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Review of Amid the Corn  
Review by SusanFarmer
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
I enjoyed reading this.
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Review of Complex Numbers  
for entry "Relax
Review by SusanFarmer
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
I enjoyed reading this. As I get closer to retirement, your perspective is encouraging. I can relate to the "outsider" perspective also.
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Review by SusanFarmer
Rated: ASR | (5.0)
I really like this poem. Captures our cultural climate to a tee.

As a reader, the last line is the only one that didn't work for me...I found myself mentally playing with ways to turn the line into a statement--such as: "Americans starve for acceptance" or "Why Americans starve for acceptance"

The way you have it may communicate exactly what you want to communicate; just sharing my musings...This is definitely a poem that both entertains and makes the reader ponder...


*Gold* My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!.
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Review of The Dove  
Review by SusanFarmer
Rated: E | (5.0)
Very nice....Thanks for completing the February challenge!
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Review of Jewelry  
Review by SusanFarmer
Rated: E | N/A (Review only item.)
thanks so much for sharing your poems...
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Review of Ampitheater  
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thanks for writing...
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Review of Fire-pit  
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thanks for writing...
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Review of Ice  
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thanks for writing...
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Review of Flight  
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thanks for writing...
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Review of Siblings  
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nice...
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Review of Thanksgiving  
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thanks for writing...
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Review of Autumn  
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the first two lines paint a vivid word picture with the last line pulling the poem into focus...
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Review of Wisdom  
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thanks for writing...
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Review of Blizzard  
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thanks for writing....
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Review of Growth  
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very nice....
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Review by SusanFarmer
Rated: E | (4.0)
thanks for writing...
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Review of Arctic reminder  
Review by SusanFarmer
Rated: E | (4.0)
thanks for writing...
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Review by SusanFarmer
Rated: E | (4.0)
Thank you for writing...
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Review by SusanFarmer
Rated: E | (4.0)
Thanks for writing....
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Review by SusanFarmer
Rated: E | (4.5)
Thanks for writing...
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Review of Alone -revised  
Review by SusanFarmer
Rated: E | (4.0)
Thanks for writing...
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Review of My Writing Sucks  
Review by SusanFarmer
Rated: E | (5.0)
A wonderful senyru!
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Review of I'm Lost  
Review by SusanFarmer
Rated: E | (4.0)
thanks for sharing
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Review of KISSES  
Review by SusanFarmer
Rated: E | (4.0)
thanks for sharing
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Review of MY GRANDSONS  
Review by SusanFarmer
Rated: E | (4.0)
thanks for sharing
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