Good Morning,
I love the given title which expresses great positiveness.
This sounds like a very inspiring prose.
Highly admirable especially the comclusion
Wise and Nice.
Yes . Learn to let go, let live, let love and let God.
Thank You for sharing and for the worthwhile read.
Write on
Good Morning,
A very interesting and inspiring letter to oneself.
A lettee that serves as a goal to be reached and a dream to be realized.
Nicely written and direct to the point.
Good Luck and God Bless in all your undertakings.
Keep writing and keep posting.
Good Morning,
A free verse poetry written for a prompt ?
It is nice and uniquely described in a wonderful poetic lines that completed this work of art.
Precious as it is
A Lifetime Companion
I admire each line that completed this poetry
Special creativeness.
Thank You for sharing and for the read.
Good Morning,
A free verse poetry that expresses a philosophical message from the depthness of poetic thoughts,
It speaks of sports and other aspects of harmonious living.
The poem has a good flow and is well written and nicely presented.
The conclusion is Great.
Write on.
Good Morning,
A very short story. For 21 word s it is not that easy to make a story
However, you did it and it is brilliant.
I prefer the story number two
that is more nicer in presentation to me.
Thank You for sharing this great talent.
Write on.
Good Morning,
A letter.
A recipe.
A vety precious letter from a brother to a dearest sister.
Awesome letter with much Love and care.
I love the recipe.
Reading it makes me feel hungry as this sounds very delicious and nutritious as well.
Thank You for sharing this
Write on.
Good Morning,
Very interesting poem with an interesting title of this nicely interesting lines that completely
Fits for the given title.
The poem is well written and the presentation is uniquely wonderful.
Thank You for the worthwhile read.
The last line ...is very inspiring.
AWESOME
Thank You for shsring .
Good Morning,
The title is captivating as it is also another form of art
that fascinates many people.
Reading between the lines I can vividly picture a big place full of statues and many more items that the gallery displays.
Written with all candidness and truthfulness.
Thank You for sharing.
Write on.
Good Evening,
A very meaningful title
Raining Days Never Last
It speaks of the actual rain that falls as well as of a philosophical message about life done in the finest words of poetry.
Highly impressive .
The last line exoresses great Hope for a brighter tomorrow.
I agree.
Write on.
Good Evening,
The talented poet that you are is sharing this very interesting poetry with a captivating title of this poetry.
Snake Skin
Descriptive and direct to the point.
I admire the creativeness.
Nice in its unique way.
Thank You for sharing
Write on.
Good Evening,
Intriguing title and very interesting too.
1117
A Code Name
Something to hide or this is about Secrecy but you do not Agree
So you must resist with all your
Might
Do not surrender..
Yes..
The story in this poetry is full of drama yet so worth reading too.
Write on my
Fascinating Poem
Surrounded with the whole Family and the recepient of all their Love thus makes the perfect heir.
Nice and wise amusing lines that completed this work of art.
The poem has a good flow and the be rhythm and rhyme is wonderful.
Thank You for sharing and for the worthwhile read.
Write on.
Good Evening,
AMEN.
A very beautiful and meaningful prayer from the heart especially written from a son to his Dearest Mother.
You are blessed to have a loving and compassionate mother and at the same time she is bc also blessed to have a son who respects, honors and prays for her whole being.
A mother and son Bond that lives beyond forever.
This reminds me of our Mama who told my three younger brothers when we were teenagers... " Wherever you are, my love and prayers are with you..
And my brothers replied:
We Love you MAMA beyond forever.
That was her birthday and my brothers sang a song to her in our family program.
This letter reminds me of such precious and special time thst can never ever be forgotten.
I believe that you are enjoying a most fulfilling life..
WriterRick...
All because of the be Love, Honor and Respect you have for your Mother.
I am happy for you.
God Bless You all the way.
Good Evening,
A very captivating title of a free verse poetry
Party Of The Century
I agree.
The poem has a good flow and is well written
The presentation is uniquely beautiful in own precious way.
A party so full of life.
The lines fit for the given title.
A party so full of life.
Write on.
Good Afternoon,
A relationship without true love will never be harmonious.
But when true love exists everything will fall in line.
But this happens as a part of life that also gives a good lesson to learn.
Love and life are always our best teachers.
This is well written and with all honesty and sincerity.
Thank You for sharing.
Write on
Good Afternoon,
A short story that is well written and nicely presented.
A mystery..Possibly he was so tired that he was imagining things or it could be a haunted cabin.
Whatever it was.. it's so comforting to know that he was alive and can go back to his place in one piece.
Thank You for sharing.
Write on
Good Afternoon,
Written for a prompt.
Then a recipe
The story is like a horrible drama in real life
.
It almost cost Dave 's life and I am glad to know he is alive and survived this ordeal.
A story so full of suspense that I cannot wait to know if Dave is fine or not .
Well.
Thank You for the Recipe.
Wtite on.
Good Afternoon,
Happy Birthday to You
Happy Birthday to You
Happy Birthday
Happy Birthday
Happy Birthday
To You..
May God Bless You Always and Happiness fills your life together with all the people close to your heart
Thank You for sharing this beautiful
Happy Birthday Poetry
Good Afternoon,
A nice poem with a nice title
To Walk Towards The Goal
A goal oriented person is a doer and a winner.
I admire the chosen lines that completed this work of art.
The poem has a good flow.
To reach each goal , always believe in your ability to create the life you desire and deserve all because thoughts and beliefs can shape your reality and give a concrete action to each plan.
Thank You for sharing and for the worthwhile read.
Write on.
Good Morning,
A very interesting and inspiring Essay.
The story is expressing a very grateful Heart.
A story that makes your reader experiences a great time knowingñ such a very grateful heart will be blessed forever.
Thank You from my heart for the read and for sharing such a wonderful writing .
God Bless
Good Morning,
Written for a prompt.
Interestingly title
Beyond The Fields I Know
Very true we can never predict tomorrow so what we need to do is to enjoy today and make the most of it.
A poem that shares great wisdom.
Thank You for sharing snd for the worthwhile read.
Write on.
Good Morning,
WOW...
The greatly blessed Elara .
The Shooting Star that surely makes her wishes come true.
Great story line... and what makes this story most interesting to me is the Shooting Star in incident that I can relate on its making a difference in life... for the best.
Brilliant
Happy New Year 2024
Write on.
GOD BLESS YOU ALWAYS.
Good Morning
Thank You for the Specisl Note below the poetry that gives such information about this very precious and special
Free verse poetry.
The Tricube form of poetry
WOW.
Fascinating game that reminds me of our dearest PaPa who masters the
Game of Chess when he was alive .
Beautiful work of art all the way.
I admire the creativeness.
Thank You for sharing
Write on.
Good Morning,
The last line makes me laugh.
"And by the way no wright gsin either"
Two important topics that mskes a very captivating title of this short story.
Cooking and Cleaning
Both I can do with flying colors but something that I do not like to be in doing everyday.
Hahahs
But we need to eat everyday and we need to live in a healthy environment everyday.. so .. hahahaha
I enjoy reading this.
Great.. honest.. sincere.. story.
Write on.
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