made sense to me, sometimes I have a problem with understanding what the writer is trying to say.


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Review of Crimson Moon  
Review by Mrs. Populatery
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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Awesome Poem!
This poem reminded me of like a werewolf movie or something.
I could picture the wolf running threw the dark forest in the night time chasing his prey.
I love all the details you used.
Good Job!
Keep Up The Good Work! :)

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Review by Mrs. Populatery
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Great story!
This was very interesting and funny.
I want to visit Japan one day myself.
I know exactly what cha mean about the language barrier.
Sometimes I know what people are saying to but I hesitate answering in the native language because I'm in fear of saying it wrong.
I didn't want to sound like a stupid foreigner...lol
Awesome Job!
Keep up the good work! :)

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Review of Hope  
Review by Mrs. Populatery
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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Great Poem!
It was very inspirational and up lifting.
Lots of people don't even know what hope is.
You explained it correctly, II know everything you said was true.
I love how you gave lots of examples of it too.
My favorite part was: "It is something to live for,
Whether rich or poor.
Hope is something that keeps you strong,
When all else is wrong.
Now for question number two,
There is something that you must do.
Someone you must know,
Someone that is more than a mere show.
"
Good Job!
Keep up the awesome work! :)

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Review by Mrs. Populatery
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Good Story!
This was so sad.
But I thought the coffee part was kind of funny.
You kept rushing back and every time something else went wrong.
I like how you used lots of details I could tell this was a true story from all the details you put in.
I hope your girlfriend gets well soon.
Keep up the good work! :)


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Review by Mrs. Populatery
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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Good Poem!
I love to read stories about hobos! lol
But this one seems a little sad to me.
I thought it was weird how to hobo walked if he was blinded.
I like how you used the same stanza twice it really fit the poem.
I didn't see any errors.
Nice Job!
Keep up the good work! :)


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Review of Tickled Pink  
Review by Mrs. Populatery
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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Awesome Poem!
I could imagine every word you wrote.
I love the way you described the sunset and rise.
I thought this poem was very creative.
I love how you only talked about one color in the sunset.
Most people talk about all colors it;s cool how you stayed on just one subject.
My favorite part: "The sunrise in the East,
sunset in the west.
Hues of the colour pink,
they twirl together at their best."
The ending made me smile.
Keep up the awesome work! :)

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Review by Mrs. Populatery
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Rated: E | (4.0)

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Great Poem!
But I kind of think it's missing something.
I'm not sure what though.
But other than that I think this poem is awesome.
I loved the way you used details to show how you felt.
This poem flows very well.
My favorite part was: "to me, your love is deadly,
but i don't care,
you intoxicate me"
I thought this part was so romantic.
Keep up the good work! :)

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Review of Day and Night  
Review by Mrs. Populatery
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
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Great Poem!
I think this poem is about a girl that hides how she really feels.
She's happy around people but she's really sad in side.
Then at the end of the poem the girl learns to except her faults and with out them she wouldn't be the person she is today.
This poem flows very well.
I love your choice of words for this poem.
My favorite part: "And a laugh that says I have the world...or so you think.
By night you hear the cries
And see the tears that pour from my eyes as I cry myself to sleep."
I thought theses phrase fit perfectly together.
Good Job!
Keep up the awesome work! :)


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Review of Destiny  
Review by Mrs. Populatery
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Great Poem!
This poem is very uplifting it made me smile.
All you had to say was true as well.
I also love how you wrote it you used a lot of catchy phrases that do fit the poem.
My Favorite part was: "If you let fear consume you, you'll miss the opportunity
To be one in a million, and have it all for free
And like the King when he said "I have a dream"
If you have one, never let fate intervene"
I thought the king part, I though that was very clever.
Keep up the awesome work!
5 Stars! :)


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Review of Hairy Predicament  
Review by Mrs. Populatery
Rated: E | (5.0)
Lol!
Awesome story!
That is the funniest thing I have ever heard.
First the dad is loosing hair now he's not going to have any at all.
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Review of The Right Thing  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Bravo! Bravo!
Wonderful Speech!
This speech was very uplifting.
I felt even better about myself reading it.
You have an awesome gift here and all you say is true.
People should care what other people think, it;s what they d and think that actually counts in the long run.
Thanks for sharing your awesome thoughts.
I think the same way actually.
Keep up the Excellent work!
I'll look forward to your next master piece.
5 Stars! :)

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Review of Life  
Review by Mrs. Populatery
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Excellent poem!
I thought this poem was written very well.
It always flows good.
I'm not sure what happened to make you not live but life will get better if you want it too.
My favorite part was: "What can I do to change it?
What do I need to do?
How do I go about it?
I'm tired of feeling blue."
I especially like the tired of feeling blue part.
I thought that was a very good touch to the stanza.
Good Job!
Keep up the good work!
5 Stars!! :)


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Review of fool  
Review by Mrs. Populatery
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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Great Poem!
I think this poem is about a girl that's so beautiful and nice that she's an angel to you.
Your remissness on the days when you were with her but sadly you feel you made her leave.
This poem was written very well.
I didn't see an errors.
Good Job!
You did an awesome job on this poem.
I'll be looking forward to the next one.

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Review of Two-Faced Lovers  
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Great Poem!
It was a lot of emotion is this poem so I'm guessing some of these events really happened.
I loved how you made some of the words in caps it added to the emotional part.
I don't understand why people can't tell each other the truth when it comes to relationships.
I think this would be an awesome short story by the way.
Keep up the awesome work!


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