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Review of What Truth?  
Review by Mrs. Populatery
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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Great Poem!
I could tell it had a very deep meaning.
I love the way you used colors to get your feelings across.
All of what you said was true.
Good Job!
Keep up the excellent work! :)

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Review by Mrs. Populatery
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Rated: E | (3.5)
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Awesome Poem!
I could feel the emotion and it has a good message.
"No one is the same."
But I feel like you could have worded the poem a little better.
Some words didn't make sense to me like:
"It there a normal,"
I think you could have worded this differently
Good Job!
Keep up the awesome work!

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Review of The Glass Heart  
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
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Great Story!
But I have a question:
Why did you made chapter 1 just a paragraph?
It was a very detailed paragraph and it really grabbed my attention but I just wanted to know it was a certain reason behind it.
I loved the story it was very interesting I can tell you're a Harry Potter fan.
You have some errors that you should look over as well.
I can see the plot is unfolding.
Good Job!
Keep up the awesome work! :D

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Review of Her Answer  
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Rated: E | (4.0)
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Awesome Poem!
You did a fantastic job with the imagery.
I could pictured the woman in the blue dress.
It seemed like she had really bid decision to make.
Good Job!
Keep up the Excellent work! :)

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Review by Mrs. Populatery
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Excellent Poem!
This is so sweet and thoughtful.
I loved every minute of it the title is perfect as well.
I hope I can have a marriage like this one day.
My favorite part was :

"If I could tell you anything

What might I say?

That sharing our life together

Gets me through each day."

I thought that was so romantic.
Fantastic Job!
Keep up the awesome work!

5 STARS FOR JUST BEING YOU! :D

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Review of Reflection - Poem  
Review by Mrs. Populatery
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Awesome Poem!
It was so beautiful and lovely!
It made me smile as I read it.
I especially loved this part
"Don't let memories fade.
Hold onto the past,
But don't let it hold you back.
Love all that have changed you,
For better or worse,
Because it's one more lesson you learned."
That's exactly how was feeling today.
I posted it on my Facebook Status I hope you don't mind...:)
Excellent Poem!
You have wonderful skills!
Keep up the good work!
5 STARS FOR BEING AWESOME! :D

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Review of cold world  
Review by Mrs. Populatery
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Awesome Poem!
I loved every minute of it!
You really have some skills here!
This would be an awesome song I bet.
All the words fit together perfectly.
I could feel the emotions in all the words you wrote.
Fantastic Job!
Keep up the Excellent Work!
5 STARS!
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Review of Feel like a Child  
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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Awe!
This was a very sad poem!
I could feel the emotion and pain of the person being used.
I'm not sure what this poem is really about but I think it's about a break up.
Or so I felt it was when I was reading it.
This poem is written very well.
This is my favorite part: "You grabbed the wine glass and shared it with me
The fluid made it resemble, my blood staining your teeth.
I relapse into colors and shapes, feeling the spin of their fantasies
Praying the only thing damaged would be my self esteem."
Keep up the good work !:D


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Review of Closed  
Review by Mrs. Populatery
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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Great Poem!
I could feel the emotion.
I tell the person in the poem was in pain.
Though, I don't really know what this poem is about.
Or what your trying to say.
But, This poem is written well.
Keep up the good work! :)

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Review of A Broken Wish.  
Review by Mrs. Populatery
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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Awe!
This Poem was so sad.
I could feel the emotion.
I could feel the pain and heartbreak as I read along.
You have an awesome gift.
Good Job!
Keep up the good work! :)

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Review of My Life  
Review by Mrs. Populatery
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Rated: E | (3.5)
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Great Speech!
It's good to have awesome friends by your side it makes
life much better when you enjoy it with people you love.
Good Job!
Keep up the awesome work! :)

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Review of Rain.  
Review by Mrs. Populatery
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Excellent Poem!
I loved every minute of it.
I loved all the different ways you thought of the rain.
I thought that was very creative and all your words were true.
I wish everyone thought of the rain as you do.
Good Job!
Keep up the awesome work! :)
5 STARS FOR BEING AWESOME! :)


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Review of Under Your Skin  
Review by Mrs. Populatery
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Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
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Great Poem!
I'm not really sure what it is about though.
I think it's about a break up but i'm not sure.
Your poem flows very well.
" Where do you out" this part doesn't really make since to me.
Good Job!
Keep up the awesome work! :)

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Review of You make me happy  
Review by Mrs. Populatery
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Rated: 13+ | (3.5)
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Great Poem!
It was very short but it has alot of meaning to it.
I thought this poem was very romantic and sweet.
I loved every minute of it!
My favorite part was the last line, it made me smile.
Good Job!
Keep up the good work! :)

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Review by Mrs. Populatery
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Excellent Poem!
I loved every minute of it.
Your poem flowed really well.
All the words fit together perfectly.
I love how you used a lot of details and imagery.
I also like how you compared the sand and the sea to a relationship.
That was very creative!
Good Job!
Keep up the awesome work!
5 STARS BECAUSE YOU ROCK! :D

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Review of Poem  
Review by Mrs. Populatery
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Rated: E | (4.0)
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Great Poem!
I'm not really sure what this poem is about.
I liked the way you used lots of details and imagery.
I was sorta able to imagine what you were talking about in my head.
Good Job!
Keep up the awesome work! :)

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Review of my baby  
Review by Mrs. Populatery
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Rated: E | (3.5)
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Good Poem!
Are you using incorrect punctuation and spelling on purpose?
If so you might want to fix that people might lecture you for it later.
The incorrect spelling and punctuation also stops the flow of the poem.
I kind of had a hard time reading it.
Anyway...that poem is good but I think it's missing something I'm not sure what though.
Good Job!
Keep up the awesome work! :)


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Review by Mrs. Populatery
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Rated: E | (4.0)
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Lol omg!
This poem is funny and so true!
I think girls who ask " Does this dress make me look fat?" are asking to be set up for failure.
Great Job!
Keep up the good work! :)

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Review of Spread  
Review by Mrs. Populatery
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Rated: E | (4.0)
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Awesome Poem!
This poem was so romantic and sweet.
I love how you compared your love to stuff.
I was able to imagine every word you said.
Good Job!
Keep up the excellent work!

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Review of Isabell  
Review by Mrs. Populatery
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Great Poem!
It was so sweet and romantic.
I'm not really sure if the man's lover broke up with him or died or both.
I loved every minute of this poem.
You have an awesome gift!
Great Job!
Keep up the good work!
I'll be looking forward to your next master piece.
5 STARS YOU ROCK!


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Review of Celebrate  
Review by Mrs. Populatery
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Awesome Poem!
They should so totally pay you for this!
If I read a advertisement poem like this I would so totally join Writing.com,
just because of how awesome and amazingly catchy this poem is!
Good Job!
Keep up the good work!
5 STARS FOR JUST BEING YOU! :D

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Review of The Dance  
Review by Mrs. Populatery
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Awesome poem!
It was so sweet and romantic.
I love how you used lots of details and imagery.
I think the last part if my favorite it kind of made me laugh because I know how much true it is.
Sometimes you just look at a guy not paying attention to what he has to say lol.
Good Job!
Keep up the awesome work!
5 STARS FOR BEING AWESOME! :)

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Review of Behind Her Mask  
Review by Mrs. Populatery
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Excellent Poem!
I loved every minute of it.
I loved how you used lots of detail and imagery.
All the words you said were true.
Sometimes the most confident people are hurting inside; hiding under a mask.
Awesome Job!
Keep up the good work!
5 STARS!!

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Review of BLACK WIDOW  
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Rated: E | (4.0)
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Cool Poem!
I not really sure with this poem is about but I like it
because i think it has a mysterious feel to it.
At first I thought u were talking about the
black widow spider but i'm not so sure any more.
I love that you used lots of imagery and details.
Good Job!
Keep up the good work! :)

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Review by Mrs. Populatery
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Excellent Story!
I could feel the emotion in everything you said.
Your words are so true.
W never realize what we have until it's gone.
Sometime you wonder if you had down things differently things wouldn't be the way they are now.
Keep up the good work!
5 STARS FOR SPEAKING THE TRUTH! :)

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