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Review by Yellow Rose
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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I am merely a reader.
I will not dissect your work.
I will tell if emotions surfaced.
I am not educated enough to do what the other reviewers do.
Hopefully you will find my review helpful in that a person read your work and expressed an opinion.


This piece gives us the dogs point of view.
This is a female dog about 10 years old and eager for her daily walk.

There are two people in to the home to do the walk. The man hurries to get the dog walk over. The lady,on the other hand,takes her time.

It seems the dog gets frustrated with all the waiting but when the front door opens, she dances on her old legs from joy.

Next they end up at the park and can spend as much time as she wants. The dog likes that most of all.
It takes a while getting there but staying is the real joy.

Thank you for sharing.


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Review of Red Cadillac  
Review by Yellow Rose
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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I am merely a reader.
I will not dissect your work.
I will tell if emotions surfaced.
I am not educated enough to do what the other reviewers do.
Hopefully you will find my review helpful in that a person read your work and expressed an opinion.


She was on a mission of sorts on this particular day.

She parked her red caddy and walked down a path. The trees were blowing and it was time for her and her lover to part.

She had kept him with her for so many years but time has taken it's toll.

She had to make sure he would be happy once she left. Finding the right spot was her desire.

It's funny how love can last for so long that separation is hard to think of.

She was getting too old and she new it. Before her final days she must look after his needs.

This is a sad piece but a touching one as well.
They will be together again one day in a better place.

Thank you for sharing this piece with others.



Yellow
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Review by Yellow Rose
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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I am merely a reader.
I will not dissect your work.
I will tell if emotions surfaced.
I am not educated enough to do what the other reviewers do.
Hopefully you will find my review helpful in that a person read your work and expressed an opinion.


The author brings us a bit of motivation this day. Don't let things get you down. Get right back up and keep going.

Everybody has problems and sometimes we feel they might just get the best of us.
Turn that negative attitude into some positive thinking.

If everyone looked at things a little different, this world would be a better happier place.

Thank you for sharing and caring.


Yellow
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Review of A Psalm  
Review by Yellow Rose
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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I am merely a reader.
I will not dissect your work.
I will tell if emotions surfaced.
I am not educated enough to do what the other reviewers do.
Hopefully you will find my review helpful in that a person read your work and expressed an opinion.


Here we have a person who tried to do the right thing. Before long it all got turned around with temptation of the flesh confusing her thoughts.

Our character feels damaged and in a fight for survival. Those that lead her the wrong way are still at the door.

With faith our character knows that God is watching. She knows God will help her back on the right path.

God loves His children and only ask that they turn to Him.
With prayer, God is right beside again. Leading the way Home. Healing the heart and soul.

Thank you for sharing and caring.



Yellow
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Review of Clouds  
Review by Yellow Rose
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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I am merely a reader.
I will not dissect your work.
I will tell if emotions surfaced.
I am not educated enough to do what the other reviewers do.
Hopefully you will find my review helpful in that a person read your work and expressed an opinion.


Remember those days when young laying on the grass and watching the clouds roll by.

As long as you had a buddy there to exchange ideas of what shapes they were everything was perfect.

Spending time playing a game about who could guess the fastest. Maybe count how long they will stay within view.

Grown ups can still do that you know.

Pleasant piece. Brings out good memories.

Thank you for sharing.



Yellow
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Review by Yellow Rose
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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I am merely a reader.
I will not dissect your work.
I will tell if emotions surfaced.
I am not educated enough to do what the other reviewers do.
Hopefully you will find my review helpful in that a person read your work and expressed an opinion.


All she wanted was to eat in peace.
Her puppy, however, wanted to help her eat.

She tried to enjoy her meal once she put it outside but the puppy made a mess digging just to distract her.

He might have been young but he was working her good.
He managed to get part of that sandwich and must have felt victorious.

She just wanted him to lick up any left over mess.

Thank you for sharing this cute piece.

Yellow
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Review of Reject  
Review by Yellow Rose
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Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
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I will not dissect your work.
I will tell if emotions surfaced.
I am not educated enough to do what the other reviewers do.
Hopefully you will find my review helpful in that a person read your work and expressed an opinion.


He fell in love and all seemed magic for a while.
Then there was a distance.

Soon his friend was taking his place with her.
How could she through everything away so easily?
Did she mean what she said or was she just playing with his heart?

He gave her all he had including his soul.
The vision full of tomorrows was cherished by him.

Now, alone again. He learned from this experience.
You got to be open for love to reach the heights and the trip is worth it.

Thank you for sharing.

Yellow
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Review of HALLOWEEN  
Review by Yellow Rose
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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I am merely a reader.
I will not dissect your work.
I will tell if emotions surfaced.
I am not educated enough to do what the other reviewers do.
Hopefully you will find my review helpful in that a person read your work and expressed an opinion.


Here we have a piece about Halloween.

They are every where. Faces under masks to share the bageeeberss out of people.

Trick or treat is the name of the game. Candy found at every door.

By the time the evening is over the kids will be ready for bed and the parents will be dragging their feet. Walking and more walking.

Thank goodness, it's only once a year.

Thank you for sharing.
I WON'T SOME CANDY!!!


Yellow
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Review by Yellow Rose
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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I am merely a reader.
I will not dissect your work.
I will tell if emotions surfaced.
I am not educated enough to do what the other reviewers do.
Hopefully you will find my review helpful in that a person read your work and expressed an opinion.


Our author brings us a thought to ponder this lovely day.
Just what does poetry bring to the table.

So many emotions can be displayed in the piece.
All the way from love to hate and everything in between.

The purpose is to reach the reader and make them feel as well.
To tap into their very nerves and find a reaction spill out.

We want them to come back and read again while looking for the meaning.

We want them to remember the piece and perhaps relate to the image brought by the author.

Thank you for sharing.


Yellow
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Review of Why Smile?  
Review by Yellow Rose
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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I am merely a reader.
I will not dissect your work.
I will tell if emotions surfaced.
I am not educated enough to do what the other reviewers do.
Hopefully you will find my review helpful in that a person read your work and expressed an opinion.


Our author brings us an important piece this beautiful Sunday.
The fact that a smile can make a difference.
Turning a frown upside down is the best thing that can happen to a person who can't seem to find a reason to smile.
Let them know they are loved. Let them know they matter.
Start with that one smile and watch as that one seed of happiness begins to grow.

Thank you for sharing and caring.

Yellow
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Review by Yellow Rose
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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I will not dissect your work.
I will tell if emotions surfaced.
I am not educated enough to do what the other reviewers do.
Hopefully you will find my review helpful in that a person read your work and expressed an opinion.


First of all the title is perfect.

The piece shows how a writers mind will drift from idea to idea.

The idea will come and our minds will run with it and before you know it another gets in the way.

Our author is doubting whether that great idea will surface.

The last thought is mice in charge of the world.
(IN MY OPINION, THEY MIGHT DO A BETTER JOB THAN POLITICIANS) Ha!

Thank you for sharing.


Yellow
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Review of Not Even One  
Review by Yellow Rose
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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I will not dissect your work.
I will tell if emotions surfaced.
I am not educated enough to do what the other reviewers do.
Hopefully you will find my review helpful in that a person read your work and expressed an opinion.


Granny is getting old but still active.
She put the cookies on and then fell asleep.

Well, that didn't turn out to good.
The firemen tried to save the house but no luck there.
Granny was ok to cook another day.

To the sorrow of our character the firemen couldn't save one burnt cookie.

Funny thing is I like those chocolate cookies a bit burnt as well.

Thank you for sharing and a laugh.


Yellow
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Review of CANT SHED A TEAR!  
Review by Yellow Rose
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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I am merely a reader.
I will not dissect your work.
I will tell if emotions surfaced.
I am not educated enough to do what the other reviewers do.
Hopefully you will find my review helpful in that a person read your work and expressed an opinion.


Have you ever been really hurt and know that what was is over? Naturally your going to cry.

After all crying helps the healing process.

In this piece we have a woman who has cried until she feels she can't cry any longer.

Perhaps many of us have been there too.

We feel depressed and a bit empty. We miss what was and know it is not coming back. Perhaps the relationship was toxic.

She feels the tears are a bay now and it is a sign to get on with her life.

She is smart and has courage and will make it just fine.

A broken heart just might leave the door open for a loving heart to come.

Thank you for sharing.


Yellow
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Review of Hate  
Review by Yellow Rose
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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I am merely a reader.
I will not dissect your work.
I will tell if emotions surfaced.
I am not educated enough to do what the other reviewers do.
Hopefully you will find my review helpful in that a person read your work and expressed an opinion.


Imagine having a hate for someone that is beyond explanation.
There is no comparison for the average hate for this is way beyond that.

Could we substitute that he despises the individual? Would that capture the feeling he feels.

What about wishing this person had never existed? Would that capture the feeling.

Something this intense can only be felt by the hurt one.
We can only guess.

Thank you for sharing.


Yellow
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Review of Tightrope  
Review by Yellow Rose
In affiliation with Sisco's Good Deed Group  
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
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I am merely a reader.
I will not dissect your work.
I will tell if emotions surfaced.
I am not educated enough to do what the other reviewers do.
Hopefully you will find my review helpful in that a person read your work and expressed an opinion.


Here we have a man guilty without a doubt.
The rope is around his neck with no where to turn. No escape. Already prejudged.
As the rope becomes tighter and tighter; the crowd feels totally vindicated.

What if down the road they find evidence to the contrary? What then?

Thank you for sharing.


Yellow
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Review of Such A Short Life  
Review by Yellow Rose
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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I am merely a reader.
I will not dissect your work.
I will tell if emotions surfaced.
I am not educated enough to do what the other reviewers do.
Hopefully you will find my review helpful in that a person read your work and expressed an opinion.


Our author brings us a short piece about a lifetime.
Measured in numbers. Whether they be seconds or years, they do come to an end.
A bit of good advice at the end of the piece.
Don't waist a single second because in the big scheme of things, it is relatively short.

Thank you for sharing.


Yellow
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Review of The Scientist  
Review by Yellow Rose
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
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I am merely a reader.
I will not dissect your work.
I will tell if emotions surfaced.
I am not educated enough to do what the other reviewers do.
Hopefully you will find my review helpful in that a person read your work and expressed an opinion.


She is weak and he couldn't care less.
He needs to keep messing with her to do his research.
She says things to him and wishes him to go to h--ll. He doesn't care. He feels the end justifies the means.
Then, a knock at the door.
Another specimen.

This is creepy only because it could very well be happening.

Thank you for sharing.


Yellow
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Review of Moments  
Review by Yellow Rose
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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I am merely a reader.
I will not dissect your work.
I will tell if emotions surfaced.
I am not educated enough to do what the other reviewers do.
Hopefully you will find my review helpful in that a person read your work and expressed an opinion.


Here the author brings us moments at the beginning of the day. Watching her lover sleep but knowing soon enough the day will begin.

Each will go about the daily duties but right now she captures those precious moments. The serenity is hers. The smile is hers.

Will this moment be forgotten? No. There is the deep desire for the same moment again tomorrow.

Thank you for this touching piece.
A moment shared is a moment cherished.



Yellow
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Review of Old Forge  
Review by Yellow Rose
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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I am merely a reader.
I will not dissect your work.
I will tell if emotions surfaced.
I am not educated enough to do what the other reviewers do.
Hopefully you will find my review helpful in that a person read your work and expressed an opinion.


Lets suppose for a moment that we have an old forge. There is still a fire inside but it is missing the sledge and bellows. Those important things that allow it to create.

Now, lets look at a writer, stuck in writers block. Suppose the writer thinks he is too old to create any longer. Perhaps it has been a while but yet he has ideas inside but can't seem to get motivated enough to put them to pen.

He, like the forge, must use his skills. He must remember what he has inside. A burning that most writers have. A desire to create something to present. So he might be a bit rusty.
The forge is working but the sledge might be rusty as well.

Would a blacksmith give up on his craft? No.
A writer shouldn't either.

You got the right stuff, it's just hiding behind a wall. Eventually it will break free and flow like a waterfall.

Thank you for sharing.



Yellow
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Review by Yellow Rose
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Rated: ASR | (4.5)
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I am merely a reader.
I will not dissect your work.
I will tell if emotions surfaced.
I am not educated enough to do what the other reviewers do.
Hopefully you will find my review helpful in that a person read your work and expressed an opinion.


She kept the child a secret and was ashamed to claim. Until one day beyond her control the baby went away.

To a Lord that would love her and make her a place.
She felt guilty and realized how wrong she had been. A complex issue to be sure but some thought needed to be given to the child.

She never will know the joy or that sweet little angels smile. The touch of the baby's hand holding her finger.
The bond that comes so easily between a newborn and a new mothers heart.

This is indeed sad.
Sometimes life hands some situations that a young person doesn't know how to deal with.
Sometimes society can be cruel and refuse to understand.
Think not to hard of the mother for she is being hard on herself already.




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Review by Yellow Rose
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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I am merely a reader.
I will not dissect your work.
I will tell if emotions surfaced.
I am not educated enough to do what the other reviewers do.
Hopefully you will find my review helpful in that a person read your work and expressed an opinion.


Here we have a split up from a mans point of view.

Apparently she has had this on her mind for a long time.

The distance he felt.
The loneliness that surrounds him.
The lack of understanding as to what is wrong.

Could it be she just gave up?
Could it be there is someone else?

By the time she gets through with him, his confidence is in the tank.
She even packed his bags and had them ready.
No discussion period.

Oh and don't forget the parting look. If looks could write a book there would be a novel here.

Thank you for sharing.


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Review of Rugged  
Review by Yellow Rose
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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I am merely a reader.
I will not dissect your work.
I will tell if emotions surfaced.
I am not educated enough to do what the other reviewers do.
Hopefully you will find my review helpful in that a person read your work and expressed an opinion.


This is a cute.
Think of hair and how important it is to some men.
They will buy those rugs and wear them hoping no one will guess.

In this piece the man did all that he can to make his rug look good on his head.

He tugged and roughed it up a bit to make it look natural.

To his delight, those around did stare and made him feel quite the looker.

Thank you for sharing.


Yellow
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Review of Valet Limerick  
Review by Yellow Rose
In affiliation with Sisco's Good Deed Group  
Rated: E | (4.5)
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I am merely a reader.
I will not dissect your work.
I will tell if emotions surfaced.
I am not educated enough to do what the other reviewers do.
Hopefully you will find my review helpful in that a person read your work and expressed an opinion.


Here we have a lighthearted piece about a Valet.

A hard working girl who gets good tips for parking cars.
Chips are her tips and she craves special sips of coffee.

Hopefully she buys some other fun things.
She might even play a game or two.

Thank you for sharing.

Yellow
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Review of Pearls of Wisdom  
Review by Yellow Rose
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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I am merely a reader.
I will not dissect your work.
I will tell if emotions surfaced.
I am not educated enough to do what the other reviewers do.
Hopefully you will find my review helpful in that a person read your work and expressed an opinion.


She put this day off as long as she could. As she entered the area she heard those noises which caused even more apprehension.

Trembling she began to fumble in her bag.
Trying to do anything to distract her from what is about to transpire.

This piece is very descriptive.

As this reader began to get involved in the writing, I began to wonder what this horrible fate is awaiting her.

Boy did I get a surprise.
Good ending and excellent lead up to the end.
So many feel the same way.
To an extent, they would rather pet a spider. Ha.

Thank you for sharing.


Yellow
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Review of Out of Order  
Review by Yellow Rose
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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I am merely a reader.
I will not dissect your work.
I will tell if emotions surfaced.
I am not educated enough to do what the other reviewers do.
Hopefully you will find my review helpful in that a person read your work and expressed an opinion.


We know how there are problems in marriages.

Here we have a woman who is fed up to the point of packing the bags.

I guess we might say the 'proverbial last straw' has been tossed.
He thinks he is the king and she should obey his every command.

Well, she isn't buying this last straw he is selling.
The exchange between them is funny and the reason for the discourse is funny as well.

So out the door she goes and tosses a bit of irony his way as the door shuts.

Thank you for the laughter.

Yellow
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