Nicely written details and I grew up in the late 50's, 60's and 70's. I enjoyed the music and TV Shows. I loved Barbie and Nancy Drew. I enjoyed the ice cream man, summers at my grandparents, some things about school. Things were safer years ago, I agree. A good reminder and kids do play too many video games. Food for thought and a good presentation. Always: Megan
I never thought gym class was fair. Gym class should be for those who like sports and want to participate. No one should be forced. I feel for this kid. Nicely written details and a good torture story line. Good characters. Easy to follow. I enjoyed reading this. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and a good word flow. Join in the mirth. Another Birthday. W do dtead those. Food for thought. Ww live the best life we can. We hope our lives wil be enriched when it isnall said and done. I enjoyed the humor in this. A neat rhyme pattern blends the words together and rounds this out with a good flair. Easy to follow. I enjoyed reading this. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and sounds like the guy got lucky at getting a better paying job. Easy to follow and sometimes we wish we could have got lucky in getting the perfect job. Well rounded characters and suitable dialogue. This holds the reader's interest. I enjoyed reading this. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and a good word flow. A lovely portrait. Some good reflections. Some neat romantic sentiments and overtures. Easy to follow. Moon rising in the sky. Dreams. Seeing the woman's face and thinking of her. A good style. A few rhyme words sneak in. I enjoyed reading this. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and this is chilling. A young girl getting drugged up and killed her parents who with her in a car crash. Sad. Easy to follow and a chilling, eerie ending for her. She will be with her parents . Well rounded characters and a good style. This holds the reader's interest. I enjoyed reading this. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and a woman who doesn't want to marry a man. She is at the wedding and sees a man whom she thinks is her way out. The wedding starts and this stranger swings it on a rope and whisks her away . A good style and this holds the reader's interest. Very romantic. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and a good word flow. 9-11 was a nad day and we will never forget it. There will always be remnants and reminders of it. A good style and nice descriptions. Looks like you spent time with this. Well chosen words. A good presentation. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and a good word flow. Parents are here to teach us right from wrong and we have lids, we teach them right from wrong. A good style and easy to follow. This holds the reader's interest. A nice scenario. A good presentation. I enjoyed reading this. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and being forced to marry someone is so awful. The gurl doesn't have a choice. Well rounded characters and suitable dialogue. This holds the reader's interest. A good storyline. I don't get parents who force their kids to do this. I enjoyed reading this. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and a good word flow. Bed being a spaceship. Good one. I like the tone in this. I love writing, too. A nice style and good Sonnett format. A neat rhyme pattern puts the words in motion and rounds this out with a good flair. I enjoyed reading this. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and a good word flow. Nothing is simple especially when you get older. Some sad reflections and a good scenario . A neat style. A neat rhyme pattern puts the words in motion and rounds this out with a good flair. I enjoyed reading this. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and we can think of ourselves as being a poem, romantic or other genre. A good style and easy to follow. Some good reflections and food for thought. A neat style with well chosen words. Looks like you put some thought into this. I enjoyed reading this. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and humble is a word that I have always had to think about. This has good words of wisdom and is easy to follow. Looks like you spent time with this. This is uplifting, inspiring and enlightening. Looks like you spent time with this. A good devotional. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and a little boy thinks his parents are spying on him by planting mikes on him and spy cams on houses. The boy has bugs of his own in his parents room. He gets the last laugh. He thinks his parents are wrestling. Getting even. Well rounded characters and this holds the reader's interest. A good presentation. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and a good word flow. My father was a soldier and flew gunships. He had no regrets. Some words to live by and soldiers are brave. Be all you can be is important. A good style with nice reflections. Easy to follow. Words to live by. A good presentation. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and a good word flow. Harry is bored. Too bad. What a brat. His wife in a Pub. Louis yawned. Cute.Good call. A good style and I appreciate the humor in this. Easy to follow. Looks like you spent time with this. Entertaining and well defined. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and a goof all day is good. Going to the beach. That is a good goof all day. Easy to follow. Some good imagery and nice reflections. I waa afraid she would get caught by her boss. A good style. This holds the reader's interest from beginning to end. Well defined. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and a good word flow. I take itvtgis tree is about humans and their lives as well as a tree. Good descriptions and a nice style. This holds the reader's interest. Looks like you spent time with this. A neat rhyme pattern puts the words in order, blends them together and balances this out with a good flair. I enjoyed reading this. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and sounds like you had a few good days. Glad the medical procedure went well. Getting to watch your son play football. nice thankful Thursday for you. I love the pictures of Snoopy and the vat you included. Some good events. This holds the reader's interest. Good job of writing. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and a good word flow. Winter's dream. I am always glad for spring. A good style and easy to follow with good reflections. I like the line ice melts to a big pink dewdrop. This is heartwarming. A neat scenario. I enjoyed reading this. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and are you okay? means someone cares about you and you care about them and you covered this in your item. You gave good reasons to support your views. Easy to follow and this holds the reader's interest. Impressive writing. Always: Megan
I have never lived in a foreign country but my father was in Vietnam and flew all over and told me about their culture and ways. This has a good style and is interesting. Moving to another country, you do lead a different life. Easy to follow. This is well written. Always: Megan
Nicely written details. A man from Scentooshy. Foulushy. These are some interesting names for towns. This holds the reader's interest and you and your son writing poems together. Cute. A neat rhyme pattern puts the words in motion and rounds this out with a good flair. I enjoyed reading this. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and a good word flow. There are several ways to express love. A kitten and a puppy. God and his love. A special friend. Love is a treasure. A good scenario. A nice style and easy to follow. A neat rhyme pattern puts the words in motion and balances this out with a good flair. Always: Megan
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