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Rated: E | (5.0)
I could feel the frightening emotions of experiencing the unknown increase as I read your poem. The sound of something spooky emitting in the dark added to this experience. I could hear and imagine the terrors of the night which made me want to hide from something unseen. Your poem is believable and the scenes are realistic.

Thank you for writing and sharing your spooky poem with me and WdC members.


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In affiliation with disABILITY WRITERS GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)
These people have great respect for themselves and their friendships because they do not overpower each other. I could imagine the dragons flying, resting, and watching over the people. The actions of the people are easy to imagine and I could see the scenes clearly in my mind. This story, characters, and scenes are believable.

Thank you for writing and sharing your word art with me and WdC members.


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Review of Facebook Photos  
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Your story is believable because some people want revenge, they do not consider a better alternative. I could see the student at the computer digging up the information. The teacher is believable because people like to relax and have fun after a hard day's work. The scenes are realistic and easy to imagine.

Thank you for writing and sharing your word art with me and WdC members.


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In affiliation with disABILITY WRITERS GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)
I know that being modest is a good thing, especially because flaunting oneself can lead to trouble. It is not a good idea to seduce someone. A marriage is best when is of respect for each other. In your words, you showed this to be the best choice.

Thank you for writing and sharing your word art with me and WdC members.


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In affiliation with disABILITY WRITERS GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)
I can imagine hands on the bible and swearing an oath while telling a falsehood with a smile. I can hope that politics is purged of lies, but humans tend to do whatever it takes to get what they want when they have no respect for God and scripture. You showed politics as it has been for a long time. I hope things change for the better. I was able to imagine the scenes, characters, and events.

Thank you for writing and sharing your word art about politics with me and WdC members.


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Review of Never Tell  
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Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
Trust is broken by the person you would expect to keep this trust. A family member betraying trust by murdering a sibling. It reminds me of Cane and Able when jealousy caused the first murder. Sometimes even trusting family can be dangerous. You wrote a believable story with characters who act normally and a scene that is a good fit for this story.

Thank you for writing and sharing your word art with me and WdC members.


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In affiliation with disABILITY WRITERS GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)
The characters had an adventure they didn't expect because nature changed the environment. I was surprised someone didn't try to prank someone else by hiding their clothes which is the way similar stories have gone in the plot. Your story, characters, and scene are believable. I could imagine the details.

Thank you for writing and sharing this story word art adventure with me and WdC members.


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In affiliation with disABILITY WRITERS GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Your words reminded me of stories or events as I read your poem, but I switched to considering emotions and the inner drive of humanity. Both of these can work together to tell a story be it true or fiction, yet it can also show a writer battling as the words come slowly and with much effort.

Thank you for writing and sharing your word art with me and WdCX members.


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In affiliation with disABILITY WRITERS GROUP  
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
As you write about the dismal loneliness of Tess and then show her longing for someone I could see the scene and Tess waiting for someone. Feeling through your words her longing turned to fright, then as she follows the person she gets her kiss and a wedding and a future with her special person makes the scene warm and cozy with the feeling of peace.

Thank you for writing and sharing this poem love story word art with me and WdC members.


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In affiliation with disABILITY WRITERS GROUP  
Rated: E | (4.0)
This must have been a very funny situation at least as I visualize it is very funny. I did notice issues with proper punctuation. There are typos that distract me from reading this story.

Thank you for writing and sharing your word art with me and WdC members about the rat stuck in the Coke bottle.


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Review of The Ballroom  
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Away in a corner alone even with a beautiful smile in sight is something I pictured as I read and wondered what prevented a natural reaction to get to know the girl. There must have been doubt and disbelief that meeting and getting to know someone is possible. It occurred to me that perhaps a spirit may have interfered with the potential relationship. Your story is believable because the characters are believable along with the circumstances.

Thank you for writing and sharing your poem story with me and WdC members.


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Review of No language  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
In your poem, it seems that there is a language problem or medical issue preventing the little girl from talking. I suspect there is too much input and pressure causing her to want to disappear even though she longs to communicate. I could visualize people surrounding her and talking. I could feel her mentally shrinking away.

Thank you for writing and sharing your poem word art about the girl who has much to say and isn't able to communicate.


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Review of The Mural  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
That must have been a fantastic mural according to what I know of this story. I remember a similar story where the children did the painting. It is possibly something in a movie or TV show years ago. Your plot, characters, scene, and dialogue are realistic and believable.

Thank you for writing and sharing your artistic story word art with me and WdC members.


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In affiliation with disABILITY WRITERS GROUP  
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Yes the energy, I'm very glad you mentioned the energy because of the importance of realizing how important it is to understand about the energy. Your story, characters, scenes, and events are believable because people behave similarly to strange and unexpected situations.

Thank you for writing this story and sharing your word art with me and WdC members.


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Review of Daring to Dance  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Dare to try I consider an invitation, thank you. I prefer something like "just do it. or go for it!" I enjoyed your enthusiasm for writing poetry and the way you encouraged people to write freely without allowing the critic to enter into the dance of words and imagination. Your poem was easy to read and understand. I was not distracted from reading and taking in your advice, encouragement, and devotion to writing poetry and giving future poets reasons to write.

Thank you for writing and sharing your wisdom about writing poetry with me and WdC members.


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In affiliation with disABILITY WRITERS GROUP  
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
I could feel the burning pain as you described it in your words. The scenes are illuminated with the emotions you share describing them. Your inside turmoil as you watch a loved one struggle with their pain beings me back to the memories of the beginning of your poem and I know you are reliving your experiences helpless to do anything that would make a positive difference.

Thank you for writing and sharing this emotional poem with me and WdC members.


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Review of Positivity  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
I enjoyed reading your uplifting and encouraging poem. I felt lighter as I read your words and appreciate the advice for enjoying life and each day. I do my best to be positive which is why your poem resonated with me so well.

Thank you for writing and for sharing your word art in a positively positive poem with me and WdC members.


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In affiliation with disABILITY WRITERS GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Your poem drew me into a world of love and excitement only to have it all fall apart. Sadness of the loss of friendship and more, love, that seemed to be wanted and yet was not given. Your words showed the entire relationship as basically one-sided. It is sad when relationships do not work out as we humans expect.

Thank you for writing your poem and sharing you word art with me and WdC members.


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In affiliation with disABILITY WRITERS GROUP  
Rated: ASR | (5.0)
The idea of an unknown friend in the time of need gifting a home to a stranger is an awesome story be it real or a fictional plot of fiction based on fact. The beginning, middle, and ending, especially the ending kept me reading because this story held my interest and focus on the who, what, why part of my curiosity. everything about this story is believable because it is based on what people would do and hoe they would possibly react in such a situation.

Thank you for writing and for sharing your word art about a home gift by a stranger with me and WdC members.


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In affiliation with disABILITY WRITERS GROUP  
Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
I wonder what it looked like as she explored the castle. Did she creep, tremble, move haltingly, or something else? How did she feel, nervous creating shaking hands, a squeamish stomach, nausea and acid mixing about, or something else? Was her mind racing and thinking possible scary thoughts or other ideas?

What else was happening to the characters in this story? Internal and external responses or thoughts?

The characters are believable, the scene is easy to imagine, and the plot has potential.

Thank you for writing and sharing your word art with me and WdC members.


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In affiliation with disABILITY WRITERS GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Family and friends are important. Jesus show this and much more to us when He walked the Earth. In your words I could see the situations. I understand what you are writing about according to my knowledge, experience, and what I can relate to that you have written. Much of what you wrote is in my opinion very true and I hope we can return to nature and a simple way of life with less emphasis on technology and more on caring for each other rather than fighting with each other.

Thank you for writing about humanity and refocusing on what is important and sharing your word art with me and WdC members.


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Review of " THE LORD ''  
In affiliation with disABILITY WRITERS GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)
I like the way you wrote about who God is and showed His glory. It is easy to read your words and find peace within them. I could feel your strong foundation which is steadfast. I'm glad you have a good relationship with God.

Thank you for writing about God and sharing your word art with me and WdC members.


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In affiliation with disABILITY WRITERS GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)
You wrote a nice article which people who know little about this information can understand. Placing resources with your article piques my interest in reading more about Quantum Entanglement. I was not distracted by errors and enjoyed your writing style.

Thank you for introducing me to this subject ajd sharing your word art with me and WdC members.


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In affiliation with disABILITY WRITERS GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)
This tail wagging tale has a good spin on puzzles, marriage, and customs, along with dreadful consequences. I agree that TV is ok, but often too much eats up valuable time and can in some cases be deadly if the necessities are not properly taken care of. I could imagine the unbearable high pitch and agonizing pain of the wrath of a spouse who felt neglected.

Thank you for writing this story of TV and a wife who is angry at the neglect cat of Hubby and for sharing your word art with me and WdC members.


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Rated: ASR | (4.5)
You wrote a nice screenplay-style manuscript. The scene, characters, plot, and verbiage are believable because the characters talk naturally and act naturally, the scene is easy to visualize because it is a typical coffee shop or so it seems, and the ending is a nice twist that pulls everything together and is a surprise.

Thank you for writing this unique story and sharing your word art with me and WdC members.

There are a few typos.


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