Mother Teresa indeed inspired many over the generations of her life! I find the rhyme a little too neat but still enjoyed the poem. It shows your heart.
Well written. With this, you step back into Bible times. You see David's frustration and the reassurance he receives from God - his God. I enjoyed this glimpse into David's life while he hid from Saul. Well done!
I honestly don't approve of using language in writing however, you used it at two key places. There is a solution for feeling stuck. Keep seeking it out.
Interesting... Writing is a good way to express how we feel, even if it's dark anger and fear. It's extremely hard to go through times when all we want is to end the pain and anger. What if there was a light through this darkness? Not only just a light but the Light? Have you ever heard of Casting Crown's song, 'Set Me Free'? It's very encouraging. Anyway, I enjoyed the poem. It truly showed where you are at.
Very intriguing poem on the fight against cancer. It seems as if the poet has almost lost hope yet he's encouraging the person with cancer not to give in. It's hard to lose a loved one. I know... Well, I hope that this helps.
This shows your heart. It truly holds promise. Faith in the Lord can be extremely hard at times and often we forget that those trials are opportunities to grow. Don't forget the rainbows.
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