Good Evening,
The story behind the poetry is about this stranger...a thief.. a cheater..
And all unpleasant description about him yet he was able to live in lies.
Surely Karma will come at the right now time as
Nothing Hidden Under The Sun And The Moon
Thank You for sharing and for the read.
Write on.
Good Afternoon,
I am sorry for your loss.
Sad to note that Phoebe died that way .
A very terrible death.
Yes..Phoebe is now in heaven watching you always.
Truly there is an angel in heaven who loves you..her name is Phoebe.
Thank You for sharing and for the read.
Good Afternoon,
Interesting and Captivating title
A Strong Song
Nice and lively.
It expresses strength and power and I believe it has a lovely tune.
Wonderful lyrics too.
Joyful and admirable all the way.
Thank You for sharing and for the worthwhile read.
Cheers !
Good Afternoon ,
Nice and wise message through a very interesting and meaningful poetry.
The interesting title expresses a great hope and that life will be brighter soonest. The given title fits for the chosen lines
Thank You for sharing and for the read.
Write on.
Good Morning,
A great title of a free verse poetry
Imagine Paradise
I admire the lines that completed this work of art and I agree with it.
Life in Paradise is what everyone is dreaming of myself included and what matters most is when people close to my heart are also with me in Paradise and I will be singing
Thank You Lord.
Write on.
Good Morning,
A beautiful story about a loving relationship for years and as the wife is not feeling well the husband is taking good care of her until the very end. A true love.
The Music seems to be the beautiful psrting moments for this loving couple.
Nice Story.
Thank You for sharing.
Write on.
Hood Morning,
A very intriguing title
A Room Without A View
A room that totally seoarates oneself to the whole world.
Terrible... horrible
..and I do not want to be in there.
The poem has a good flow. It rxpresses a very sad heavy drama in life or is there a life after all if one is confined in this kind of rooom.
Sad.
Thank You for sharing.
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Good Morning,
Very nice short story. A little problem.. solved and everyone is happy.
The story has a good flow with a nice storyline about this modern world technology and they are rnjoying what they are doing.
Thank You for sharing and for the worthwhile read.
Write on.
Good Morning,
This is lovely.
The title is very meaningful
We Are Like Leaves in The Wind
It is well- written and nicely presented.
Wonderful lines that completed this work of art.
The last two lines are my favorite lines thst makes a great conclusion.
Thank You for sharing and for the read.
Write on.
Good Morning,
A loving tribute to a dearest Mother through a nicely written and nicely presented free verse poetry with a very meaningful title
Where Would I Be Without You
A poem so full of love and care
A poem written by a poet especially for this great and Specisl lady in his life.
Thank You for sharing and for the great read.
Write on.
Good Morning,
A poem about life and all its undertakings. It is a fact that there is a message to be gleaned every moment and the choice to be enlightened awaits us.
Today we may be broke but hopefully we will have some cash tomorrow.
Do not lost hope.
Smile
Thank You for sharing and for the read.
Good Evening,
Exciting title of a well written and nicely presented
Three, Two , One...
A poem that bids goodbye to the old year and welcomes to the new year.
Worth all the cheers.
Happy New Year everyone.
Let us welcome this new year.
Very nice poem.
Write on.
Good Evening,
A nicely written tribute to the Military men and women who served for the freedom of the Motherland.
The poem has a good flow.
The rhythm and rhyme is wonderful all the way.
A very special dedication to the soldiers of the land.
Thank You for the worthwhile read.
Good Afternoon,
A very precious togetherness of two no hearts bonded as one.
Celebrating 40 years of togetherness.
Congratulations to both of you.
Ten more years for the
Gold.
WOW.
I am happy for both of you.
This calls for a celebration.
Cheers !
Thank You for the Great read.
Good Afternoon,
Such kisses may be gone with the wind.
Interesting free verse poetry with a good flow
Sad title
Lost Kisses
The poem expresses disappointments and a questioning heart of where did the kisses go..
A sad reality
Thank You for sharing and for the worthwhile read.
Write on.
Good Afternoon,
The preacher and the priest..
In a life and death situation..
Yet..they seemed not to understand each other at the beginning of the story.
Good that it turned out good after all those hassle
Thank You for sharing
The Preacher Man
Thank You for the worthwhile read too.
Write on
Good Afternoon,
A free verse poetry that touches many aspects of life or of living.
It expresses varied observations and great concern that shows the poet's caring heart.
The poem has a good flow and is well written and nicely presented.
The given title is very important
Thank You for sharing
Write on
Good Afternoon
A very captivating as well as intriguing title
She Ran
I wonder why and so many why..
With many lampposts she may hit and hurt herself.
Why run.. run for your life..
Whatever it is. You better run and run.
Thank You for sharing this and Thank You for sharing your talent.
Write on.
Good Afternoon,
An Alouette Form of poetry.
Thank You for the information about this form of poetry through the Special Note below the poem.
The poem is inspiring.
It shares great words of Wisdom thart has something to do with life.
A great poem.
Thank You for the read.
Write on.
Good Afternoon,
A Haiku
And it is nice, concise and wise
The title is about the country's season we called wintee and it is about to end.
Goodbye very cold winter.
It truly amazes me reading more and more poems about these seasons wherein I never experienced here in my country, the Philippines.
Thank You for sharing and for the worthwhile read.
Good Afternoon,
Interesting title
These Days
Yes..these days of the preeent world of modern technology where everything you like to be doing is as easy as a touch of a finger yet time is not enough to do the things you love to do.
The best time to set priorities otherwise nothing can be done.
I Admire the candidness and honesty of this nicely written work of art.
Thank You for sharing.
Write on
Good Morning,
What a Coincidence to have a field trip to the White House that President John F. Kennedy was assassinated.
Truly a
Historic Field Trip
Excellent and very convincing writer.
You brought excitement at the beginning and sadness at the end in my reading time
Thank You for sharing.
Write on
Good Morning,
Hahaha
Karma is real.
Jimmy must be very frustrated that his plan failed.
A short story with a good flow and it is fun when aliens are in the characters..As in mission possible.
Brilliant Idea.
Thank You for sharing and for the worthwhile read.
Write on.
Good Morning,
A nicely written free verse with an interesting topic to shsre.A poem so full of love and of much care. Thank
You for this poem that is so full of life all the way in through
The lines at the first stanza are my favorite lines that expresses a joyful note in living.
Thank You for sharing and for the read
Good Morning,
WELCOME TO Writing. Com. This is an awesome community and I enjoy my stay here.
Reading be between the lines I wish to
Congratulate You for your Mini Ebook and for the many achievements in your your Life.
You really belong to this new Modern Technology World.
Good luck and God bless on your daily undetakings.
Write on.
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