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they don't really know

*Star*Overall:A short poem full of deep thought and emotions. Nicely written and gets the message across.
*Star*I particularly liked:How he truly feels inside his heart

is enough to end what he didn't start.
*Star*Punctuation, grammar, spelling:I think that commas at the end of some of the lines would help the reader with pause breaks and inflections.
*Star*Content/ followed a prompt:Only the author's heart.
*Star*Suggestions:Keep writing!
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FOURTY FLAKES OF SNOW

*Star*Overall:a lovely poem about a home town in winter. I loved the imagery and the word choices here.
*Star*I particularly liked:
They never want to go

The air is still, damp and chilled

Which raps around your throat

Tries to suffocate your will

This deadly isotope
*Star*Punctuation, grammar, spelling:I would have liked to see the piece punctuated to give the reader indication of pauses and rhythm.
*Star*Content/ followed a prompt:The content was deep and meaningful.
*Star*Suggestions:I don't think you should double space this. Break it down into stanzas with a line break between, this would improve its beauty. Keep writing!
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a i the new shakespeare?

*Star*Overall:an Italian sonnet with a twist of irony. I enjoyed reading this and often feel the same way.
*Star*I particularly liked:With articulation and orat’ry
I carve my verse with ingenuity
Of dialect I am a devotee
I’m truly without ambiguity
*Star*Punctuation, grammar, spelling:No mistakes of this nature found.
*Star*Content/ followed a prompt:the content was vivid and meaningful.
*Star*Suggestions:some of the rhymes seemed forced. Keep writing!
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untouched whispers

*Star*Overall:a beautiful poem involving nature and God.
*Star*I particularly liked:The second stanza.Here – where the fields hide
beneath the snow – the words
of wisdom ripple through the
leafless branches, dispensing
upon me a stable heart.

*Star*Punctuation, grammar, spelling:I did not find any mistakes of this kind.
*Star*Content/ followed a prompt:Yes, followed a prompt for a contest.
*Star*Suggestions:I would have liked to have seen more. i think you should expand on this, perhaps a sequel.
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what is the world coming to ?

*Star*Overall:A nice poem reflecting on the shortcomings of mankind today. a message to stop and help your neighbor.
*Star*I particularly liked:What ever happened to helping your fellow man?

Can't you see some of us need a helping hand?

Why must everyone kick us when we are down?

Do they feel like a bigger man to see us on the ground?
*Star*Punctuation, grammar, spelling:No mistakes of this nature found.
*Star*Content/ followed a prompt:The content was good, the word choice was good.
*Star*Suggestions:I don't think you need to double space, it throws off the rhythm. Keep writing!
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betrayed

*Star*Overall:very funny. Down right cute. I loved this poem about a really bad day.
*Star*I particularly liked:She opened the door and rushed into his arms.
I was past any feelings of loss.
I may lose my wife after losing my job,
I could not lose my wife to my boss!
*Star*Punctuation, grammar, spelling:not mistakes noticed
*Star*Content/ followed a prompt:Yes, for the traditional poetry contest
*Star*Suggestions:Keep writing and don't give up on finding a new love!
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Review of A Darkest Sleep  
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a darkest sleep

*Star*Overall:I really liked this poem about nightmares. Very creative word choices. I loved the imagery.
*Star*I particularly liked:The closet, the door ajar. good stuff.
*Star*Punctuation, grammar, spelling:n/A
*Star*Content/ followed a prompt:Yes, followed a prompt for tales of darkness poetry contest. It won 3rd place, but in my opinion should have won first.
*Star*Suggestions:Keep writing and stay out of the dark *Bigsmile*
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My Father's Pictures

*Star*Overall:a heart tugging story. A father at the end of his days sharing his memories with his son.
*Star*I particularly liked:The ending
*Star*Punctuation, grammar, spelling: No mistakes were found.
*Star*Content/ followed a prompt:yes, followed the prompt for the cramp contest, write about an early childhood memory of your father. I can't tell from the writing if this memory is from your childhood, or adulthood.
*Star*Suggestions:Lose some of your adverbs. They are the writer's enemy *Bigsmile*. Keep writing and good luck with the contest.
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The slap heard around the world

*Star*Overall:A story of parental guidance through the eyes of a child. A father who is stern, but with love.
*Star*I particularly liked:Even when his normally patient, gentle hands had to be hard enough to temper the tiger that poked its head through my emerging personality, it was done with love.
*Star*Punctuation, grammar, spelling: He would ask, I would answer, he would show me where I went wrong changed to; he would ask I would giggle, I would answer, he would tell me no, I would giggle. This quickly deteriorated to he would ask and I would giggle and giggle. This sentence is confusing at the beginning. I had to read it through a few times to get it.
*Star*Content/ followed a prompt:yes, for the Cramp contest. write about an early childhood memory of your father.
*Star*Suggestions:Keep writing! You have a good style about you.
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TAKEN

*Star*Overall:I really liked this poem. Very nicely written and does a good ob delivering the message.
*Star*I particularly liked:Rapture felt in my decaying bones
clenching on within my veins
coldness blows over my flesh
*Star*Punctuation, grammar, spelling:N/A
*Star*Content/ followed a prompt:The poem flowed nicely. Good rhythm and rhyme too.
*Star*Suggestions:Keep writing!
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progressions of love

*Star*Overall:This is a nice couplet love poem.
*Star*I particularly liked:Our first kiss, breathless bliss, a memory to cherish

Your gentle caress, I must confess, without you I must perish

*Star*Punctuation, grammar, spelling:I think that you should punctuate the end of the lines.
*Star*Content/ followed a prompt:write a love poem for a contest.
*Star*Suggestions:I would suggest searating this piece into couplets, seeing as how that is how it is written. It would be much nicer for the reader that way.
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structured form poetry folder

*Star*Overall:Excellently preparred and full of such valuable poems and their forms. I had to add it to my favorites.
*Star*I particularly liked:the notes at the end of each poem explaining the form and rules.
*Star*Suggestions:You could really put together a forum for form poetry for those of us who would like to learn. I found this very useful. I couldn't only review one poem because they were all so good.
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A journey of love and loss

*Star*Overall:Wow! what a poem. I have had an experience like that and I know the horrible feeling of loss that you both suffered.
*Star*I particularly liked:The truth coming through your words. very real
*Star*Punctuation, grammar, spelling:nothing here
*Star*Content/ followed a prompt:just her heart
*Star*Suggestions:keep writing, and post this on the MOMs board for review. this is the kind of thing we need!
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Review of How Time Flies  
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how time flies

*Star*Overall:A really cute story about a man who finds the answer to time and over uses it.
*Star*I particularly liked:His living room was nicely furnished, everything in its place. Time, it seemed, had an excellent sense of interior design.
*Star*Punctuation, grammar, spelling:No mistakes were noticed.
*Star*Content/ followed a prompt:Yes, followed a prompt for the Cramp contest. write about something magic.
*Star*Suggestions:i can't think of anything to make this better. good Job eva!
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Review of Mom, Mom  
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Mom, Mom

*Star*Overall:I thought this was so cute. and just like the real thing too.
*Star*I particularly liked:How he cut into the poem with"mom" a few times.
*Star*Punctuation, grammar, spelling:You should capitalize the first letter of each line. You need to use periods if you are going to use question marks. You shouldn't use ending punctuation on some sentences and not others.
*Star*Content/ followed a prompt:the content in this poem is coming from a small child, in awe of the world and full of questions.
*Star*Suggestions:Perhaps add some dialogue from the MOM. the back and forth would be cute.
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Review of Without You  
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without you

*Star*Overall:a lovely poem about ones's love for another.
*Star*I particularly liked:Like a flame my passion grows
Devouring the whole of my being
*Star*Punctuation, grammar, spelling:*Pencil*Use a comma after "without you" in the first few verses.
*Star*Content/ followed a prompt:no prompt.
*Star*Suggestions:

*Pencil*Breaking this down into 4 line stanzas would make it easier to read and it would flow nicer.
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Review of Used  
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Used

*Star*Overall:This poem has potential. You have put a lot of feelings into it.
*Star*I particularly liked:On the stone cold plates of my heart, your name is now engraved.
*Star*Punctuation, grammar, spelling:No mistakes here.
*Star*Content/ followed a prompt:No prompt
*Star*Suggestions:
*Pencil*You should brake this into 4 line stanzas
*Pencil*You should count out the syllables in each line and make a pattern, or rhythm flow.
*Pencil* some of your lines seem like they are there just to complete the rhyme. remember, Rhyming is not all there is to poetry. Keep writing and your inner poet will come out!
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Review of Childhood  
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childhood

*Star*Overall:A really cute story that I can easily relate to. I was always imagining like that as a child...guess I still do*Wink*
*Star*I particularly liked:The twist! “Tommy!” yelled his big sister, Sonja, who now stood covered in flour that Tommy took from his mother's storage bin, “Darn you, I'm telling Mom!” She growled some more as she brushed herself off. “Dinner's ready and Mom said to come get you, so let's go before I knock your block off.”
*Star*Punctuation, grammar, spelling:i didn't find and corrections.
*Star*Content/ followed a prompt:yes, write about something magical for THE CRAMP.
*Star*Suggestions:the only suggestion that I would make, is not to use the line breaks. You can indent for new paragraphs and I think it would be better. Keep writing!
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A circuitous route

*Star*Overall:This is a good story about a man searching for lost treasure. enduring years of bad luck and n the end...
*Star*I particularly liked: The coughing and flow of blood stopped as abruptly as they had started. As Alex sluggishly rolled his eyes to meet Marc’s own, Marc noticed that his corneas were completely swallowed by heavily dilated pupils, giving him a demonic black-eyed appearance in the light of the single candle. The imagery here was great. nice descriptions. very vivid.

*Star*Punctuation, grammar, spelling:No mistakes noticed
*Star*Content/ followed a prompt:the story flowed nicely and over the spans of time.
*Star*Suggestions:I would like to see more depth to your characters. More real traits. You have a good story, but as with any story, it is only as good as the characters who play in it. Go back and do a character arc for each of them. Fill out a character analysis and you will have a much better story. keep writing.
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{not what you think

*Star*Overall:This is an acrostic poem about beginnings.
*Star*I particularly liked:{/b}Given a chance you hemmed and hawed
Inner most thoughts were doubts that gnawed
*Star*Punctuation, grammar, spelling:No mistakes noticed
*Star*Content/ followed a prompt:Followed the acrostic wonderfully. The ASCC DDEF rhyme was nice for the feeling of the piece.
*Star*Suggestions:keep writing. I am not a fan of using the same word repeat itself line to line , as you did in the center stanza.
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{not what you think

*Star*Overall:This is a nice poem about life and love through time.
*Star*I particularly liked:How the narrator ended each stanza in a similar statement.
*Star*Punctuation, grammar, spelling:No mistakes noticed
*Star*Content/ followed a prompt:
*Star*Suggestions:keep writing
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Review of Simple Pleasures  
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*Star*Overall:I really liked the rhyme and rhythm in this pied. Simple pleasures was a great title as well.
*Star*I particularly liked:The smell fresh cut grass, squishing mud through your toes.
Bright yellow dandelions, to rub on your nose.

A castle of sand, with a genuine moat.
Homemade ice-cream, for a big root beer float
*Star*Punctuation, grammar, spelling:No mistakes found
*Star*Content/ followed a prompt:Flowed nicely and ended perfectly
*Star*Suggestions:just keep writing
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{Finding Fantasy Land

*Star*Overall:What a clever story to follow this prompt. I love how the wagon comes alive to the child.
*Star*I particularly liked: Except for the two bright lights bearing down on her! A dragon, she thought frantically, as she stared at its large eyes. At the last moment she bolted out of the way, and watched as the dragon whizzed past her. It was blue, and quite small as far as dragons were concerned. It shouted at her to keep out of the road, followed by a stream of other words not-so-nice words.
*Star*Punctuation, grammar, spelling:NOt a mistake could be found.
*Star*Content/ followed a prompt:Perfectly and with style. A hippo, a red wagon, and a castle
*Star*Suggestions:Keep writing

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Review of Mary's Fourth  
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*Star*Overall:I really enjoyed this story. A nice mix of fact and fiction. An author's real life struggles may have been the motivation behind her classic horror novel. You did a good job putting it all together and packaging it in an easy to read manner.
*Star*I particularly liked:Mary's fourth child, like her novel, had been a product of her research and indeed a product of her grief. Her fourth child wasn't born, but was created, from parts and pieces of her first three. The notebook would contain the proof.
*Star*Punctuation, grammar, spelling:Nothing to correct.
*Star*Content/ followed a prompt:The prompt was followed perfectly and the story was easy to read and understand. So much detail in such a short piece.
*Star*Suggestions:Keep writing. I would like to see you go all the way with this. who is standing in the graveyard with him? Does he find the notebook? What does he do with it and why. I can see this going into series easily.
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Review of Happyworld  
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wow, gary, this was actually a little hard to read...not grammatically, but due to the graphic subject. I liked how you were way "out side the box" with the prompts that were given. refreshing...
I did notice this error. "cause" should have been "caused" and there was an un needed comma as well.
I am pretty sure you will take the contest with this one.
I like your style, I think.

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