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Rated: 13+ · Message Forum · Contest · #1908885
Authors face off through their characters! Follow along & vote each round.
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Dec 21, 2013 at 4:57pm
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Reviews
by TheGary
Contestants,

Please forgive my short reviews of your pieces. I generally like to do them this way for round one and just point out one or two good/bad takes from both your character sheets and the intro stories. In future rounds, with time, I will be giving you all more thorough impressions.

I wish you all the best of luck in the tournament.

Gary

Here are the reviews:

Review of "Cold Desperation"
Review of "Audition: A Massive Risk"
Review of "The Assignment"
Review of "The First and Last Born: Part One"
Invalid Review
Review of "Blue Hide"
Review of "Wanderer's Desert Race against Saoirse"
Review of "Promises"
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Reviews · 12-21-13 4:57pm
by TheGary

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