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Oct 19, 2020 at 3:37pm
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Re: Discussion Question #2
2 phrases I would use
His gaze traveled over her face and searched her eyes - This one has the potential for a deeper relationship.

Love is composed of a single soul inhabiting two bodies. - This one is sweet, may not be actually said but it could be a theme between the romantic characters.

2 Phrases I would NOT use
If I had a flower for every time I thought of you, I could walk in my garden forever. - This is sweet, but not really realistic.

When giving her or him a dozen roses, 11 real and 1 fake, say "I will love you until the last rose dies." - This too sweet but cheesy.

Strikes as erotic start off.
Her body ached for his touch - This one could begin a very dynamic and hot scene when one aches.

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Discussion Question #2 · 10-12-20 12:37pm
by Purple is House Florent
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