I love this! I can relate to this a lot because my grandma passed away about 4 months ago and it was very hard... I really like your word choice and i like how you didnt make the poem rhyme. if it did rhyme, it would have been cheesy and not as good. So, good job!!!
This is really good. This is very relatable. I kind of lost interest towards the end, so you should try and make it a little more interesting or suspensful!
I really like this. it has a good meaning! I really like how you are not afraid to be different, because some people are. There is nothing wrong with being different!
I LOVE THIS:) This is like my life right now... There are a few cliches, but they are well written in this! My favorite line is "Being apart has been hard and brought out something in me I don't like." I really like this line and it has a lot of meaning. Very good job!! And I like that it is very colorful!
This is really good.I wish you would have used some punctuation. If you did, it would have broken up the stanzas and made it flow a little better. I really like the second stanza were you talk about not giving up and being strong!
I like the simplicity of this and I like how it is short and to the point! I can really relate to this because every night I think about things. I like the format of it. You can have used better word choice, though.
WHY IS THE FONT SOOOO BIG???????? I dont really get this because it has so many grammatical errors. You should proofread your work before you post it. But other than that, it has a good meaning!
This is good and it has a good format. I think you should left out the word "toy" in the 2nd paragraph, 2nd line. I don't get last two lines, though...
This is a really good story and it has a lot of meaning it is very easy to relate to because this happens all the time to people but they don't say anything because they still love the person even of all the bad stuff they have done to them. You could have said how Kimmy got her freedom because that is kind of confusing not knowing how...
OMG, I LOVE THIS POEM:) This is my favorite poem in the whole world! It has so much emotion and so much imagery! My favorite line is " I would spend the rest of my life low spirited and unspoken." It has emotion and is very different!! Very good job:)
Awwww, this poem is soo sweet and I love it!!!!!!! It has a lot of emotion and it seems like you really put a lot of thought into this poem!! I really love the last stanza, it is my favorite. Well, this whole poem is amazing and I really love it and very good job:)
This poem is good but I don't really know what it is supposed to be about. I don't really get the part about he gardener laughing, it doesn't really fit. My favorite line is " A seed of doubt has been planted inside your heart." This line is so true!
I really like this poem! This is the perfect time to write a poem like this. It has tons of imagery and I love the imagery!!!! It kind of reminds me Thanksgiving or Christmas! My favorite line is " Awakening you with the stinging air biting your nose." I relly love the simplicity in this poem!
I really love this poem! It has a lot of good emotion and it seems like you put a lot of thought into what you were going to write! I really like the line "Confonting the promblem was not an option." I also really like the line "She's choosing to ignore the comments. She's not going to let them see her break." My favorite line is "The scars will remain. But they are her reminders to stay stong. Moev on." It has a lot of meaning and it is a very inspirational line. But I think you could have put "and" in between strong and move on to make it flow a little better. But other than that, I love this peom!!
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