Nicely written details and a good word flow. A good style. Some good reflections and nice imagery. A neat scenario. Some good memories. A neat rhyme pattern puts the words in focus, blends them together and rounds this out with a good flair. A nice presentation. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and a good word flow. Smoke dancer. An interesting dance it seems. Good descriptions and neat sound effects. A good style and looks like you spent time with this. I see a trace of a rhyme pattern that compliments this. A good presentation. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and my mother is always losing things. Like her phone, credit cards or something. I sometimes think I am losing my things as well. Well rounded characters and easy to follow. I appreciate the humor in this. A good presentation. I feel like the mother in this story. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and cute that the kids built a steam engine wagon. A joyride it seems. Well rounded characters and some good knowledge about building a steam engine wagon. Looks like this was fun to write. A good style. Good descriptions. A nice presentation. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and we can be smart and crazy at the same time. Our parents know more then we do but it is nice to get the upper hand on them. Well rounded characters and suitable dialogue. I enjoyed reading this. I seem to be finding your items today. I enjoyed reading this. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and I think I have read this before. It seems to be edited but the concept of spirituality, magic, the meaning of life and a mystery solved all play out well. Easy to follow with well rounded characters and suitable dialogue. Looks like this is Part One. I will have to read Part 2 when it gets written. A good presentation. Always: Megasn
Nicely written details and I am not a fan of rice but I get this concept. Controlling blood sugar. You gave good reasons to support the facts about cooking rice and how this medical concept works. This holds the reader's interest. I enjoyed reading this. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and I am glad the person wasn't hurt falling out the window trying to get in the cupboard to get a bowl to make meatloaf. I appreciate the humor in this but falling isn't fun. I have been there. A good style and a nice scenario. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and maybe the neighbors want to grow a forest so their house will be hidden. Easy to follow and I appreciate the humor in this. All kind of creatures hiding in the grass. Some good descriptions and a nice scenario. A neat rhyme pattern plays out and puts the words in motion. Easy to follow. I enjoyed reading this. Always: Megan
Nicely written details. Kids have a way of throwing cake and ice cream in the mix no matter what the event is. A father babysitting and telling a story about dragons and making it scary and the bottom line is the kids get ice cream. Well rounded characters and suitable dialogue. This holds the readers interest. Entertaining. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and describing Mother Nature with human qualities. Good call. A good scenario and neat imagery. Her arms embracing us. Mother Nature standing by your side. She does reside everywhere. Easy to follow. Looks like you thought about this before writing this. A good presentation. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and I think all girls feel love for their mothers but feel sheltered and trapped at the same time. Being a Princess and planning a party. Some good reflections and easy to follow. A good style and this holds the reader's interest. A good presentation. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and a TV committing suicide. Our tV should commit suicide when my husband watches those police shows, story TV and alien stuff. I laughed over the TV thing. A dog adopting a man. Sweet. I like this little story. A good style and entertaining. Always: Megan
Waves splashing across the shore makes one feel sad thinking about past things that didn't go well. Nicely written details with good reflections. Good action words and nice references of romantic sentiments and overtures. Looks like you spent time with this. I enjoyed reading this. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and I tried face masks when I sold Avon. I put one on but the cream wasnt ready so I washed it off. Once I got a black one for a free gift and it scared me so out in the trash it went. Your story. When it started to get hard, I would worry. I know what you mean about thinking about going to the ER. Would they laugh? I worked in mental health, my patients would make up excuses about wanting and needing to go to the ER. I used my judgment when something was serious. A face mask thing. Sometimes, it happens. This was well written with good descriptions. This held my interest and was scary for a few minutes. Glad it all worked out. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and a mixture of good reflections and bad luck people encounter as they go through their days. Look, listen and be proud. A good style and easy to follow. Food for thought. A neat rhyme pattern puts the words in motion and blends them together with a nice flair. Thanks for sharing. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and a woman should be in charge of her flowers but maybe the couple go half in half on flower ideas. Good descriptions and lovely reflections. Good concepts and names for the flowers. A good style and this holds the reader's interest. I enjoyed reading this. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and a clown with a baby pig, chicken and a dog. They get a special treat and the little pig chokes but CPR is performed and the little pig is saved. Heartwarming and the money spent on treats is used for charity. I am glad the pig was saved. Well rounded characters and cute. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and a hiker getting lost and found an abandoned cabin and the paintings on the wall scared him. He stayed anyway. He wakes up and finds windows where paintings were. This holds the reader's interest and has a mystery about it. Creative and easy to follow. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and there are better jobs a person can like then doing the one he is working at, at the moment. A good style and easy to follow and the person's new job lead to other things he was missing out on. A neat rhyme pattern sums this up with a good flair. I enjoyed reading this. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and well rounded characters with suitable dialogue. The father and his children trying to reconnect. Some helpful people giving advice. Seems like the father made new friends and reconnected with his children. A good style and easy to follow. I enjoyed reading this. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and a cautionary gala. Some good reflections and easy to follow. S fantasy kind of purpose. Blessings. Knowledge and eagerness. A good style and some well chosen words make a good scenario. A neat rhyme pattern puts the words in focus and gives this a good flair. Thanks for sharing. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and a good word flow. Vegan. I have thought of being Vegan. Simplify. Paying bills. Wanting to do things differently. Easy to relate to. A good style. Some good plans. A neat rhyme pattern puts the words in motion and rounds this out with a good flair. Good concepts. Always: Megan
Sometimes in life, we think things are taken away from us like at a job or family things but we try to work them out. Nicely written details and a good word flow. Some good reflections at the end about the smile of the earth, glitter of the sun and paving the way to rekindle. A good style and nice message in this short pem. Thanks for sharing. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and sometimes, life can be beautiful. We do ask why we are here. We see good things in life as well as the bad. I appreciate your views and I get this. Looks like you spent time with this and put some thought into this. A good presentation Always: Megan
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