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There is so much to look forward to once we go home to our Father that it makes all of the struggles we have here on earth worth it in the end. Your poem mainly focuses on the negative aspects of our lives but it gives hope in the end. I didn't find any issues with the form of this piece and there were no errors found.
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Limes (ASR) Prompt: a horse, an earring, and an ice cream cone #1554368 by romance_junkie
In this short but sweet story, Dan finds love with the help of a lime. Sounds strange but the two characters in this short share true chemistry.
You did an excellent job with the prompt you were give. The story is well written and holds the readers attention. It is also error free. Great write my friend!
The vibrant colors of Spring come alive in this fabulous poem. It is truly breath-taking. The rhyme scheme working in this piece is terrific and the meter is seamless. All of the technical aspects have been executed with perfection. Great write my friend.
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Oh how I would have loved to be a fly on the wall. I just about choked after reading this because I was laughing so hard. I bet you could have heard a pin drop after your announcement.
This is a delightfully wicked story my friend. It has all of the necessary elements to be considered a short story and it is funny as all get out! Awesome write Audra!!!
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Audra, I absolutely adore your sense of humor! This story was comical. I think what I enjoyed the most was the part about the grimy teeth and hands. So you've met my son?! True to form Audra, you have yet created another work of art. Bravo!
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You have a really good start here with some fantastic imagery. However, the form for this poem is very rough and it needs a bit of editing. First, you should make use of proper capitalization. Punctuation is another must. Not using either of these makes the poem look sloppy.
These of course are only my opinions and you are free to discard them as your see fit.
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First, I would like to commend you on writing this for everyone to read. Reviewing and receiving reviews is one of the things I enjoy most next to writing. I agree with your comments about the content of the review being more important than the actual rating. However, when you said that if the review is glowing yet the rating is low, the reviewer should explain his/her reason for the rating.
This is an exceptional write Adriana. You pay great attention to detail in this article and your talent for writing shines. Job well done!
There is a youthful exhuberance that emanates from this poem. It is upbeat, fun filled and brought a smile to my face. I do think it needs some punctuation though. Other than that, I didn't come across any errors. Nice write my friend. I wish you all the best in the contest.
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I had a nice little chuckle with this story. I have never had a problem growing my own nails but I have a few friends that were nail biters and when they were finally able to get even the slightest bit of nail they were ecstatic.
This poem read like more of a short story for me. In each line where you wrote:It start from my fingers, 'start' should be 'starts'. Other than that, I didn't find any errors.
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You have such an admirable talent for writing my friend. All of your poems are such a joy to read and this one is no different. It's not hard to see that you care deeply for the woman you write about here. The rhyme scheme, meter and overall flow of this piece is flawless and there were no errors found. Great write!
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This acrostic brought tears to my eyes as I read about the young lady who has been missing for so long. I can't imagine what this must be like for her family. You have written a lovely poem for those who miss her. I didn't find any errors during this review.
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You have done a great job in showing your readers what it is like for a pilot. Their ability to maneuver these airborn giants is mind boggling. The last stanza in this poem really makes a person think about where their life is going.
I didn't see any issues with the form of this poem and no errors were found. Great write.
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I think you did a great job writing this poem from a picture prompt. You give the reader a bit of history as to why this girl left as well as documenting her journey so far away from home. The form you chose for this piece seems complicated but you have done an excellent job with it. Another great write!
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Finding your divine soulmate is a life changing moment. We all have one out there and if we hold fast to the idea that one day we will find them, love will remain constant in our hearts.
Your poem illustrates that no matter what, we need to believe. The syllable count and rhyme scheme in this poem are seamless and tehre were no errors found. Great write!
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You have painted a lovely picture of winter in this great poem. I had no trouble seeing the images you describe. Each line reads as smooth as silk and the overall rhyme scheme is flawless.
During this review there were no spelling or grammatical errors found.
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This poem spoke to me. I feel that is has a hidden message that will be different for everyone who reads it. It is truly fascinating.
All of the technical aspect of this poem were flawless and there were no errors found. Exceptional write Leonard!
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The eyes are the window to our soul and that couldn't be more evident in this wonderful poem. You show the reader how you became captivated by her eyes and how quickly you were overcome. I think this poem is beautiful. It is well written and error free. Great write my friend!
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The longing felt by the little boy in this poem passes on to the reader. It made me feel sorry for him. It also raises questions as to why the father treats him this way.
I didn't find any mistakes in this poem, however, I do feel it needs punctuation. I think if you brought it together into a few stanzas, it would read better too. Of course this is just my opinion.
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I can see why once would never be enough in this sweet, romantic poem. The beauty and sensual nature of this piece really stand out. It is well written, has great flow with a nice smooth rythm and there were no errors found. Wonderful write my friend. Good luck in the contest.
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Quite an interesting write my friend. There isn't much about this piece that anyone could question because most of what you have here is true. I am sure there are some who may think it controversial though.
Overall, this poem has good flow and there were no errors found. Good luck in the contest.
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I marvel at your ability to write such mazing poetry that evoke such strong emotions in your readers. The images you chose to accompany your words are also perfect. This poem is no exception. It left me feeling bereft as the subject in the poem. Excellent write Ken.
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A fairy tale romance is what comes to mind as I read this poem. The imagery you have created here is lovely.
It has a nice even flow, a great rhyme scheme and there were no errors found, however, I feel that punctuation is needed to finish off this piece. Good luck in the contest.
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I was thinking for a moment, lucky you all snuggled up in your bed with a good woman but it's a cat! Well, I suppose that is just as good. The simplicity of this piece makes it a nice read. No complicated structure or rhyme scheme. It doesn't even need punctuation. Nice write Dawn!
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Although I don't fully understand science rhetoric, I can honestly say I enjoyed this poem. Trying to prove that time does not exist seems like a waste of time to me since well all know it clearly does.
This poem has a nice flow and is well written. I thought I noted a hint of humor too. I would consider adding punctuation. Other than that, this is an error free write.
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True to form Audra, you have yet created another work of art. Bravo!
