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Review of Don't Buy the Lie  
Review by cmboutelle
Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
Your poem is powerful, big message here.
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Review of Heartfelt  
Review by cmboutelle
Rated: E | (4.0)
"Heartfelt" is a good title for this poem, the reader can feel for the young maiden. Nicely written.
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Review of Love Life  
Review by cmboutelle
Rated: E | (4.0)
A very thoughtful poem.
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Review of School Poems  
Review by cmboutelle
Rated: E | (4.5)
I just loved that you took three subjects that are analytical and turned it into poetry. I liked Chemistry the best. Nicely done.
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Review by cmboutelle
Rated: E | (4.5)
Well done, for something you have never understood, at least you keep reading.
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Review of THE MIDNIGHT HOUR  
Review by cmboutelle
Rated: E | (4.0)
Neat little poem, I liked your lines "when the hands of clock join in prayer". The last three lines don't seem to flow as easily for me.
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Review of Smile  
Review by cmboutelle
Rated: E | (4.5)
Makes me smile too. Nice subject to write about in your poem. Simple poem with a simple message.
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Review of Open your eyes  
Review by cmboutelle
Rated: E | (4.5)
A poem right from the heart. Lots of feelings in this piece. I hope your friend appreciates what you see.
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Review by cmboutelle
Rated: E | (4.5)
A nice way to tell a good moral. Things do not always end as they start. Everything flows nicely, I just stumbled a little bit with the rhythm in the last line, still a really good piece of work.
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Review of Snowflakes  
Review by cmboutelle
Rated: E | (4.0)
Gentle poem about a gentle snow. Your poems are peaceful.
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Review by cmboutelle
Rated: E | (4.5)
Just lovely, lovely words of hope and encouragement.
Thank you for the nice thoughts.
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Review of Hands  
Review by cmboutelle
Rated: E | (4.0)
One critique: last line did you mean: exploring "our" hands?

Other than that your poem made me look at my own hands in a diffrent light. They are one powerful tool. Your words captured so many trates.
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Review of Promises  
Review by cmboutelle
Rated: E | (4.0)
Nice subject for the poem. The rhythm is a little uneven as you tried to get the poem to rhyme. The first line is very nice, good opening. Keep up the writing!
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Review of Why  
Review by cmboutelle
Rated: E | (4.0)
Short poem that asks big questions. Easy read, and sometimes I ask myself those very same questions. Liked it.
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Review of LightWorker  
Review by cmboutelle
Rated: ASR | N/A (Unratable.)
Your opening stanza is strong, rhythm gets a little lost in some places. Liked your topic once again, very up beat message.
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Review by cmboutelle
Rated: ASR | N/A (Unratable.)
One critique: The rhytm is off in some places, it flows great in your second stanza you can feel the dancers twirling about, but, in some of the poem the rhythm gets lots as you seek your rhyme. Still loved the movement of this poem. I could feel a beat.
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Review of Sweatervest  
Review by cmboutelle
Rated: E | (4.0)
Gave me a chuckle for a Friday afternoon.
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Review of I Dream  
Review by cmboutelle
Rated: E | (4.5)
Loved the words of this poem, loved your thoughts and dreams. Very well done. Enjoyed it.
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Review of The Yawn  
Review by cmboutelle
Rated: E | (4.5)
Very cute, realy enjoyed could feel the enjoyment of the moment in your words. Nice job.
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Review of Love  
Review by cmboutelle
Rated: E | (4.5)
Very sweet poem, makes me apprciate what I have also
in my life.
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Review of The Geisha  
Review by cmboutelle
Rated: E | (4.5)
Very nicely done. A very visual poem, like the tone
of your words.
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Review of Antidote  
Review by cmboutelle
Rated: E | (4.0)
Very uplifting message. Nice rhythm.
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Review of Oh Squirmy Worm  
Review by cmboutelle
Rated: E | (4.0)
In Stanza 2 Line 5 "eyes" and Line 7 "I".
I liked your first stanza a little bit more than the second.

I do like your poem and the subject matter is really cute,and I love the title.
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Review of A Beautiful Dream  
Review by cmboutelle
Rated: E | (4.0)
Sweet love poem. Liked your second stanza.
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Review of So Near  
Review by cmboutelle
Rated: E | (4.0)
Some of the lines seemed a little forced in order to make each line rhyme and some of the stanzas don't flow as evenly as others, that being said, the writer still makes the reader feel the pain with the words that were chosen.
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