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Review of Pests  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Thank you very much for the laughter when you wrote about blowing up the house because of a mouse. I definitely dislike the chemicals humans use for the many reasons we have. What some people consider pests others see as beneficial. You pose good questions. The word flow is smooth and carries the reader vividly from beginning to the ending.

Thank you for writing and sharing your word art about the chemicals and other stuff humans use for pest control with me and WdC members.


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In affiliation with disABILITY WRITERS GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)
I could envision two people deeply in love and also an artist deeply in love with their chosen art form. Smoothly I was taken from beginning to ending of your poem. You kept me interested in reading as my imagination showed the details of your poem story.

Thank you for writing and sharing your word art about an artist with me and WdC members.


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Review of Pretender  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
I could feel the shuddering as morals slip slide downward. You ask questions that provoke deep thinking and soul searching which I too ponder. You all offer hope for better decisions and positive changes. Most of all your words evoked the thought about {when good men do nothing evil flourishes]--not a quote.

Thank you for writing and for sharing you thought provoking poem with me and WdC members.


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Review of Free as a bird  
In affiliation with disABILITY WRITERS GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)
I watched as you flew to the heavens and met with Jesus. I could feel the happiness as you went home to be in heaven. I know of the hope through your words.

Thank you for writing and sharing your word art about being home in heaven with me and WdC members.


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In affiliation with disABILITY WRITERS GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Your worlds remind me of a poetic story of victory sweet yet with some sourness because although there was victory for Calus, it seems there is potential for defeat. I was able to follow the events and see in my mind the characters actions. The plot kept me interested in the story.

Thank you for writing and for sharing your word art with me and WdC members.


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Review of Our Rose  
In affiliation with disABILITY WRITERS GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)
This is an emotional writing that brings the reader close to the events. It captures details of a family who has loss of health and family members. I felt sadness and wished I could have helped.

Thank you for writing this amazing story about a family struggling with illness and loss and for sharing your word art with me and WdC members.


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Review of A Strange Guest  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
The rhythm of your words carried me gently from the beginning to ending of your wonderful story. I could see her clearly as if she were here with me. In my imagination I watched her come and go, and do what she could to get you to follow her. I'm very glad you followed her and found her puppies. It's wonderful to know everyone thrived and found forever wonderful homes.

Thank you for writing this wonderful poetic story about the mother dog who fou nd you and for sharing your word art with me and WdC members.


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Review of What Now  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
My friend gets overwhelmed so I have an outside looking in idea about this situation. I have had to stop a project and consider options. I could see the scene, the character, and feel the emotions through your words. I thought about death and moving toward the light as I read your poem. Reading the additional imformation showed me your poem was about being overwhelmed.

Thank you for writing and for sharing your overwhelm poem word art with me and WdC members.


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In affiliation with disABILITY WRITERS GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)
While reading your story about the painting and how you became a part of it embracing the details, I could see you walking into the picture touching, breathing in, and admiring it thoroughly. I could feel the peacefulness and wonder of it all. It was as if I also walked into the picture and experienced it completely with you.

Thank you for writing and for sharing your word art about the weeping willow picture with me and WdC members.


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Review of For Her  
In affiliation with disABILITY WRITERS GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Reading your words shows me someone respected and loved, the yearning to be with this person, and hope to be with them in the future or even in a different universe.

Thank you for writing and for sharing your word art about a loved one with me and WdC members.


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In affiliation with disABILITY WRITERS GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Ok, you made me hungry for Pi(e) hand it over!

Actually, I didn't think about adding cheese, I'm not sure if I would do this, but having a sense of adventure, I might try a taste. I thought about this all mixed up but maybe not. You have me considering leaving out coffee because the other items may not know how to swim.

Now you have my imagination running wild.

Ok, I admit your breakfast is reasonable and probably quite tasty. My mouth is watering.

Your story poem is easy to read and understand, visualize, and smell. I like cinnamon and took a wif and it smells wonderful.

Thank you for writing about pi(e) and for sharing your word art with me and WdC members.


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In affiliation with disABILITY WRITERS GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)
I felt foreboding as I read your words. The past is history we can learn from should we choose to do this. Tomorrow can paralie or move us into action. Watching and doing nothing can result in a future we do not want. These thoughts came to me as I read what you wrote.

Thank you for writing and sharing your word art with me and WdC members.


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Review of Holding  
In affiliation with disABILITY WRITERS GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)
I believe that victory is yours. As with the things we experience it is but one step at a time. Taking a step then another in a positive way brings us closer to victory. I can only imagine what you felt in the past, feel, and might feel in the future, but I hope you will feel much better.

You wrote showing many emotions, a close-up of actions, and also of hope that is hanging on. Hope I hope is doing more than hanging on these days.

I was distracted for a second by the missing apostrophe in "dont".

Thank you for writing and sharing your word art with me and WdC members.

Door, gotta go.


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Review of A Visual Echo  
In affiliation with disABILITY WRITERS GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Your words show vivid details of the picture and the picture mirrors the details of your words. I enjoyed the smooth rhythm of your poem, the ease of reading your words, and the relaxation felt as each word drew me into your poetry story.

Thank you for writing and for sharing your word art with me and WdC members.


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In affiliation with disABILITY WRITERS GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)
I too appreciate these things. The scenes are easy to see in my mind's eye. I could feel peace and relaxation along with trust and joy. I trust God for my life. He is as you show in your words strength and glorious joy. Your words work well together to convey the meaning of your story.

Thank you for writing this poem and for sharing your word art with me and WdC members.


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Review of Manatee  
In affiliation with disABILITY WRITERS GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)
I feel for these placid, kind, and easygoing creatures of the sea as well as for all animals who endure the trials and tribulations that humanity has thrust into their horrible circumstances because of greed and heartless actions. Humans should be mindful of their lives. We should be kind to them. They only want to survive. I could see these magnificent creatures through your words.

Thank you for writing about humanity and the wonderful creatures who need our help and understanding and sharing your word art with me and WdC members.


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Review of Moclips  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
I glided seemlesssly through your story on well-chosen and placed words. The pictures of the scenes and actions of the people are easy to see in the imagination guided by a rhythmic and bouncy joyful poem. I could smell the aroma of the bay bouquet and the tantalizing wafts of food. I could feel the tiredness at the end of the day.

Thank you for writing about a day at the bay and sharing your word art with me and WdC members.


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In affiliation with disABILITY WRITERS GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)
As I read your poem the words rhythmically carried me through this story of long-lost love. I felt the longing for the distance to be closed and for the touch. I could see the sky and sea far apart and hands reaching upward.

Thank you for writing and sharing your word art about love with me and WdC members.


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In affiliation with disABILITY WRITERS GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)
The cards remind me of pictures of past and future things. Visualizing the actions of manipulating the cards is easy for me as I read your words. Your story is easy to follow and understand. The words made sounds that worked well together as in a musical arrangement.

Thank you for writing your card story and sharing your word art with me and WdC members.


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In affiliation with disABILITY WRITERS GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)
These are very wonderful and deep words to be respected and pondered because befriending God means having a thorough, complete, and regular relationship. Spending as much time with Him each day as humanly possible. My heart jumped with Joy when I read your words. My spirit embraced the words of wisdom you wrote. I can see this only in this way.

Thank you for writing and for sharing your word art about a relationship with God with me and WdC members.


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In affiliation with disABILITY WRITERS GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Your creative idea about being in line with God and His plans by using the idea of tuning in to His radio program is music to my ears. People can most likely relate to your message because you used something familiar. Many times people listen to music and other stuff but don't realize they can listen to what God has for them.

Thank you for writing about tuning in to God and sharing your word art with me and WdC members.


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Review of THE ICON  
In affiliation with disABILITY WRITERS GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)
While reading your story I could visualize these events. I could feel the challenges as if they were happening to me, and relate because although I wasn't a child when I lost my parents I have had this experience. The unknown can be a heavy burden which I also have experienced and hope has been lightened for you. You gave me a closeup and personal view of your life and how it affected you. I got to know you and your family.

Thank you for writing this story and sharing your word art with me and WdC members.


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Review of Reminiscences  
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Rated: ASR | (5.0)
I enjoyed the funny parts about the monkeys. Thank you very much for the laughter. Your poem as I read it had a bouncy and happy rhythm to it. The tone seemed to be light-hearted. It was as if the dinosaur also was happy. Your words worked well together showing me a wonderful view of this story.

Thank you for writing this poem about the dinosaur and sharing your word art with me and wdC members.


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In affiliation with disABILITY WRITERS GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)
I smiled when I read The "one" creator. It made my heart sing with joy. Your poem seemed to start not in black but mostly in grey. As it became lighter colors began to shine.You took it from the human view point and turned it toward the creator. It shines very brightly because of the creator in your words.

Thank you for writing words to give pause for thought and sharing your word art that shines the creator with me and WdC members.


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Review of " Can't Rush "  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Your words brought in my mind scenes of Gods hands holding the universe together and doing great works. I felt a peacefulness as I read your word art.

Thank you very much for sharing your word art about God with me and WdC members. I'm glad you are writing and glorifying God through your words.


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