Nicely written details and a good word flow. Storms do take on personalities of their own. Describing June, July and August weather storms. Good call. This gets the reader's interest. Storms aren't always fun in April, either. A good presentation. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and a good word flow. Some good romantic sentiments and overtures. A good style and this holds the reader's interest. A neat rhyme pattern puts the words in motion and rounds this out with a good flair. It is always a pleasure to read your writing. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and a good word flow. Hush. Sometimes, nights are too quiet. Listening for a heartbeat. Hearing a melody. Sounds lonesome. Some sad reflections. This is creative and colorful. Looks like you spent time with this. A good presentation. Always:Megan
This holds the reader's interest. A man poisoned the woman's wine. Were they lovers? What had she done? This draws the reader in and asks question. The dialogue is easy to understand. The woman was spellbound. Creative and this gets the reader's attention. Thanks for sharing. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and a good word flow. I hate when ornaments fall off the tree. Darth Vader fell off and broke my angel ornaments. My English knight fell off the tree and broke his arm. Good descriptions and easy to follow. Creative and colorful. A good play on words from words prompt. A nice presentation. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and well rounded characters. The youngest boy likes being the baby but doesn't want to be called one. A good style and easy to follow. Cute dialogue. Easy to follow and this holds the reader's interest. The mother is pleased with them. I enjoyed reading this. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and cats are moody but beautiful. They have unique personalities and observed these qualities in your cats. A good style and easy to follow. Your cats make for good living characters. Food for thought and easy to follow. Looks like you spent time with this. This holds the reader's interest. A good presentation. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and Proverbs. Solomon. You included links and explained things about Proverbs we should all know. Looks like you spent time with this and researched this and did comparisons. This rounds out nicely. Words of wisdom and this is enlightening. I enjoyed reading this. Always; Megan
Nicely written details and a good word flow. God and Jesus see everything we do. A waving hand from us and God has a way of sending messages back. Easy to follow and this is uplifting and inspiring. A good style. Words of wisdom. I enjoyed reading this. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and a good word flow. A song. A smile. They both go together. Creative and colorful. Some good reflections. Easy to follow. Creative and colorful. A neat rhyme pattern puts the words in motion, blends them together and sums this up with a good flair. Good presentation. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and going to college is scary. I went to a small, private Catholic College and it was all new. I loved it. You will adjust and make new friends and be happy. This is well written and easy to follow. A good style. Best wishes. Always: Megan
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Nicely written details and my son is home for 10 days. He lives in Oregon and texts 5 times a year. He texts pictures of his dogs and scenery. We lose them when they grow up. A good style and easy to follow. Heart touching and well defined. I enjoyed reading this. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and seeing a moose up close and deer from a train. Some good descriptions and neat imagery. Sad this was the old man's last trip but seems like he left the world content and at peacel. Easy to follow and creative. A nice presentation. Always: Megan
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Nicely written details and mothers take care of babies better then fathers. This man used duct tape for her diaper and seems he had a plan. Entertaining and he got the hob done. Creative and colorful. I smiled as I read this. Looks like this was fun to write. I enjoyed reading this. Always: Megan
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Nicely written details and a good word flow. Lucy sounds like a Queen and Lucky dog who has everything she needs. Heartwarming with good reflections. Creative and colorful. A neat rhyme pattern puts the words in motion and rounds this out with a good flair. I enjoyed reading this. Always: Megan
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Nicely written details and a good word flow. Sad reflections. Wondering if someone you love still loves you. Heartfelt questions. Creative and colorful. Looks like you spent time with this. Easy to follow. Good romantic sentiments and nice overtures. A good presentation Always: Megan
Nicely written details and a good word flow. Storm surge. A talking dog. Well rounded characters and suitable dialogue. A dog talks through his mind. Easy to follow and a good style. Being stranded on an island and adjusting. Good storyline. Easy to follow. Looks like you spent time with this. Creative and colorful. A good presentation. Always: Megan
I went to a private Catholic Two Year College and to get an Associate Of Arts Degree. I wanted to go into Journalism but they didn't offer many Journalism Classes. I took all these classes I didn't want. Like History, Math, Astronomy and other classes. College is hard. I made 1 A and that was in Children's Literature, the only class I loved! Colleges make money at our expense and I am not sure how the education helped me. Nicely written details, easy to follow and food for thought. You researched this well. A good presentation. Always: Megan
We get older and somedays I look great and other days, like really? I hate aging but we all age. It's part of life and living through the years. Nicely written details with good reflections. A neat rhyme pattern puts the words in motion and rounds this out with a good flair. I enjoyed reading this. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and a good word flow. Broken dreams. Sounds like trees and leaves have feelings we don't know. Some good reflections and some bad ones. Easy to follow and a good style. A neat rhyme pattern puts the words in focus and rounds this out with a good flair. I enjoyed reading this. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and the Lord touches our hearts as we hope to touch his heart and do the right thing. This is uplifting and inspiring. Easy to follow and a well chosen words. Words of wisdom. A good devotional and a prayer as well. I enjoyed reading this. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and a good word flow. There are ghosts everywhere and a lighthouse has it's own stories to tell. Easy to follow and a good style. Some good reflections. A neat scenario with well chosen words. A neat rhyme pattern puts the words in prospective and rounds this out with a good flair. A ghostly presentation. Always: Megan
This is interesting. Pan's daughter. Fakahatchee. I wasn't sure what this words means. Black snakes. Yikes. Wild grasses. Mewlings of a river otter. Some good reflections. This holds the reader's interest. Looks like you spent time with this. A nice scenario. I enjoyed reading this. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and a sad story. A little boy wanting to see snow and asking his mother when it was going to snow. She said she would wake him up when it did. It snowed. She goes to wake him up but he went to Heaven and he can see snow falling. Well rounded characters and suitable dialogue. Good storyline. I enjoyed reading this. Always: Megan
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Nicely written details and I think there is a part of Michigan the boy can fish in. Detriot is where cars are made. Creative and colorful. I appreciate the humor in this. I smiled as I read this. A neat rhyme pattern puts the words in motion and tops this off with a good flair. Thanks for sharing. Always: Megan
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