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Review of Teenagers  
Rated: E | (4.5)
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 Teenagers  (E)
Don't you just love 'em?
#1698689 by David Squires

*Star*Overall:
A humorous poem written from both the parent and the child's perspective. Good usage of adjectives. nice rhyme and the meter was smooth.

*Star*I particularly liked:
Beingthe parent of two teen daughters, I loved the dead on parental view of today's teens. Then from the other end, I could hear my child saying those things about me from her perspective, which was ironicaly mine, not so many years ago. *Smile*
I often think the thing about teens that upset parents is that parents can't be teens anymore.

*Star*Punctuation, grammar, spelling:
the poem didn't have any errors that I noticed. comma usage added to the rhythmic flow.

*Star*Content/ followed a prompt:
The content was opinionated, humorous, realistic, sarcastic, and fun.

*Star*Suggestions:
Keep writing!

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Rated: E | (4.5)

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 As I Wander'd Lone through Nature  (E)
An original poem in the style of Walt Whitman.
#591761 by Davy Kraken


*Star*Overall:
A poem about the various shapes of nature and their effects on the world in which we live. The writer takes us on a journey, pointing out the beauty in life around us.

*Star*I particularly liked:
The forma nd language choice pulled together the essence of the words you wrote.

*Star*Punctuation, grammar, spelling:
No mistakes of this nature found my eyes.

*Star*Content/ followed a prompt:
The content was real, natural, inspiring, uplifting, reflectve, emotional and enlightening.
The prompt was the writer's world.

*Star*Suggestions:
The poem you wrote is beautiful, It is my opinion that the font colors take away from the deeper meaning of the words. It might be stronger left black.

Thank you for sharing your work with us.
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Review of Skirts of Rain  
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Rated: E | (4.5)

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Skirts of Rain  (E)
Pantoum about rain in summertime, and rain falls outside as muse.
#678452 by winklett in the woods


*Star*Overall:
A poem of natural tastes, comparing rain to music. Personifing the rain as a composer who conducts throught the leaves.

*Star*I particularly liked:
The form you used lends grace to the words you wrote. Good usage of resonance and the word choices are bold. I enjoyed the symbolism.

*Star*Punctuation, grammar, spelling:
No mistakes of this nature were found.

*Star*Content/ followed a prompt:
The content was natural, reflective, inspiring, enlightening, imaginative and creative.
The prompt was the writer's mind.

*Star*Suggestions:
Please keep writing!

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Rated: E | (5.0)
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An Angel with a Hammer  (E)
Losing Dad in his sixties was devastating but he left me lessons in love.
#1316843 by Redtowrite


*Bullet*Overall:
An extrememly touching and tear jerking poem which tells the story of a father and daughter, starting close as they should be and growing apart through time. Re-united once again through tradgedy and then finaly the end. Such amazing feelings conveyed in such few words, I felt my heart in my throat as I almost choked on your words.

*Bullet*I particularly liked:
The way you took the reader through the progression of your lives together, the stages and how they became. Your honesty shined through. I am going to call my Dad after I write this review.

*Bullet*Punctuation, grammar, spelling:
although I may have missed a few, with those tears swelling in my eyes, I did not notice any mistakes of this kind.

*Bullet*Content/ followed a prompt:
The content was real, reflective, sorrowful, tear jerking, sincere, emotional, inspiring, and enlightening. The prompt was the writer's heart and soul.

*Bullet*Suggestions:Keep writing!

Thank you for sharing your work on WDC.

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Review of Bathtub Haven  
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Rated: E | (4.0)

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Bathtub Haven  (E)
A true occurance.
#1132221 by ~WhoMe???~


*Star*Overall:
This is a comical poem written in rhyming form about the terror the writer's dog feels through a thunder storm.

*Star*I particularly liked:
The whisical rhymes were cute and smart. Made me smile. *Smile*

*Star*Punctuation, grammar, spelling:
No mistakes of this nature were noticable to me.

*Star*Content/ followed a prompt:
The content was comical, quirky, honest, and cute.

*Star*Suggestions:
The only suggestion I have for this piece is the last line of the fourth stanza breaks up the otherwise perfect rhythm.

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Review of Do Not Enter  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Do Not Enter  (E)
An inner reflection for those hiding from all.
#1131854 by ~WhoMe???~


*Bullet*Overall:
An extremly powerful poem embarking on the depths of your mind and soul. It sparked my couriosity and made me reach for more.

*Bullet*I particularly liked:
The usage of negatives to deflect the language is intriquing. The resonance of "not" seems to leave an overall feeling of hopelessness.

*Bullet*Punctuation, grammar, spelling:
I did not find any mistakes of this nature.

*Bullet*Content/ followed a prompt:
The content was forboding, reflective, emotional, dark, inviting, honest, creative, inspiring and soulfull.

*Bullet*Suggestions:I don't believe that anything else is needed in this piece. perfect is perfect. *Smile*
Keep writing!

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Review of All To You  
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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All To You  (E)
Written to a man I loved
#1137458 by ~WhoMe???~


*Bullet*Overall:
A lovely poem written to the author's spouse. Good rhyme and rhythm. Written in couplets in four line stanzas, the form lends simplicity to the meaning.

*Bullet*I particularly liked:
The honesty and emotions that were conveyed through your words.
Very touching.

*Bullet*Punctuation, grammar, spelling:
I did not notice any mistakes of this nature.

*Bullet*Content/ followed a prompt:
The content was reflective, romantic, sincere, emotional, and honest.
The prompt was the writer's heart.

*Bullet*Suggestions:I can't think of a thing that would make this piece any stronger. Nice work. Keep writing!

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Review of Faded Hearts  
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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 Faded Hearts  (E)
A widower and his grandson spend time together as he deals with the memories of his wife.
#1687964 by BScholl


*Bullet*Overall:
A heart warming contemporary story about boy meets girl in the 21st century, from a seniors point of view. Youth prevails as the leader of the agaed.

*Bullet*I particularly liked:
The characterization of Frank. I could feel his Alice there and his pain.
Good use of dialouge.

*Bullet*Punctuation, grammar, spelling:
I did not notice any mistakes of this nature in your piece.

*Bullet*Content/ followed a prompt:
The content was reflective, sincere, mournful, romantic, and insightful.

*Bullet*Suggestions:Keep writing!
I cannot think of a thing to make this piece any better.


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Rated: E | (4.0)
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#131502 by Not Available.


*Bullet*Overall:
A conemporary poem with lots of contrast and imagery. Nice word choices and narrative structure.

*Bullet*I particularly liked:
"The Rainy Day" by Longfellow stirs the spirit
Poems read by candlelight, the power knocked out.
One must take a moment and just relax a bit
Liquid tickles the rain gauge, an inch ends the drought.


*Bullet*Punctuation, grammar, spelling:
I did not notice any mistakes of this nature in your piece.

*Bullet*Content/ followed a prompt:
The content was reflective, sincere, contemporary, romantic and alluring. The prompt was the writer's mind.

*Bullet*Suggestions:
From time to time I like to do a re-write of a verse, really to help give writer's options, not changes.

This is a re-write of your first verse, you may like it, you may not.

welcome is the rain, who's drops fall like feather's from the sky
The rusted rooster spins on the roof with the winds once again
The electric sky flashes with light as the echoes of the clouds roll by.
Emerge yourself in the magic of the day's facinating rain.
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Review of A Vile Visitor  
Rated: ASR | (4.5)
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 A Vile Visitor  (ASR)
With this kind of dream who needs a nightmare...
#921774 by Tammy~Catchin Up~


*Bullet*Overall:
This poem is weritten in rhyming couplets and takes the reader on a journey throguh a ream, a bad dream.

*Bullet*I particularly liked:

Down a pathway he does go,
leisurely walking very slow.

Around a corner and into light,
this deception feels so right.


*Bullet*Punctuation, grammar, spelling:
I did not notice any mistakes of this nature in you piece.

*Bullet*Content/ followed a prompt:
The content was suspencful, allurig, reflective, and alarming.
The prompt ws the wrtier's dreams.

*Bullet*Suggestions:Keep writing!
The only think I would like to see here is a description of the man in your dreams. Is he old, young, creepy, fresh? This would hep the reader understand why you followed him.
besides from that, you did a wonderful job.

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Review of I Love America!  
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Rated: E | (4.5)

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I Love America!  (E)
I wonder if others feel this way about their country and would enjoy hearing from them.
#1687786 by J. A. Buxton


*Star*Overall:
This piece speaks to the world and the American people in general. Taking the reader throught the writer's life as an American, her strugles, her victories. This is a touching and reletive piece of writing.

*Star*I particularly liked:
You honesty and sincere nature. You captured my heart and mind.

*Star*Punctuation, grammar, spelling:
I did not notice any mistakes of this nature in your piece.

*Star*Content/ followed a prompt:
The content was reflective, honest, emotional, and inspiring. The prompt was the writer's life as an American.

*Star*Suggestions:
I cannot think of a thing to improve this wonderful piece.

Thank you for sharing your work with us.
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Rated: 18+ | (4.0)

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Surrender to Command  (18+)
Two agents confront each other over their abandoning of a dying planet.
#1683710 by hiryuu


*Star*Overall:
This story is captivating and well written. Giving the reader jst enough information at a time, the writer draws the audience in with a method of susspence.
*Star*I particularly liked:
The word choices and imagery were superb. very good dialoug and formatting.
*Star*Punctuation, grammar, spelling:
I did not notice any mistakes of this nature in your piece.
*Star*Content/ followed a prompt:
The content was confrontational, emotional, reflective,and entertaining. The prompt was the writer's imagination.
*Star*Suggestions:
keep writing!
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Review of HER PATH  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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HER PATH  (E)
free verse poem
#1673671 by Yellow Rose


*Bullet*Overall:
A poem in stanzas about love, marriage, and the loss of both.
Great use of imagery and details. Good word choices with a true sense of emotions.
*Bullet*I particularly liked:
The refrain line of "her path was white satin and roses".
This line brought the piece a sense of hope. She had a plan for happiness in her marriage.
*Bullet*Punctuation, grammar, spelling:
I did not notice any mistakes of this nature.
*Bullet*Content/ followed a prompt:
The content was emotional, inspiring, reflective, enlightening, profound, and showed a level of sorrow and loss. The prompt was the writer's heart and soul.
*Bullet*Suggestions:Keep writing!
I cannot think of a thing to make this a better piece. You have captured my attention and my heart.
Thank you for sharing your work on WDC.

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Review of LOST  
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Rated: ASR | (4.5)
Good imagery. I enjoyed your narrative tone. A good take on the prompt. Good luck in the contest and write on!
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Review of A Dis-Ash-ter  
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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A Dis-Ash-ter  (E)
A storoem about losing a "friend".
#1673587 by Harry


*Bullet*Overall:
A great little poem which tells a sad story about a life lost.
*Bullet*I particularly liked:
The true emotions which were reflected with your words, and of course the twist.
*Bullet*Punctuation, grammar, spelling:
I didn't find andy mistakes of this nature.
*Bullet*Content/ followed a prompt:
The content was emotional, reflective, remorseful,sincere, and creative. The prompt was the writer's heart.
*Bullet*Suggestions:Keep writing!

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Review of Reveille  
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Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
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 Reveille  (13+)
Everyone else is dead. Why did i survive? and more so, what happened?
#1647435 by AmokTheClown


*Bullet*Overall:
This is certainly an interesting read. It takes the reader on a twisting journey trying to figure out the character.
*Bullet*I particularly liked:
The descriptions and imagery.
*Bullet*Punctuation, grammar, spelling:
I did not notice any mistakes of this nature.
*Bullet*Content/ followed a prompt:
The content was imaginative,science fiction, phsycological. The prompt was the writer's mind.
*Bullet*Suggestions:Keep writing!

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Review of Never Alone  
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Rated: E | (4.0)
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Never Alone  (E)
This fact helps me through the lonely times.
#1668719 by very thankful


*Bullet*Overall:
A simple poem reflecting one's religious faith in their God.
*Bullet*I particularly liked:
The direct tone and narative voice.
*Bullet*Punctuation, grammar, spelling:
There were no mistakes of this nature found.
*Bullet*Content/ followed a prompt:
The content was spiritual, reflective, sincere. The prompt was the writer's heart.
*Bullet*Suggestions:Keep writing!

Thank you for sharing your work on WDC.

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Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
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Mined, Bodied and Sold (souled...soled)  (18+)
For IamMark's Auction
#1247736 by fyn


*Bullet*Overall:
A fabulously written piece that really makes the reader want to shake your hand. I came away feeling like I knew you, we have so many things incommon, and I aspire to do so many of the things you have.
*Bullet*I particularly liked:
YOu inredibly delicious narative voice. very appetizing.
*Bullet*Punctuation, grammar, spelling:
I did not notice any mistakes of this nature.
*Bullet*Content/ followed a prompt:
The content was reflective, personal, inspiring, enlightening. The prompt was the writer's mind.
*Bullet*Suggestions:Keep writing!

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Review of Switch  
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Rated: 13+ | (4.0)

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Switch  (13+)
Naughty photos lead to trouble.
#1380093 by Jeff



*Star*Overall:
This is an interesting tory with a moral lesson. Good plot for a modern story.
*Star*I particularly liked:
The twist ending.
*Star*Punctuation, grammar, spelling:
I did not notice any mistakes of this nature.
*Star*Content/ followed a prompt:
the content was refelctive, suspencfull, intriquing. The prompt was for an un noted contest.
*Star*Suggestions:
You rock! Keep writing.
Thank you for sharing your work with us.
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Review of Lighthouse  
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Rated: E | (4.0)
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 Lighthouse  (E)
Finish the story contest entry
#1673531 by Lee: Namaste!


*Bullet*Overall:
An ening toan unfinished story, your piece is compelling and entertaining.
*Bullet*I particularly liked:
the creativeity and directive you took following the mood set by the contributing auther's begining.
*Bullet*Punctuation, grammar, spelling:
There were several notations of comma misusage or omission.
I also noticed a few sentences where the last word was ommited, leaving the reader guessig what you intended.
*Bullet*Content/ followed a prompt:
The content was supernatural, adventuros, romantic. The prompt was for "Invalid Item" 
*Bullet*Suggestions:Keep writing!

Thank you for your submission to my contest. Best of Luck.

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Review of Spirit Walk  
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Rated: E | N/A (Review only item.)
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 Spirit Walk  (E)
Seek a mystic path to explore a connection with the future.
#1665662 by turtlemoon-dohi


*Bullet*Overall:
A wonderful and beautifully written poem about the paths of life.
*Bullet*I particularly liked:With universal time to grow and know
Hear what has always been said
All roads behind start up ahead


*Bullet*Punctuation, grammar, spelling:
There were no mistakes of this nature found.
*Bullet*Content/ followed a prompt:
The content was mystic, enlightening, inspiring, natural, and sincere. The prompt was the writer's heart.
*Bullet*Suggestions:Keep writing!

Thank you for sharing your work on WDC.

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Rated: E | (4.0)
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Days of pain and Pleasure  (E)
Today's sorrow, will be strength tomorrow
#1187912 by Humming Bird


*Bullet*Overall:
In this piece the author writes about the birth of a family member which took precedence over study time, causing a dissapointing grade. Though shocked, they were eventually better off.
*Bullet*I particularly liked:
"the footnotes scribbled underneath each answer guided me through many fields of the subject like a lantern in darkness."
*Bullet*Punctuation, grammar, spelling:
I did not notice and mistakes of this nature.
*Bullet*Content/ followed a prompt:
The content was reflective, inspiring, sincere. The prompt was the writer's life.
*Bullet*Suggestions:
*Thumbsup*This is certainly a good start to a deeper meaning of sacrifice.
*Pencil* The story line became shaky to me when you mention having a new teacher. I felt like I missed something and went back to re-read. use some tweaking. perhaps the organization of ideas could use some tweaking:*Bigsmile*
Keep writing!

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Review of Fluffy the Dragon  
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Rated: E | (4.0)
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#167493 by Not Available.


*Bullet*Overall:
A story about a girl whose pet komoto dragon escapes her yard and terrifies her cranky neighbors.

*Bullet*I particularly liked:
The way you used today's prompt. Good thinking.
*Bullet*Punctuation, grammar, spelling:
I did notice a small typo/ mistake.
"When the people from the zoo an hour later, I had finally resigned myself to sharing my sweet dragon with others."
When the people from the zoo WHAT an hour later?

*Bullet*Content/ followed a prompt:
The content was informative, original, and comical. The content was for "The Writer's Cramp - Poetry Week" 
*Bullet*Suggestions:I would have liked to have seen the dragon, as well as the expressions on the neighbor's faces. Even the damage caused by his adventures would have been great images to include.

Keep writing!

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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)

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Deep-Writing or Moral Argument  (13+)
Finding the depth in one's writing
#1556299 by Joy


*Star*Overall:

This writer's guide provides insightful information in regards to deep emotional writing. The author gives specific examples of what they speak of as well as advice to follow.

*Star*I particularly liked:

The examples of writing which you referred to in the piece. This gives the reader/writer a solid starting place.

*Star*Punctuation, grammar, spelling:

I did not notice any mistakes of this nature.

*Star*Content/ followed a prompt:

The content was insightful, educating, and informative. The prompt was writing.

*Star*Suggestions:Keep writing and sharing!

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Review of Swirling Reminder  
Rated: E | (4.5)
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 Swirling Reminder  (E)
A poem about Salvador Dali and what he's left behind.
#1674573 by Than Pence


*Bullet*Overall:
A poetic tribute to Salvador Dali. I enjoyed the imagery and appreciation for his work.
*Bullet*I particularly liked:
The swirling colors remaining to remind us of an unstable world. Nice touch.
*Bullet*Punctuation, grammar, spelling:
I did not notice any mistakes of this nature.

*Bullet*Content/ followed a prompt:
The content was reflective, appreciative, respectful, and enlightening. The prompt was for "The Writer's Cramp - Poetry Week" 
*Bullet*Suggestions:Keep writing and good luck!

Thank you for sharing your work on WDC.

This review is meant as constructive criticism and should be taken as such. This is an individual opinion and not that of a collective effort.


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