I get a feeling that your thoughts on all of this run much more to the romantic than to erotica. Your responses to the phrases fit perfectly with a romance story. If I had a flower for every time... is old fashioned. In the late 1920's, there was an entertainer named "Texas Guinan who performed in the speakeasies if the day. Her opening line when she appeared on stage was 'Hellooo, suckers."
One of her famous sayings was "My boyfriend sends me so many flowers I thought it was my funeral." That's not really important to this discussion, but I thought you might find that interesting.
The smoldering flame she saw in his eyes startled her. Yes, it can be erotic, but it can also be romance. Remember, romance relies very heavily on emotions and the senses. The eyes can be very descriptive.
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