Nicely written details and a good word flow. The sea is important to us all. A good scenario. Lovely reflections and a good scenario. Looks like you spent time with this. Creative and colorful. Well chosen words. I feel like was there looking at the ocean. Ebb. Flow. Corral fans. Edge of the sea. Salt in our tears.
Some good lines. A good presentation. Always: Megan
Life can be a mystery. Easy to follow. Why are we even here? I ask that question a lot. Things do seem to disappear. A good style. A nice scenario. Good details. Looks like you put some thought into this. Food for thought. I enjoyed reading this. Always: Megan
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Nicely written details and crescent rolls and making them like cinnamon rolls as resurrection rolls. Jesus isn't there when children open them. Calling them resurrection rolls. Neat. Some good ingredients and a good recipe. I want some. I enjoyed reading this. Always: Megan
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A new number system and hand gestures for love. Nicely written details and a good word flow. Good romantic overtures and sentiments. Well rounded characters and suitable dialogue. A good style and easy to follow. Nice scenario. Looks like this was fun to write. I enjoyed reading this. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and a little boy loves his cookies. He is a good boy in school and earned his cookie but wouldn't share with his friend. He told him to tell his Mom to go to the grocery store and buy some Well rounded characters and suitable dialogue. Too cute. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and a good word flow. Just me is always nice. A good style. Cute and entertaining. A neat rhyme pattern puts the words in motion, blends them together and sums this up with a good flair. A nice play on words. A nice presentation. Always: Megan
Days off never seemed like days off. Yo always had things to do. Paying bills. Having enough money. Budgeting your time. Nicely written details and a good word flow. Easy to follow. Looks like you spent time with this. Down to the wir. A good presentation. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and Toto being told to tell Aunt Em about the scarecrow, tinman, and lion. Aunt Em asking Dorothy why did Toto remember more then she did about where she was. Dorothy's answer was funny. I won;[t give it away in case someone else wants to read this story. A good presentation and entertaining. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and ugliness hides behind a smile we trust at times. Good scenarios and sad. Easy to follow and food for thought. A man holding a gun while a policeman comforts his son. A man with a cute dog trying to steal cars. A lot to think about. A good presentation. Well defined writing. Always: Megan
Love makes the world go round. If there was more love, we wouldn't have wars and romances. Life isn't easy. We do need love. A good scenario. Nicely written details and a good word flow. Easy to follow. A good style. A neat rhyme pattern puts the words in motion and rounds this out with a good flair. Thanks for sharing. Always: Megan
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Nicely written details and well rounded characters and suitable dialogue. It is like Victoria is an imaginary friend but Emily and Grandma acted like she was real. Victoria seemed to be in charge and do only what she wanted to do. Emily became a children's book author . Easy to follow and this holds the reader's interest. A good presentation. Always: Megan
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Nicely written details and a good word flow. Knee replacement is a dirty word. Been there. Still healing. Doing things on WDC are fun. Keeps us going. Looks like you spent time with this. A neat rhyme pattern puts the words in motion and rounds this out with a good flair. I enjoyed reading this. Always: Megan
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It means a lot England cares about America. I love England and the English. Nicely written details and heartfelt words. Good reflections. This warms my heart. A neat rhyme pattern puts the words in motion and rounds this out with a good flair. Shine on. We all need to do this. A good presentation. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and a good word flow. We do like looking back on memories and treasure the good ones. Easy to follow. A good style and this holds the reader's interest. Lovely reflections. A neat rhyme pattern puts the words in motion and rounds this out with a good flair. I like the image included of the bridge and water. I enjoyed reading this. Always: Megan
First Impression: I like bunnies and I wrote a poem for this prompt. I was anxious to read your take on this. After the last snow fell, a rainbow emerged. A cute way to start a poem. Mother nature had her sense of humor. Father nature didn't know what to think. So, I had to read more and I am here to give a review and my observations.
What needs your attention: The poor little bunny sliding on glass after slipping on a stone. Did he get hurt? I just wonder why there was a rainbow after the snow?
Part I liked best: A rainbow emerged. The bunny had floppy, striped ears. This is colorful and flowers bloomed. I like the different types used. This adds contrast.
Overall Impression: A neat rhyme pattern puts the words in motion and rounds this out with a good flair. The words blend well together. A good style with some action. This holds the reader's attention. Looks like you put some thought into this. A good presentation. I was hoping the bunny got a happy ending. This poem has nice descriptions of the weather. I enjoyed reading this.
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Nicely written details and seems like the person met an alien who hsd answers to his var problems. The person fell asleep and woke up to some solution in a container and thiscwas the answer to hos car problems and maybe the world. Well rounded characters and suitable dialogue. Entertaining. I enjoyed reading this. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and a good word flow. A nice style and this holds the reader's interest. Lovely reflections. Stars fall from the sky. They return to grass and flowers and be cleansed with rain and waters. This holds the reader's interest. This holds the reader's interest. I enjoyed reading this. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and I always felt sorry for the Princess having to sleep on all those mattresses. She felt the pea at least. A good retelling. A good style and creative. A neat rhyme pattern puts the words perspective and rounds this out with a good flair. I enjoyed reading this. Always: Megan
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Nicely written details and a good word flow. Bequest. We plant a tree. The tree will outlive us. Good call. Creative and colorful. Looks like you spent time with this. A neat rhyme pattern puts the words in motion and rounds this out with a good flair. I enjoyed reading this. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and I can't picture myself as Huckleberry Finn out fishing and living in that time. I had to smile. This was easy to follow and made me smile. Log cabins. A life of long ago. Easy to follow and looks like you spent time with this. You seem happy. Creative and colorful. Entertaining. Always: Megan
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Nicely written details and a good word flow. Devotion to God is so important and we go through problems and sometimes forget he is there. A good reminder and easy to follow. This is uplifting and inspiring with words of wisdom. Food for thought. Beautifully stated. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and I hate telemarketers and insurance salesmen. I always feel uncomfortable with salesmen. I get how this person feels. Easy to follow with well rounded characters and suitable dialogue. Creative and been there like the character. A good presentation. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and a good word flow. This is like a person was consumed by a shadow that tried to suck the life out of him. This holds the reader's interest. A good style and looks like you spent time with this. Good descriptions and eerie as well as spooky. A neat rhyme pattern puts the words in motion and rounds this out with a good flair. I enjoyed reading this. Always: Megan
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Nicely written details and a good word flow. Removing pins and needles . You dreamed of this. Dreams can be scary I was thinking of Princess and the Pea as I read this. Creative and colorful with good descriptions. I enjoyed the humor in this. A good style and good scenario with well chosen words Looks like this was fun to write. A good presentation. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and a good word flow. Sounds like the girl is a ghost and her picture hangs in the hall. Dancing at a ball. A good style and easy to follow. Creative and colorful. This holds the reader's interest. Good reflections. A neat rhyme pattern sums this up. I enjoyed reading this. Always: Megan
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