2 phrases I would use
His gaze traveled over her face and searched her eyes - This one has the potential for a deeper relationship.
Love is composed of a single soul inhabiting two bodies. - This one is sweet, may not be actually said but it could be a theme between the romantic characters.
2 Phrases I would NOT use
If I had a flower for every time I thought of you, I could walk in my garden forever. - This is sweet, but not really realistic.
When giving her or him a dozen roses, 11 real and 1 fake, say "I will love you until the last rose dies." - This too sweet but cheesy.
Strikes as erotic start off.
Her body ached for his touch - This one could begin a very dynamic and hot scene when one aches.
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