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I can see a nasty pattern emerging in this story. How many more women will Bryce and Gina find? I have taken a liking to Bryce. I look forward to getting to know him.
The first chapter of this story is great. It gives the reader a lot of detail as to what is going on. It is perfectly written with no errors.
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Luck (18+) An interesting poker game. #1529467 by Dan
I find it hard to believe that you only recently started writing. Your stories are so fascinating. This one especially. The way in which you used Luck, Lust, Death etc. is quite original. I am quite impressed with your writing.
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Black Ice (18+) Flash Fiction Jan 2009. 1913 words. #1516409 by Dan
What a freaking awesome story!!! The title is brilliant. It is certainly not what one would assume. I loved the way your brought this together. The imagery is fantastic. I would have to say the ending is the best. Fantastic write Dan.
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A WONDERFUL LIFE (E) My companion, my partner, my cherished bride,and my very dearest friend. #1522068 by Oldwarrior
You have such a beautiful way with words. This poem is such a loving tribute to your wife. It shares with the reader your feelings, old memories and a lifetime of love. It is easy for all of us to see that you care very much for this woman. Wonderful write my friend!
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This is a phenominal poem. I have a great respect for our soldiers who fight for our freedom and the freedom of others. Your poem reminds the reader how many times the need to fight was necessary. This piece is superbly written and free from error. Thank you for sharing this poem and your talent with us.
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Isn't technolgy wonderful! You would think in this day and age robots could read our minds and not need specific instructions. Your story shows us that even robots aren't perfect. It's well rounded, funny and error free. Great write!
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If I was looking for a place for my pet to stay while on vacation I would definately take them to the Palace. It sounds like an awesone place for them to have fun and make new friends.
I think you did a great job with this advertisement. It is well written and there are no errors.
You paint a haunting vision of the damned in this dark poem. As dark as it is, I found it fascinating. You write it almost as if it was something that you would see everyday. A state of normalcy so to speak.
You certainly have a talent for this genre of writing. This poem is very dark but also quite intriguing. I didn't have any trouble bringing to mind the things you describe. Awesome write and error free.
This is a deep and powerful poem. The conflict the character experiences in this piece takes the reader through a range of emotion. It is solidly written with great form and meter. There were no errors found. Excellent write Ann!
This is a great poem and I can personally relate to some of the emotions wrapped up in it. I like the form you chose to write this. It has a good flow and I didn't come across any errors. For this being just a thought while you drove you did great!
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The Wager. (E) short flash fiction piece - December 2008. #1508365 by Dan
I love this story!!! It just goes to show you how rewarding a random act of kindness can be. I was really surprised when I found out who the two vagrants were. I would never have guessed this story would turn out as it did.
You have an admirable talent my friend. This is an incredible piece and I didn't find any errors. Write on!
I truly enjoyed your essay on why your write. There are quite a few people I am sure who could relate to this piece. I know there are many times when I wanted to say something and couldn't but write I could.
This is a great poem/essay. It is superbly written and free from error.
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Blessed Be (E) A blend of Yin and Yang, 3rd place Lexi's Poetry Challenge round 36 #1227814 by KimChi
This is a lovely poem that pays hommage to the beauty of nature that surrounds us. Your descriptive wording helps the reader "see" what you write about. I think you did a fantastic job.
Wonder fully written and error free, this poem shines. Write on!
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Namaste (E) It looks like plain Watergate Salad, but underneath lies heavenly Ambrosia. #1202535 by KimChi
I absolutely love the way you brought this poem together. It spoke to me of the power we all hold to change things around us. It says, "I am in charge."
This is a fantastic poem. The form is great, the meter strong and even and there were no errors noticed. Great work my friend.
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~ Solace ~ (18+) A couple learns to cope with the emotional scars after a savage beating leaves her deaf #1497336 by Mara ♣ McBain
I was impressed by the characters strength to trust again after enduring something so tragic. The bond that she and Gibb have is strong and stands out in this story. The fact that she is able to move on with her life gives hope to other women who may have been in a similar situation.
Looking at the overall composition of this story I have to say it is perfect. You have included all of the necessary elements to make it a great read. Well done Mara!
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Early Morning (E) There is something unique about the twilight hours of the early morning. #1464563 by LdyPhoenix
I think your description of early morning in this poem is breath-taking. I felt as if I were looking at it as I read this wonderful poem.
This poem is well written and error free. Awesome write my friend.
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This poem is amazing! As I read it, I had to wonder how many times you have been told that your reader could relate to this piece because it reminded them about how they feel toward their spouse/partner.
You give such wonderful detail to everything you describe in this top notch poem. I can see why it was published. It's one of the best I have ever read.
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This poem is a lovely and heart felt tribute to someone you care for a great deal. The bond the the two of you have is clearly evident in this piece. I enjoyed the way you put this acrostic together sharing pieces of both your lives. It is perfect in all aspects. Thank you for sharing your talent with us Kiya.
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I don't think there are words to describe the feelings that I experienced after reading this poem. I cried and my body trembled. It will be a year for me in May that God came to share my house. Since then, my life has changed in ways I never thought possible.
This is the best poem I have ever read. I can't say enough about it. Thank you SO much for sharing it.
I couldn't think of any better words you could have used to describe these unconscious actions of our mind. I don't mind dreaming but nightmares usually result in a panic attack.
I have never tried this style of poem before but it looks fairly easy. Another flawless write my friend.
You descriptive wording in this poem paints a vivid picture for your readers. The vastness of the seas that surround us is mind boggling. I often wonder what mysteries lie in their depths.
You have a good strong poem here. It is easy to read and has great flow. I enjoyed reading it. Thanks for sharing it with all of us here at WDC.
The Witch in me absolutely loved this poem. I have always been fascinated with magic and voodoo. You have a remarkable writing ability Audra and I am honored to get to review your work.
This poem is superb. I didn't find anything at all wrong with it. I wish you all the best in the contest.
Despite the fact that this poem is dark and disturbing I found it quite fascinating. I think we all have a bit of "dark' that dwells within our soul waiting to be unleashed. I know I do.
You did a marvelous job with this poem. It is well written and error free. I wish you all the best in the contest.
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Hollowness (E) This is a poem about what I feel about the world we live in. #1523009 by LRbluemoon
There are many hard truths to face in this bold poem. I don't think there are many of us who could deny much of what you write about. I think this poem is a wake up call.
Overall, the form of this poem is fairly standard. There are no errors and it has good flow. Thanks for sharing your opinions with us.
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