Good question. I was a little confused, but I reread it again and understood. I chose Kale because I haven't encountered a character with that name. Rienna and Kiera have been used quite frequently in magical stories. I like Kale also because it's a strong name. I hope this helps. Weeowl
Woah! That was pretty freaky! It was completely unexpected and that's what makes great writing. I was like oh my goodness! Thank you for sharing your talent. This is an interesting first poem and I must admit that I'm intrigued to see what comes out next! Weeowl
Wow! This is incredible! Not only do you write well, but I learned something today. I didn't realize the struggles some of my ancestors may have gone through. Thank you for sharing this story of heritage. It's a great thing to put out there and you've done it! Kudos! Weeowl
This is one of the most interesting quizzes I have taken and I thoroughly enjoyed it! I found myself laughing at the answers and was happy that I got a 65. I'll do better next time, I promise ;) There is that little evil side to me that peeks out and says boo once and again. With this quiz I had a chance to see it ;) Weeowl
I love this poem! It's a wonderful, sentimental piece that captures that moment of shock and tragedy. Our heart feels so much and in that moment of grief it's hard to move on. I remember the funerals of my grandparents and I'm dreading the upcoming funeral for my last living grandpa. I take the knowledge that he is aware and ready and find comfort in that, but I will allow myself the honor of feeling the emotion of grief. May you continue to honor her! weeowl
Phew that was close! I was like "BLAH!" GAG ME WITH a SPOON! ;) When was the last time you heard that one? Good question. We always like to vent. You should make one about females and I'm sure the response would be fantastic! Thanks for letting me gag :) Weeowl
Interesting question. I'm very much a night owl. Unfortuneately I have a day job, but when I become the published author and can write full time, I will be switching to night again! Strange as it is I need the sun to be happy...hmmm...sounds like I'm in a pickle :) What does one do in a pickle like this? Weeowl
short is right, but let me just say that you erected a statue, made me proud and then you made it crumble! I felt like a part of me crumbled! Congratulations on creating IMPACT while saying as little as possible. I of course wanted more, but you know what, it works fabulously just the way it is! Write ON! :D Weeowl
This is a great poem! It's so true, too. The treasures come in spontaneous moments and I LOVED the image of holding it like cupped water in your hands. I could feel and see it slipping away. My editor said that I needed an antagonist. For the last 18 days I was struggling, thinking, etc. Then, after a day off BOOM IT HIT ME! :D I spoke with her last night and she loves it! ;) I'm writing the third draft this weekend. Weeowl
Great job! I like this question and apparently we all agree. Now, when I come to writing.com, I can read the poetry silently but still hear it in my head. It's a pretty cool talent I have :0) because it doesn't disturb my boss. When it comes to my reading, I have found that reading it outloud does contribute to corrections..a.nd that includes my short stories as well. Weeowl
that is scary! haunted houses where people jump out at you really make my heart beat faster. I'm glad someone handed you tissue. I think I want to write about my scariest moment ever...especially since it is halloween and all. keep writing. weeowl
This is a great poem. It's sensual and yet you speak of an armpit. It doesn't matter what part of the body your speak of...it's a moment between two lovers. I enjoyed reading this poem and I like the fact that you gave the spanish version as well. You are diverse in many aspects. Weeowl
It's a good start! It's a great description. It's a great title. Did you mean this to be an interactive story? I think you should finish it! There's so many ways that you could go with this story. Please let me know when it's finished. I'd love to read it! Weeowl
Wow! This is outstanding and I'm so happy that you wrote it! Your writing is passionate and the subject you speak of is passionate. I agree with your stance 100%. I admit, I suffer from depression. The difference this time is that I am seeing these happy moments with the hopes that they will add up to the day where I can again say "I'm not depressed." It can be something like seeing a butterfly (or being kissed by one). It can be walking outside of a building and feeling the wind blow THROUGH me. It can be spending time with my Grandpa whose time is limited. I too want something more, but I'm learning to be happy with what I have. You are amazing! Weeowl
UMMM Ahh. I was scared :P You can do it! Write about a scary moment! I wanted to read it and found this. It's disappointing to say the least. You can even go with the same title. Just write something. I mean, you still got a reaction out of me, but I'm sure this isn't the kind of reaction you were wanting. Let me know when you write something. Weeowl
Wow! This pushes my anorexia to a whole new level :P I know it's more than food. It also seems to be a poem about a closet vegan. As someone who battles with the eating disease, it is something that I relate to. The most important thing about this poem is that I reacted to it and that is one clue to writing good poetry. Thanks for sharing! weeowl
This is a good story. It proves that love is anywhere, even in a line to get 10 on pump 3. I was a little shocked about his girlfriend, but since you, the author, was okay with it, I got over it. I enjoyed witnessing a love like this. Thanks for writing this and sharing! Weeowl
AMAZING IMAGES!! Adding the adjectives in there like knobby tires and tacky dirt are perfect for describing what it is you see and want us to see! I'm standing up right now clapping and cheering for this! And the beginning! That is incredible! Thanks for sharing! Weeowl
Congratulations my writing friend. It's true what you said that all you need is a little pinpoint of hope. I've used that image in my own life and to help others in desperate situations. I Like the showing of expansion...it's like your eyes opened up...your life started over again when you hear her angelic voice. May your love continue to grow! just a few spelling errors prey to pray and chioce to choice. That's it! :0) Write on! Weeowl
Excellant poem! I too have this love of Native Americans. I moved to California for a while and I went for a drive to get familiar with my new surroundings. We stopped in a thrift store and I was face to face with my first Native American man...okay, actually it was face to thigh or something like that. I first saw his feet...wearing thongs...but it was only because he was out in public...I knew he danced and walked barefoot as his feet (which were HUGE!) had callouses on them. I think I was drooling and my heart rate increased several notches. And what did we say in this moment? "Hi." Oh what a moment! Your poem rings true to my feelings toward Native American men. Weeowl
BRAVO! You stand out in that crowd of "normals"! I like the exotic aspect. I'm glad that there's individuals out there. I once bought a shirt that says "You laugh at me because I'm different, I laugh at you because you are all the same!" In a world of conformity, thinking outside the crowd is definitely worth kudos! Weeowl
This is a great question. I saw several stories I'd like to read. I chose Native American stories because they enlighten me the most. Then the physical aspect was thinking "Kidnapped by a hot guy" It was hard to choose b/c all were good choices. I hope this helps! Weeowl
Talk about dreaming big! ;D I love this question! I chose the laughing ring because laughing is as contagious as yawning. I have depression and if I had that ring, the depression would be felt less. On the positive side of depression most of the world's best authors were depressed :D hehehe. Although, absolute freedom and the license not to work sounds fabulous...but I worried that meant writing so I didn't choose that. Thanks for enlightening my day! Weeowl
This isn't what I was expecting. One of the great things about surprises :) I chose food because I have no appetite. I drink plenty though. As far as my name...I feel that it's my identity...it makes me question my importance to "the name." Actually if I could easily live without is the television. weeowl
Wow! This is a great creative piece of writing that made me start itching everywhere :P You're very descriptive. There are some punctuation issues and spelling issues, but nothing too disturbing to the flow. Also, check your tenses. It waxes and wanes between present and past. All in all, I was very impressed with your work and my aracnophobia is kicking in yet again :P The black widow, huh? :) Clever, very very clever! Write on! Weeowl
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