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Review of MOURNING  
Review by Yellow Rose
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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I am merely a reader.
I will not dissect your work.
I will tell if emotions surfaced.
I am not educated enough to do what the other reviewers do.
Hopefully you will find my review helpful in that a person read your work and expressed an opinion.


When we loose someone we love we go through a series of emotional challenges. The grief is so deep inside. As we age, we find illness and pain are just part of it.
After a while it becomes to much and we wonder how much longer before fate steps in.
Right now our character is so depressed that there is no doubt God is in charge.
Secretly wanting it to come sooner than later.

Thank you for sharing.
This piece should be easy for many to relate to.



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Review of Sunsets  
Review by Yellow Rose
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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I am merely a reader.
I will not dissect your work.
I will tell if emotions surfaced.
I am not educated enough to do what the other reviewers do.
Hopefully you will find my review helpful in that a person read your work and expressed an opinion.


To share a spectacular sunset with the one you love is better than gold.
Our author brings to life the colors and transition of the clouds and the sun as it makes it's way below the horizon.
This is peaceful and touching.
Using the lovers eyes as mirrors to view the sunset. Those eyes capturing the view and heart as the piece suggest.

Thank you for sharing.


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Review of Woods  
Review by Yellow Rose
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Rated: E | (4.0)
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I am merely a reader.
I will not dissect your work.
I will tell if emotions surfaced.
I am not educated enough to do what the other reviewers do.
Hopefully you will find my review helpful in that a person read your work and expressed an opinion.


Alone in the woods she is running from hurt. She is troubled and is escaping the torment.
She hears a noise when she stops to rest. The noise makes her run farther into the woods.
She can't figure out where it is coming from. There is the noise again.
She makes her way out of the woods and realizes where the noise is coming from.
She was surprised but when she reads the message she was even more frightened.

Thank you for sharing.


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Review of Never a Father  
Review by Yellow Rose
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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I am merely a reader.
I will not dissect your work.
I will tell if emotions surfaced.
I am not educated enough to do what the other reviewers do.
Hopefully you will find my review helpful in that a person read your work and expressed an opinion.


This is a sad piece about a father who never has been able to really be a parent. He has children but circumstances have kept him from them.
Divorce is hard on everyone.
Missing out on the everyday excitement of watching the children grow is what carries so much regret for this man.

Thank you for sharing this piece.
Time passes so quickly and you turn around and they are all grown up.



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Review of Free Once More  
Review by Yellow Rose
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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I am merely a reader.
I will not dissect your work.
I will tell if emotions surfaced.
I am not educated enough to do what the other reviewers do.
Hopefully you will find my review helpful in that a person read your work and expressed an opinion.


Right now she is in a place that she feels she can't reach her full potential. She calls it a cage.
Did she create this cage out of fear. The door is wide open. She could move on anytime she wants to. No one is keeping her there except her self and her insecurities.
She needs to fly like a bird. Be all she can be. Sure she might be a bit hesitant but is it really wise to let opportunities slip through her hands.

Thank you for sharing.


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Review of Eleven Isn't Old  
Review by Yellow Rose
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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I am merely a reader.
I will not dissect your work.
I will tell if emotions surfaced.
I am not educated enough to do what the other reviewers do.
Hopefully you will find my review helpful in that a person read your work and expressed an opinion.


A mom has to reassure a boy that 11 isn't old. He worries and is a bit down. He misses his sister. The party is going to happen and the mom works her magic to get him in a good mood. She sends him upstairs and gets a call from his sister
The highlight of his birthday will be that special surprise guest.

Thank you for sharing.


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Review of Wrong Package  
Review by Yellow Rose
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
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I am merely a reader.
I will not dissect your work.
I will tell if emotions surfaced.
I am not educated enough to do what the other reviewers do.
Hopefully you will find my review helpful in that a person read your work and expressed an opinion.


We have a man who receives a box with stuffed puppies. He hates dogs and loves cats. He wonders who ordered these dogs and what should he do with them.
Well, it turns out he has a double 'him' living in the mirror. His double steps out of the mirror to claim his box. He likes puppies.

The question is where is our characters box of cats.

Thank you for sharing.


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Review of Unanswerable  
Review by Yellow Rose
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
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I am merely a reader.
I will not dissect your work.
I will tell if emotions surfaced.
I am not educated enough to do what the other reviewers do.
Hopefully you will find my review helpful in that a person read your work and expressed an opinion.


A crossword and a pen just don't work. There is no way to hide the mistakes. You can't erase. There are no second chances. The paper is too thin. One will certainly not want an on-looker.
The feeling of being a bit stupid as the piece suggests just won't leave your mind.
A simple word among many for the whole world to see. Wrong wrong and wronger still.

Thank you for sharing.


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Review of Cars  
Review by Yellow Rose
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Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
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I am merely a reader.
I will not dissect your work.
I will tell if emotions surfaced.
I am not educated enough to do what the other reviewers do.
Hopefully you will find my review helpful in that a person read your work and expressed an opinion.


For some unknown reason a man begins to see tragic images of the future. They were like nightmares but showed up in the news the next day. The last one he saw was him being hurt.
Because of that he never gets in a car. Like he feels he can change the future. Avoiding cars is his answer.

Interesting piece.
Creepy
Thank you for sharing.


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Review by Yellow Rose
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Rated: E | (4.0)
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I am merely a reader.
I will not dissect your work.
I will tell if emotions surfaced.
I am not educated enough to do what the other reviewers do.
Hopefully you will find my review helpful in that a person read your work and expressed an opinion.


Learning the piano is a task indeed. Here we have the fingers telling us what they think. They don't want to play. They get confused. They are running out of patience with our character. In fact they are pretty harsh with their opinion of her playing.
She wonders if she should have listened to them in the first place.

Thank you for sharing.


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Review of Silent Snow  
Review by Yellow Rose
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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I am merely a reader.
I will not dissect your work.
I will tell if emotions surfaced.
I am not educated enough to do what the other reviewers do.
Hopefully you will find my review helpful in that a person read your work and expressed an opinion.


This is good. A young woman is unhappy where she is. She makes a call to her family but they assume everything is alright. She won't tell them. Perhaps it is her pride. Maybe she thinks she will give it a bit more time.

Bottom line is she wants to come home and is torn up inside.
This should be easy for others to relate to. Pretending or perhaps sparing her family.
Truth be known her father would probably drop everything and come and get her or send her the money to come home.

Her family has been going on under the illusion that she was doing fine. Her phone call was just a happy surprise.

Good job getting into your character mind.
You showed how conflicted she is about her circumstances.

Thank you for sharing.



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Review by Yellow Rose
In affiliation with Sisco's Good Deed Group  
Rated: ASR | (4.5)
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I am merely a reader.
I will not dissect your work.
I will tell if emotions surfaced.
I am not educated enough to do what the other reviewers do.
Hopefully you will find my review helpful in that a person read your work and expressed an opinion.


Our character is lost in the events of yesterday and it is keeping her from stepping into tomorrow. Apparently, she has suffered some hard knocks that have hurt her deeply inside. She remembers another time when things were carefree and life was an adventure.
She can only dream of those times but dwells on those sadder times.
She doesn't understand why she can't escape this pit she is stuck in. The walls are too high. There is no one above her to help her see a better way.
She feels trapped and like her choices are taken away by the past.
She tries to keep her sadness inside so no one asks her any personal questions.
Close friends should be able to tell something is troubling her.
She needs a listener, a compassionate angel to help her sort things out.
When she can turn away from the path of pain and move down the waiting path of freedom; she will find herself again.

Thank you for sharing.
Thank you for getting deep inside your character to help others understand.



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Review of Just Hold Me Now  
Review by Yellow Rose
In affiliation with Sisco's Good Deed Group  
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
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I will not dissect your work.
I will tell if emotions surfaced.
I am not educated enough to do what the other reviewers do.
Hopefully you will find my review helpful in that a person read your work and expressed an opinion.


A couple will soon part. It is beyond their control. Tonight is special and they must make the most of the time they have.
Once gone, the lover sends a letter and reassures the other that nothing has changed. Soon they will be together again.
Hold each other and cherish each other as never before.

Thank you for sharing.
Liked the font color

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Review by Yellow Rose
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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I am merely a reader.
I will not dissect your work.
I will tell if emotions surfaced.
I am not educated enough to do what the other reviewers do.
Hopefully you will find my review helpful in that a person read your work and expressed an opinion.


This all takes place in the view of a Camera:

Picture a beautiful ring in the jewelry case in a jewelry store.
The camera moves out enough to let us know the stores name.
Then the camera zooms in on a dark man looking through the window.
We all recognize this sinister man LORD SAURON.
One would think he would have enough rings without going to a shopping mall.Ha!

I think there might be a some OCD involved here.Ha!

Thank you for sharing.
Clever piece and funny piece.


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Review of Poetry  
Review by Yellow Rose
In affiliation with Sisco's Good Deed Group  
Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
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I am merely a reader.
I will not dissect your work.
I will tell if emotions surfaced.
I am not educated enough to do what the other reviewers do.
Hopefully you will find my review helpful in that a person read your work and expressed an opinion.


Here we have a writer who thinks his writing is no good. Some reviewers tell him sweet stuff. In his mind he knows he should and wishes he could do better.
The only true critic that tells him straight is his wife. He loves her for her honesty.

She is truly a partner in every aspect of the word. Dependable, even if it hurts a bit.

Thank you for sharing.


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Review of Cars  
Review by Yellow Rose
In affiliation with Sisco's Good Deed Group  
Rated: E | (4.5)
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I am merely a reader.
I will not dissect your work.
I will tell if emotions surfaced.
I am not educated enough to do what the other reviewers do.
Hopefully you will find my review helpful in that a person read your work and expressed an opinion.


Picture yourself on a freeway as the other cars pass by. Strangers, all with lives of their own, making their way to wherever.
Have you ever wondered about them as our author suggest in the piece?
Who knows, one might be mad or sad. Perhaps they are happy and excited.
Could they be on a joy ride or do they really have a destination?
Well, we will never know.
Kinda like when we walk along on a city street.
In a way, it is a bit sad. So many strangers and no friends.

Thank you for sharing.



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Review of So long Stan  
Review by Yellow Rose
In affiliation with Sisco's Good Deed Group  
Rated: E | (4.0)
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I am merely a reader.
I will not dissect your work.
I will tell if emotions surfaced.
I am not educated enough to do what the other reviewers do.
Hopefully you will find my review helpful in that a person read your work and expressed an opinion.


Two different people form a relationship. He is a singer and she a society girl. She might have thought she loved him and the excitement at first. Now she realizes there are to many differences. As the piece suggest; two extreme world colliding. Very well put.

Thank you for sharing.

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time for Anne Marie to go. She’d leave in the morning.

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Review of His Lips  
Review by Yellow Rose
In affiliation with Sisco's Good Deed Group  
Rated: E | (4.5)
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I am merely a reader.
I will not dissect your work.
I will tell if emotions surfaced.
I am not educated enough to do what the other reviewers do.
Hopefully you will find my review helpful in that a person read your work and expressed an opinion.


When you love someone there is always something special about them. Here she loves his kiss. She finds herself breathless after that kiss.
She wants this relationship to go on and on.

There was an old song called "It's in His Kiss".

Thank you for sharing.


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Review of WeedLand  
Review by Yellow Rose
In affiliation with Sisco's Good Deed Group  
Rated: E | (4.0)
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I am merely a reader.
I will not dissect your work.
I will tell if emotions surfaced.
I am not educated enough to do what the other reviewers do.
Hopefully you will find my review helpful in that a person read your work and expressed an opinion.


Those cute little yellow weeds pop up every where. They manage to make a show in almost every ones garden. Actually I think they are a bit charming and misjudged.
Our author decides to make a special place for them to do as they please. If they choose to make a statement, let it be. They even show up on hillsides and valleys. Who knows what Gods plan is? Maybe it's a form of sunshine spreading across our land.

Thank you for sharing.



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Review of FEMA Blues  
Review by Yellow Rose
In affiliation with Sisco's Good Deed Group  
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
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I am merely a reader.
I will not dissect your work.
I will tell if emotions surfaced.
I am not educated enough to do what the other reviewers do.
Hopefully you will find my review helpful in that a person read your work and expressed an opinion.


We spend so much time trying to have confidence in our government. When Katrina hit it was a disaster. The response from the government was a disaster as well.
I remember, too well, seeing those people all gathered inside the stadium just wanting water.
WATER. For Pete sake the looks on their faces as the people walked around. Some on boats trying to save others. Some actually wading through the water. People who cared enough. Trapped on their roofs.
I know God tests us from time to time. These are the times we are suppose to put our brothers and sisters well being first and foremost.
All those talking heads saying how awful it was but they didn't get down and dirty to help. Did they?

Thank you for sharing.
Sorry for venting.



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Review of A One Night Stand  
Review by Yellow Rose
In affiliation with Sisco's Good Deed Group  
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
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I am merely a reader.
I will not dissect your work.
I will tell if emotions surfaced.
I am not educated enough to do what the other reviewers do.
Hopefully you will find my review helpful in that a person read your work and expressed an opinion.


Ok. You really had me going.
A fancy affair.
A blind date that seemed to be working out.
A handsome couple that caught the eye of on lookers.
There are so many possible endings. They walked off into the sunset. The left in a limo. They were crowned king and queen of the prom etc.
For Pete's sake; you are one sneaky writer.

I must admit I had to read it over again to see how it all fit together differently than expected.

Thank you for sharing and the laughs.


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Review of Love is..  
Review by Yellow Rose
In affiliation with Sisco's Good Deed Group  
Rated: E | (4.0)
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I am merely a reader.
I will not dissect your work.
I will tell if emotions surfaced.
I am not educated enough to do what the other reviewers do.
Hopefully you will find my review helpful in that a person read your work and expressed an opinion.


The author remind us that love is unpredictable and full of emotions. Sometimes it's wonderful and other times it is hard to figure out.
There will be tears and smiles but all the while, nothing can beat it for making you feel alive.

Thank you for sharing.


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Review by Yellow Rose
In affiliation with Sisco's Good Deed Group  
Rated: E | (4.5)
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I am merely a reader.
I will not dissect your work.
I will tell if emotions surfaced.
I am not educated enough to do what the other reviewers do.
Hopefully you will find my review helpful in that a person read your work and expressed an opinion.


We have a king with a queen that loved him. He was tempted by the curse of a greener kingdom. If he choose to, he could quickly change his life. Apparently his queen had been cursed as well. Her king couldn't make up his mind what he wanted.
Well, she couldn't take it any longer. She had all he really needed but he wanted more.
A sad ending for his queen but a new beginning for the king.

Our author put a dream to pen to create this. Not bad.

Sometimes love just isn't enough.

Thank you for sharing.




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Review of Our Joy  
Review by Yellow Rose
In affiliation with Sisco's Good Deed Group  
Rated: E | (5.0)
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I am merely a reader.
I will not dissect your work.
I will tell if emotions surfaced.
I am not educated enough to do what the other reviewers do.
Hopefully you will find my review helpful in that a person read your work and expressed an opinion.


Our author brings us a 'wake me up' piece this beautiful day. There are so many things in this world and in our lives that go unnoticed.
Mentioning a mellow breeze on a spring day; is one of those things we simply take for granted.

We just assume another will come when we do give it a thought.
There is only one in charge of that blessing and that is our Lord.
For Pete's sake people look with your hearts and not with just you eyes.
Find the miracle that is.

I like this piece.
It is a reminder to stop taking things for granted and cherish every single moment.

Thank you for sharing a caring.


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Review by Yellow Rose
In affiliation with Sisco's Good Deed Group  
Rated: E | (4.5)
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*CakeB* HAPPY WDC ACCOUNT ANNIVERSARY FROM "Anniversary Reviews" *CakeP*


I am merely a reader.
I will not dissect your work.
I will tell if emotions surfaced.
I am not educated enough to do what the other reviewers do.
Hopefully you will find my review helpful in that a person read your work and expressed an opinion.


Boy, does this bring back memories. Those cares were like tanks. Safe and secure inside. My favorite was the 57 Chevy. White tuck and roll.
Red and sparkling hubs.
There was a road outside of town that we would us for racing. Man was that a sight. The small town cops didn't even bother us. Everybody knew everybody.
Then the driving up and down main street with only one traffic light.
Yes the Dairy Queen and the occasional fight.

Thanks for the memories and for sharing.


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