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Review of expression  
Review by Mrs. Populatery
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Rated: E | (4.0)
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Good Poem!
It was very romantic and sweet.
But for some odd reason it reminded me of a fairy tail princess.
You know when they say their the fairest of them all.
This poem was written really well.
My favorite part was:"Than words can say,
So lovely her hair
Like pink roses that blossom in May."
I thought this part was really sweet and creative.
Keep up the good work! :)

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Awesome poem!
I loved ever minute of it!
I'm not really sure what this poem is a bout but I could tell you're going threw some rough times.
It's sad when people don't care about your problems.
I'm glad to see that your standing your ground.
This poem is written very well.
My favorite part was: "The lord won’t put me through more than I can handle
So I will walk this journey
In just some sandals"
This part is very uplifting.
Good Job!
Keep up the awesome work! :)

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Review by Mrs. Populatery
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Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
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Good Poem!
I love how you had lots of examples and details.
This is written very well.
I could feel the emotion in this poem.
This poem is about a girl who can't live without her lover or her heart will stop.
My favorite part was: "The next moment when my heart stopped for a while again

Can’t express more because it senses my heart even this day

Feeling like loosing you more & getting away from you completely

Don’t know the few days of likeliness made me cry for you

Suddenly my heart beat stopped & raise more than that of mine & I am confused now
"

Keep up the good work! :)

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Review of My angel  
Review by Mrs. Populatery
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Rated: E | (4.0)
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Nice Poem!
It was very short but very meaningful.
You write very well.
This poem reminded me of a girl sitting in a meadow smelling flowers thinking of her lover.
My favorite part was: "I smell them
and think of natures gift
you"
I thought the last part was really sweet.
Keep up the good work! :)


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Review of Love  
Review by Mrs. Populatery
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Fantastic Poem!
I loved every minute of it.
This poem was very sweet and romantic and everything you said is true.
I think you are really improving.
Keep up the good work!
I'll look forward to your next master piece.
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Review of When I'm With You  
Review by Mrs. Populatery
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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Awesome Poem!
This poem was so sweet and romantic, it made my smile.
You write very well.
My favorite part was: "I hope you feel the same way too.
I hope you know what Im saying is true,
That I will always adore you."
I really love the last line I thought it was a fabulous way to end the poem.
Keep up the good work! :)

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Review of Reminiscing  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Fantastic Poem!
This poem really spoke to my soul.
I could sense something tragic has just happened, but I'm not quite sure what.
I kind of thing a girl/boy has lost their lover because they either died or broke up with them something like that.
You have amazing writing skills.
My favorite part was: " wondering if
anything, anything at all, could've
saved us, could've stopped our fall
before we became a thing of the past
broken dreams and secrets that were never meant to last"
Excellent ending by the way!
Keep up the awesome work! :)

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Review by Mrs. Populatery
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Rated: E | (4.0)
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Good poem!
It's so sad.
I could feel the emotion.
I think this poem is about a girl/boy trying to get over a break up by cause himself/herself harm.
Let me say this is some deep stuff.
This poem was written very well,good choice of words.
Lots of details as well.
My favorite part was: "
Sweet pain and sour love, leave me with the same deep scars. "
I think this was a very emotional part and a perfect way to end the poem.
Keep up the good work! :)

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Review by Mrs. Populatery
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Rated: E | (4.0)
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Excellent Poem!
This poem almost brought tears to my eyes.
It's so romantic and sweet.
This poem is written very well, I didn't see any errors.
My favorite part was: "We'll live and love and laugh together,
This promise I make to you.
We'll share each day and night as they come,
Together, we'll touch mornings dew."
Awesome Job!
Keep up the good work! :)


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Review of Oh Darling...  
Review by Mrs. Populatery
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Rated: E | (4.0)
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Awesome Poem!
I thought this poem was really sweet.
It's good to know even though she's your ex-wife you still love her.
This poem brought a smile to my face.
I didn't see any errors but the / thing is a little weird.
My favorite part was: "If I could change the path you're on/ Change your life and make you strong
You know I would because I care/ And for you I'm always there"
I thought this part was really romantic and sweet.
Keep up the good work! :)

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Review of Self Destruction  
Review by Mrs. Populatery
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
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Great Poem!
I could feel the emotion.
When I read this poem I picture a man getting beaten by his girlfriend.
This was written very well, I didn't see any errors.
My favorite part was:"hit me and say what you will

but when its done you'll see

yourself you have managed to kill

and I will be as strong as i can be
"
I thought this part was very emotional and meaningful.
Keep up the good work! :)

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Review of The Light  
Review by Mrs. Populatery
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Rated: E | (4.0)
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Great Poem!
I could feel a lot of emotion from this poem.
I can tell it has a deeper meaning.
This poem is written very well, I didn't see any errors.
My favorite part is:"The world has treated me wrong.
The next step will be my last fall.
I hold my breath.
It's the only time that I feel no pain."
This part really spoke to me.
Good Job!
Keep up the good work! :)

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Review of Ambition  
Review by Mrs. Populatery
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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Awesome Poem!
I thought this poem was super funny.
It made me thing of a girl trying to do her home work and she's looking around for her ambition.
This poem flows very well.
My favorite part was: "Do you hide in the closet?
Are you under the bed?
Are you in the bathroom?
Surely not in my head!"
I thought this part was funny.
Good Job!
Keep up the awesome work! :)

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Review of I Have Seen It  
Review by Mrs. Populatery
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Rated: ASR | (5.0)
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Awesome Poem!
I love to review poems that are about important topics.
I could tell this has alot of emotion in this poem.
I think the speaking parts really help with that.
My favorite part was: "Another one not yet ready for motherhood
We're all still crying "Save me"
And the cycle starts again"
I think being a mother too early is part of what is wrong with the world.
I think some kids these days are rude and disrespectful because their parents didn't teach them what they needed to know.
Their parents don't know what they need to know because they had a child young.
Keep up the good work! :)

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Review of Sketching (2)  
Review by Mrs. Populatery
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Rated: E | (4.0)
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This is a nice poem!
But I'm kind of lost here.
Is this suppose to be one poem or two separate ones?
First you talk about drawing then you talk about writing a story.
Help me out her please...lol
I like to draw as well.
I would love for you too look at my drawings.
Other than that the poems were pretty good.
Keep up the good work!:)

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Review of No, Not Anymore  
Review by Mrs. Populatery
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Fantastic Poem!
I could tell this poem was very emotional.
I loved every minute of it, this is a true master piece.
I know just how you feel.
When I read the first part it reminded me of myself.
I try so hard not to let break-ups get to me.
This poem flows very nicely.
My favorite part was: "I remember when you told me
You didn’t want to see me get hurt
So when you broke my heart and saw me cry...
Tell me, did you close your eyes?
" I thought that was kind of funny when you said did you close your eyes.
and I also liked
"Someone said your name and asked me if I knew you.
I looked down, wiped away my tears and said “no, not anymore”.
I’ve made the choice to finally let go, because I can't stand the pain.
It's time for my last tear to fall so I can smile again"

I like how instead of you saying no you said not anymore. That was a very good response to a question like that.
Excellent Job!
Keep up the good work! :)

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Review by Mrs. Populatery
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Rated: E | (4.0)
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Awesome poem!
I love name poems!
I think their so original in and creative.
I would like to make one myself but I don't know what to write just yet.
I think it's cool how you described yourself as strange most people have a hard time admitting that.
Even though I don't think anything is wrong with being strange I think it just means your different.
Good Job!
Keep up the good work!
I'm not sure if I asked you or not because your username does seem a little familiar.

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I would really like to hear your opinion because I writing this book for teens and kids.
Scene your a teen like me I think your input would be very helpful.
If I already sent this to you, my bad...lol
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Review of Eye Contact  
Review by Mrs. Populatery
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Excellent poem!
This poem was very sweet.
It made me smile when I read it.
It flows well also.
I didn't spot any errors.
I think this poem belongs on a valentines day car.
My favorite part was: "Your lips, I'm longing for a taste.
My lips touch yours
and your touch mine
I'll treasure this moment for the rest of time."
Keep up the good work! :)

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Review of My Princess  
Review by Mrs. Populatery
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Rated: E | (4.0)
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Awesome poem!
I thought this poem was very sweet.
When I read it, it made me smile.
I think my favorite part was: "My very first kiss. I was in love
It was because I’d grown
From a rosebud into a beautiful rose"
The poem flowed very well.
Good Job!
Keep up the good work!


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Review of Would You Cry?  
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Good Poem!
I'm really sure why this topic is so important to certain people.
Of course, people will cry if you die.
Now if you were the most hated person in the world or something then you could be worried.
Everyone has people who love them and those people will cry if they die.
If people don't then who cares?
Who wants to see people in pain? I sure don't.
Good Job!
I could feel the emotion and sadness in it.
My favorite part was the ending line: "I guess what I really want to know is
Would you cry for me?"
Keep up the good work! :)

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Awesome Poem!
I'm not really sure what it's exactly about but I'll tell you what I got out of it.
First I would like to say that this poem really painted a picture for me.
I loved how you used lots of details.
The poem also flows very well.
I think this poem explains the ups and downs of friendship.
Like you explained the arguments and the happy times as well.
I can you are trying to apologize.
This poem sounds really sincere.
Good Job!
Keep up the good work! :)

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Review of To My Love  
Review by Mrs. Populatery
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Awesome Poem!
But I have to be honest, I thought this poem was about a lover at first.
I think it's so sweet of you to write a poem about your dad.
I could feel the emotion in your words I could tell this poem came from the heart.
I love how everything in your poem didn't rhyme.
This poem made me smile.
As for errors I didn't see any.
The poem really flowed well in the first couple of sentences.
I think it got a little chopping in the middle., But I'm not sure if it was the poem or was I just messing up reading lol.
You did a wonderful job on this!
Keep up the good work! :)

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Review of Life, Love, Laugh  
Review by Mrs. Populatery
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Great Poem!
All you say is true.
I love how compared Life, Love and Laugh.
This was written very well you used lots of details.
When I read this poem it made me smile.
Love isn't always happy but it sure is a good story to tell.
Keep up the good work! :)

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Review by Mrs. Populatery
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Great Story!
I thought it was very funny.
I thought it was weird for a random girl to challenge you to a race in the street lol.
What's even crazier is for you to except the challenge. I was very entertaining though.
I think my favorite part was when he tried to stop her from getting ran over.
Keep up the good work! :)

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Review by Mrs. Populatery
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Awesome Story!
I thought it was super crazy for Andrew to sneak into Stacey's room.
I also liked the humor you used in the story.
I laughed a whole bunch.
Especially the speedo part.
I think my favorite part was when they were in the park.
As for spelling and grammar errors I didn't see any spelling errors and I suck at grammar so I can't help on that.
Keep up the good work! :)

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