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Dec 23, 2013 at 6:42am
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Audition Reviews
by Zelphyr
Sorry I'm running late, folks. Below are my reviews/critiques. TheGary 's reviews can be found in "Reviews"  .

Quick note: I noticed that most of you wrote as if "Toby" has always been the name of the planet, but Domumen just threw that out in his transmission. Prior to that, it was only know by its alphanumeric name.

Review of "Cold Desperation"

Review of "Audition: A Massive Risk"

Review of "Jayce's Profile" and Review of "The Assignment"

Review of "The First and Last Born: Part One"

Invalid Review

Review of "Blue Hide"

Review of "Wanderer's Desert Race against Saoirse"

Review of "Promises"

~ Novalyyn of Silver
A light in the dark,
A shadow on the moon...


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Audition Reviews · 12-23-13 6:42am
by Zelphyr

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