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Review of Two Poems  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Dear Humming Bird ,

After reading your work, My impressions are these:These poems show two sides of your personality. You have deep-rooted core beliefs; and you also have a fun quirky side that draws people to you.

My Favorite Part(s)I like the way you put your values to poetic form. I also like the poem of how your personality shines through, and that you are missed when you are not around.

Suggestions/Questions:I hope you did well with the contest you wrote "I'm A Clown" for. It has been a while since you've written these poems, but they seem timeless. Thank you for sharing.


*PenG* Write On! *PenV*


Sincerely,
AmyJo

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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Dear Humming Bird ,

After reading your work, My impressions are these:
What a sweet story about a treasured friend. It brought a smile to my face to read about your "Sunny".

My Favorite Part(s)How that you have some similar tastes, but have gone different pathways. It is always nice to have someone as your "go to" person.

Suggestions/Questions:It has been a while since you've written this story. Are you still close after all these years? I hope so. Thank you for sharing.


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Sincerely,
AmyJo

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Review of Silent Witness  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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DearHumming Bird ,

After reading your work, My impressions are these:The title and description caught my eye.

My Favorite Part(s)I like how this is written from a "non-person" perspective. In my mind's eye I could see what the mirror has seen. It made me frustrated that grandma has such a hold on the mother, effectively stifling mother and young lady. I would hope that once school was done, she would be able to get away from the toxic environment. Is it bad to hope grandma has bad health *Blush* ?

Suggestions/Questions:I liked the color of the font and saw no grammar/mechanical issues. I'm glad to have found your story.
Happy Anniversary.


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AmyJo

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Review of The Terrible Gift  
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Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
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Dear GeminiGem survived GoT ,

After reading your work, My impressions are these: I can feel the heartache in your words. This is definitely a "terrible gift". I wish it had never been given out to anyone.

My Favorite Part(s)You said on your poetry folder that poetry was was uncharted territory. I feel in these words, you've shown yourself quite good at it. I look forward to reading more of your work.

Suggestions/Questions:I wonder if this is a personal experience? I couldn't imagine, but have lost family members to the terrible gift. If so, I hope all is well with you, now. Thank you for sharing.


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Sincerely,
AmyJo

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Review of Ring Tone  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello Sumojo

You came before me in the 23 in 11 I Write Challenge.

My First Impression:I have had dreams similar to yours, but not exact. The phone ringing has brought me out of sleep/dreams before, and it is a weird feeling.

My Favorite Part:I like the way the poem reads, it has a nice form and flow to it. I like the story told as well.

My Suggestions/Final Thoughts:I'm glad that I got the chance to read this, and I hope it does well in the contest. Best wishes to you.

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Rated: ASR | (5.0)
Hello Jeff

I am reviewing this as part of the 23 in 11 challenge.

My First Impression:In just 22 words, I want to know the whole story! I would say that this is an effective "hook", and I hope you do well in your contest.

My Favorite Part:I love the name of your character - Emilia. You followed the prompt in an engaging way.

My Suggestions/Final Thoughts:Thank you for sharing this. I would love for you to complete this story. Inquiring minds want to know. *BigSmile*

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Rated: E | N/A (Review only item.)
Hello Princess Megan Rose 22 Years

My Thoughts:The title caught my attention, so here I am, delving into these thoughts.

My Favorite Part:I loved the opening poem. You bring to light several Fairy Tales that I've read over the years. Your poetry has a bounciness to it, and I found it fun to read. I also liked the different suggestions you've given regarding the different princesses. I loved the idea of "sweet" Snow White pushing the evil stepmother down a well. I guess that would have shown some sass. I too, am a fan of "Once Upon a Time". It just boggles my mind how all of the different fairy tales are intertwined in this series.

My Suggestions:While I like the soft pink you've used as a font, might I suggest that you either enlarge the font or use a different color. My poor eyes had to slow down and reread sometimes. But that is just my opinion. I love the graphics that you used in conjunction with your writing. No one could ever accuse you of not loving the princesses! Thank you for sharing.

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Rated: E | (4.5)
Dear Joseph

I am reviewing as part of the Tour de Ports Challenge.

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I found this on the random Read and Review Port.

First Impressions:You aren't kidding about Covid. I just found out a friend of mine has gotten it again. I've only had it once, and I'm glad that I've not gotten it again. Once is more than enough in a lifetime *FacePalm*

What I liked:I liked the apt descriptions of the virus, and how it does seem like it is "out to get you". I also enjoyed the used of emoticons throughout the poem.

Questions/Final Thoughts:I did have a couple of questions for you, but these are just my ruminations - please feel free to use them or not.

Line 8: you spelled "krowd" with a k - was this intentional?

I see places where there is a capital letter within a word: StAy prepared, socialLy are the two I see specifically.

Line 2: ****rite: I'm not sure what this is.

The only other thing that would make it easier for my poor old eyes is perhaps enlarging the font a little bit?
But like I said, that is my preference.

I enjoyed reading your work, and look forward to doing so again in the future.

Keep up the great work!



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Review of Into The Darkness  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Dear tj ~ endeavors to persevere!

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First Impressions:I followed the link to your portal from a comment you made on the newsfeed. Since I enjoy poetry, I followed the rabbit down to this poem.*BigSmile*

What I liked:The title quickly caught my attention. It is quite relatable, since this summer I have found myself floundering in the darkness.
I like how you broke up the verses up into sets of two rhyming lines. Each line aptly describes what "Into The Darkness" is like. I found myself agreeing with each line of your poem. I completely agree with the description - a place that I never want to go again. It's too hard to climb out of that dark hole.

Questions/Final Thoughts:I like writing for Express It in Eight, and am glad to see that you do as well. I will look for more of your poetry in the future. I enjoy your wonderful sense of humor, and I appreciate your seriousness as well. I am glad to count you as a friend here on Writing.Com.

Keep up the great work!



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Review of Writing in Snow  
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Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
Dear Prosperous Snow celebrating

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First Impressions:I love the honest and simple style of your writing. It reminds me of a comfortable and cozy blanket that I can wrap myself up in.

What I liked:I like the little things that you are thankful for. It might not be much to some, but it meant something to you, so you were able to give thanks for it. I also like the way that you show the merit badges that you receive and give thanks for them as well.

Questions/Final Thoughts:I have read several of your blog posts over the year I've been here. Your sincerity is humble, yet at the same time powerful. I feel that you give God the credit, yet I don't quite understand the dates given, or the BahaiPrayers that you mention. It is a curiosity to me. Thank you so very much for sharing parts of yourself and your faith in your writing. It is much appreciated.

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Review of Writing.Com 101  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Dear The StoryMistress

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First Impressions:Wow! I am so glad that I started clicking on the Writing.Com support sections. I realize that having been here almost a year, that there is so much that I don't know yet! I am glad that there are resources to help out.

What I liked: I like the simplicity of the language. I found it easy to read and quite helpful. I've had a couple of negative comments/reviews, but thankfully they are few and far between.

I also like the little "Giving Criticism" content. It was fun to watch, and it also made me feel better about ignoring the "haters" that only try to be mean, without giving ideas for improvement.

Questions/Final Thoughts:I really appreciate this community, and all of the attention and detail that is put into this site. I have found it welcoming, and I hope to learn more and more as time goes by. You and StoryMaster are much appreciated *HeartP* !

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Review of Thank You Notes  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Dear Gaby ~ Keeper Of The Realm

I am reviewing as part of the Tour de Ports Challenge.

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First Impressions:I found you in the Newsfeed and decided to come to your portfolio. I am glad that I did.

What I liked:Your Thank You Notes are just too cute for words. From an adorable teddy bear to thanking someone for doing a review, you have just about anything that anyone could use. Of course, the kitten lying on its back on top of a book stole my heart *HeartP* These are quite creative. I plan on "fanning" you, and also will try to remember that you have these "thank you"s available.

Questions/Final Thoughts:Was it hard to set up this shop? I am curious, as I would like to, but I don't think I have the "where with all" to make a go of it. What type of account do you need? I also hope to send more traffic your way, (if that is ok) by advertising your port on the Newsfeed. Let me know whether or not it is ok *BigSmile*

Thanks so much for sharing!

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Rated: ASR | (5.0)
Dear Writer_Mike

I am reviewing as part of the Tour de Ports Challenge.

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First Impressions:Thank you for allowing me to peruse your port. I found several items that I will eventually get around to reviewing. This search a word caught my eye, and it is very relatable to me. I have had several family members (aunts) deal with this disease, and for the most part, it hasn't been a very good outcome.

What I liked:I enjoyed working the puzzle; it didn't take too long to do. I enjoy search a word puzzles. Each word was appropriate and had special significance to my family members. I also like that you were nominated for a Quill award for this puzzle. Although we are closer, we are nowhere near close enough for a cure.

Questions/Final Thoughts:I want to thank you for giving some extra awareness in an entertaining venue. The subject is anything but entertaining, but the format is great. See you again soon.

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Rated: E | (5.0)
Dear The Ambiguous

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First Impressions:First, welcome to Writing.Com! I hope you make yourself at home and that you find an outlet for writers of all genres and experiences. I found your writing in the random Read and Review portal.

What I liked:The title caught my interest, and I wanted to know more about your thinking. Your supposition is intriguing, and gives vibes of a "multiverse" if you will. The last line, "life is but a string of incomplete conversations" is an interesting way to end your writing. It also gives rise to the "what ifs" in life. I find that I agree with you for the most part.

I found no mechanical or grammatical issues with your writing. You express yourself well, and the reading flowed nicely.

Questions/Final Thoughts:I look forward to reading more of your writing in the future. Thank you for sharing.

Keep up the great work!



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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Dear 🌕 HuntersMoon

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First Impressions:I found this item in the random Read/Review portal.

What I liked:The title caught my attention. I've known many servicemen/women in the past and was married to an airman a long time ago. The subject matter is relevant and somewhat alarming. I did not know the statistics for suicides for veterans, and it is heartbreaking to say the least.

The anger and bitterness and despair that I hear in the writing feels real to me. Only a very cold-hearted person would not be touched by this writing or the plight of the wounded warriors that are seemingly forgotten.

Thank you for sharing these statistics and for a contact number for someone to reach out if needed.

Questions/Final Thoughts:This has been an eye-opening read for me. It is a heartfelt cry for help; will we take up the call? What would we do in this situation if it was us that needed help? I think that we would want someone to be there for us to reach out to.

Keep up the great work!



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Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
Dear Jeff

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First Impressions:Wow! You've been at this for a bit -
almost from the beginning of WdC, it seems. Well, not quite that long, as I see you created your blog in 2008.

What I liked:I like the word Logocentric and the definition you've posted. I question whether being logocentric is a bad thing, but I guess one can take anything to extremes *FacePalm*.

I also like the list of prompts that you use to make up your writings. I've used a few of these myself, and find them quite enjoyable.

The blog I am looking at right now is your Day 2784 "sliding doors" prompt. It caught my attention, as I watched this movie a couple of months ago. It would be easy for me to get caught up in the "what ifs" of my life. I like the questions you pose to yourself, and at the same time realizing the "what ifs" don't change your situation. It's what you do that determines your life.

Questions/Final Thoughts:Thank you for sharing your thoughts and I'm glad I got to look at some of your personal writing.

Keep up the great work!



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Review of Dreamer  
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Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
Dear Dave Ryan

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Thank you for allowing me the chance to review your writing.

First Impressions:Wow! From start to finish, I was riveted by this story. What a horrible situation, and yet there are so many people in this situation. The anger, the denial, just everything. Even the "family meeting" held a ring of truth to it. The conversation between Jack and Rob was heartbreaking. Even the decision Rob had come to felt like a bit of a relief, as he started making plans.

What I liked:Every situation described felt like what would actually happen. It's like you've had first hand experience with this type of tragedy. If you have, then I am sorry. If not, I hope you never have to.

I like the beginning and ending verses about dreaming. I also like how you told about the prompt given. I believe you've followed it to a "T".

Questions/Final Thoughts:I saw no grammar/mechanics issues with your writing. The story was easy to follow and has a smooth flow to it. I wish you luck in the contest. If you place, it would be nice to have a follow-up as to how you did in the contest, but that is just my opinion. Again, thank you for sharing.

Keep up the great work!



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Review of Bosses  
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Dear Present Tense

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First Impressions:I found your story on the random Read and Review portal. The title intrigued me.

What I liked:I read this through a couple of times. The vibes I initially got was "Oh boy, another Donner party tragedy". I could see the story clearly in my mind's eye as I was reading. I felt the frustration of the soldiers who were just looking to get out of the weather and back to the fort. Clearly they didn't want to deal with a "civilian", and clearly not one that seemed to know what he was doing.

I didn't know whether to cheer for Eleazar, or shake some sense into him. The Oregon Trail was not for the faint of heart, and in the winter time could be deadly. "God will provide"...I'm sure that He would provide; I also think that Eleazar could use some divine providence in the wisdom department. Just my opinion.

I saw no mechanical/grammatical issues.

Questions/Final Thoughts:Is this an opening chapter for a story? If so, I'd love to read more of it. Otherwise, it was very engaging. Welcome to Writing.Com. I hope you make yourself at home here. I look forward to reading more of your work in the future.

Keep up the great work!



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Review of Shadows Potpourri  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Dear Shadow Prowler-Spreading Love

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First Impressions:I saw your post on the Newsfeed, so I jumped right on to see what the "hullaballo" was all about.

What I liked:I absolutely LOVED this story. I was laughing out loud and had tears in my eyes. Thank you so very much for this - it totally made my day. The mis-adventures of the anniversary should definitely not be forgotten. Poor puppies - did they ever recover? I totally agree with your opinion on champagne...yuck! That being said, reading how you opened it was hilarious. As for the shower/bath adventure...I just hope nobody wrenched anything out of place. That would have been a bit scary. But since you guys were laughing through everything, I am assuming the best.

Questions/Final Thoughts:My only questions - are you going to tell your sister about the champagne? And HOW are you going to top THIS for the next anniversary?
Blessings to you *Hug1**Smile**Hug2* *Cake2*

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Review of Safe Again  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Dear JACE

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First Impressions:I found this in the random read/review port. I liked the title and since I need a couple purple reviews for the above challenge, here goes:

What I liked:Simple story with a beginning, a middle, and an ending - all in fifty-five words. How sad to see a child's play place become ruined. I was happy to see that the tree was able to be recycled and become something new, along with the memories of what it was before. I liked the line "He sleeps again in the bosom of an old friend." It sums it up nicely. My dad is a wood worker, so this story resonates with me. I always liked seeing my dad take wood and lovingly turn it into things that family members can use. I have a simple wooden step that helps me reach things in the kitchen, and love that my dad made it for me.

Questions/Final Thoughts:This was written quite a while ago for a contest. Do you remember if you placed/won? Was this a prompt, or based on a real life experience? Thank you for sharing your story.

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Review of Alchemy III  
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Dear Adherennium Dr of Phoolishness

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First Impressions:I have read this through a couple of times.

What I liked:I like the use of what my grandma would call $10 words. To be honest, I had to look up what some of these words meant, otherwise; I would be scratching my head still. I'm not sure how I feel about life's lessons through a scientific lens. I get the feeling of "is that all there is?" through the message of this writing. The last line struck a chord with me - looking for gold at the end of it all.

There is more to life than scientific terminology. There is also more to poetry than just platitudes.

Questions/Final Thoughts:You do entertain with your writing. This is something more than scratching the surface, and I'm glad that I took the time to dig into your work. I don't know why you don't delve into poetry more often. Personal choice perhaps?

Keep up the great work!



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Rated: E | (5.0)
Dear Jay O'Toole

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First Impressions:First of all, this meshes with the prayer prompt I've given for Take Up Your Cross. I am still trying to figure out what it is that I should be doing with my time and efforts. Sometimes I feel as though I'm just coasting as life just passes me by.

What I liked:That you give questions simple answers - sometimes we have to just "take a breath", sometimes we have to just "march on", and we sometimes just have to pull ourselves up by our bootstraps and keep going. You answer the questions in wonderful verse, without "preaching or judging". You have a quiet teaching voice. Thank you for that.

Questions/Final Thoughts:Your encouragement has been exceptional, and has spoken to me clearly though your writing. I am so glad that you choose to share your words with everyone on this site. It is without fear or judgment. I appreciate you tremendously.

Keep up the great work!



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Rated: E | (5.0)
Dear Unknown Icarus

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First Impressions:I found this in the Read and Review Port. The title and description caught my attention, and drew me in.

What I liked:I like how the main character is asking hard questions. What do you see? Is it what is or what you want it to be? Serious questions - giving the reader pause, and wondering about the main character's pleadings. I also liked the descriptors used in the writing. They paint a vivid picture in my mind as I read.

Questions/Final Thoughts:Is this something that the writer is asking about himself? For another? I see some angst in the writing. It seems soul-searching, or even perhaps there is some mental health issues involved. I've read it over and over a few times and can feel the desperation/despair of wanting to be seen "as is" and not just a preconceived thought as to "how I should be".

Keep up the great work!



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Review of Lair of Treasures  
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Dear DragonBlue

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First Impressions:I found your writing in the Read and Review port. Acrostic poems are one of my favorite forms. The title caught my eye, so I decided to check it out.

What I liked:That you described your poem as a dragon's lair filled with treasures (tremendous wealth). I also liked how you headed each verse with the word chosen as part of that wealth. I liked the way you colored the verses. This makes it appealing to the eye. The only thing I would have liked to see is the font for the headers be the reading font, and then the headers maybe a 1/2 step larger. It makes it easier on my poor eyes to read. Also, Your title on the page says "Lari ofTreasures" - Perhaps you meant "Lair of Treasures" (an easy spelling and spacing fix).

Questions/Final Thoughts:I hope that this won the contest, or at least placed well. It was written quite a while ago. Thank you for sharing your writing with everyone.

Keep up the great work!



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Review of Saying Goodbye  
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Hello Sufilove

I found this on the front page of the site.

My First Impression:The description caught my attention as I lost a sister to cancer in 2021. I wish I would have been able to be there, as I live out of state. but my youngest sister was there at the end. Kathy was at home, and I cannot imagine how she felt.

My Favorite Part: I liked the "smiles through the tears" and the promises of going on asked and given.

My Suggestions/Final Thoughts: I do not know if this is real life, or just something that was written - it feels real to me. Great job, and keep it up.

Sincerely,
AmyJo

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