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Review by cmboutelle
Rated: E | (4.5)
Being an American I had to read this poem, and what a joy it was. How nice to see someone compare the good and not revel in the bad.

Also thank you for visiting my port and sharing your views, much appreciated. cmb
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Review of Emily's Sister  
Review by cmboutelle
Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
Interesting poem, some of the wording was certainly diffrent. You can feel the love-sick feeling the author has for "Emily's Kid Sister".
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Review of 2step  
Review by cmboutelle
Rated: E | (4.5)
Your poems are happy, I enjoy reading them. Thanks
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Review of Marriage  
Review by cmboutelle
Rated: E | (4.0)
Cute, hope the vacation is longer than the poem.
Only critique I have would be should you have capitalized the "I"'s in each sentence?
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Review of The Wool Untwines  
Review by cmboutelle
Rated: E | (4.5)
I liked the way the peom was almost conversational. It kept my interest, I wanted to hear the story. Nicely done.
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Review of The Mirror  
Review by cmboutelle
Rated: E | (4.5)
Although the peom has a sad message, it still captures the reader's attention, and sometimes life is just not all a bowl of cherries. The rhythm was pretty good throught the poem and the rhyms worked nicely with the message, not just put there to make a rhyme.
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Review by cmboutelle
Rated: E | (4.5)
Loved this poem, very witty. I liked the easy flow of this poem as well. Your work gave me a nice chuckle for the day. Nice job.
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Review of One Day  
Review by cmboutelle
Rated: E | (4.0)
Short and too the point. Few corrections: I think you want to say "I'M hurt" when "I'm" ready. The poem had feeling, even if that feeling was saddness.
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Review by cmboutelle
Rated: E | (4.0)
The poem has a nice message, one of hope and traquility. I don't know if it a a "holiday" as much as
a "place". I did like the flow and I did like the tie in line you used: We'll just have to wait and see.

Keep writing and creating!
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Review of Cherry Tree  
Review by cmboutelle
Rated: ASR | (4.0)
I'm just not good with poems like this, I'm not sure if there is something deeper I should be looking for in this poem. I am not making the conection between the fallen cherry and WWI.
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Review of eyes shut  
Review by cmboutelle
Rated: E | (4.0)
There are some grammatical errors, but, I did enjoy reading this poem, found it brought me back to my days of dating and crushes. Nice work.
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Review of Path Not Taken  
Review by cmboutelle
Rated: E | (4.0)
The poem has a melancholy quality the "drop by drop" makes me feel the tears.
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Review of it would be this  
Review by cmboutelle
Rated: E | (4.0)
Nice romantice poem, very heartfelt. Some spelling errors: I'm not sure if you intended not to capitalize "I" or not. Also in the second to last sentence: I'm should have an ' in it. Line 4 do you mean: allow me "to" fly? Still there is a lot of feeling here.
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Review of Lately Waiting  
Review by cmboutelle
Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
I can see the story this poem is trying to tell, again
the rymes seem to take over the rhythm, but I still liked were this was going. Keep writing and keep coming up with good ideas.
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Review of FeelingUgly  
Review by cmboutelle
Rated: 13+ | (3.5)
The message is clear in the poem. The rhythm of the poem is a little off, a litle choppy as you search for rhyming words.
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Review by cmboutelle
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Nicley worded kept me reading. Your ending gave me an unexpected chuckle as I didn't see it coming. Thanks for the nice read.
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Review of BUTTERFLY.  
Review by cmboutelle
Rated: E | (5.0)
Just absolutely beautiful. What a great tradition.
The poem just flowed so nicely and I loved the story.
I too love butterflies and they are a symbol of hope
for and rebirth for me.
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Review of Appomattox Autumn  
Review by cmboutelle
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Very Colorful poem. Your words are beautiful although the subject of Civil War is so sad.
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Review of A Love Poem  
Review by cmboutelle
Rated: E | (4.5)
Love the sarcasim. Enjoyed the read and the delivery.
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Review by cmboutelle
Rated: E | (4.5)
Great subject, rhythm and rhymes were right on.
Like your thinking, but, I'm on the side of your
aunt. I feel too young to be this grey!
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Review of LITTLE WHITE MOTH  
Review by cmboutelle
Rated: E | (4.0)
Meg:

Nicely done, good rhythm.
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Review of The Opportunist  
Review by cmboutelle
Rated: E | (4.5)
The poem is well written. The rhyme and rhythm are good, the subject matter a little dark, but, poetry is something that comes from the heart.
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Review by cmboutelle
Rated: E | (4.5)
7UP: Who would have thought personal hygiene would be
so full of fun!. I loved the spirit of this piece, just
a nice fun read.
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Review by cmboutelle
Rated: E | (4.5)
Meg: I just loved it. I know just what you mean, I
was introduced to the site last Winter and I'm hooked
too. I love reading, writting and looking at my reviews. Great poem. Keep having fun.
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Review by cmboutelle
Rated: E | (4.5)
Love the subject matter, as I am a PB junkie myself.
Your ending surpised me!! Never quite thought of my
PB in that manner.
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