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There were a few unexpected turn of events in this chapter. Ean is still a bit of a mystery. The fact that I know this is a story that contains D/s, I have a hard time seeing him in the role of a loving, compassionate man. I think I have stereo-typed him with some of the hard a** characters you see in movies. Time will tell.
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Okay, I am hooked! You have developed this story much slower than I anticipated. I figured that there would have been more 'action' in this chapter. I am acutally quite pleased that there wasn't. I like the fact that I am getting to know the characters more before things start to heat up. I am curious to see where Abby fits into the mix.
The technical aspect of this chapter are flawless. I look forward to the next chapter.
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It is clear from the superb composition of this story that writing is your passion. You have the ability to draw your readers in right from the beginning and keep them interested until the end. Your attention to detail is amazing. I didn't spot one error in this entire story.
I think this is going to be an interesting read. The imagery you created throughout this piece is great. I can only imagine what the next chapters will bring. I have a feeling that I may need to hold onto my hat for this ride...
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I personally appreciate the time you took to create this article. You have included points of interest for members of all case colors and provided them with tools for giving a great review.
Your article is professionally written and showcases the skills you possess as a writer. Thank you for taking the time to add this to your repertoire.
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I have to tell you that I haven't seen many of these poems before. Also, knowing you have a college education makes me feel like I am unqualified to review your work, however, I am going to do so anyway.
I found this piece to be extremely well written. The overall flow is seamless. The image you created through your words was vividly wicked in nature. The words draw you in and wrap you up like its prey. The grammar and punctuation are perfect and there were no spelling errors found.
You have an admirable gift my friend. Thank you for sharing your work.
Hello NickiD89 and congratulations on your recent nomination to "Ink Blot Hall of Fame" by showing Community Spirit.
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I truly enjoyed this dedicated tribute to Writing.com's eighth birthday. I marvel at the structure of the Pantoum because it looks so difficult to write but you seem to have pulled it off. This is a truly great piece Nicki.
The flow and rhyme scheme are flawless and add sparkle and finesse to this piece. I didn't find any errors in my review of this work of art. Great write my friend!
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My World (E) Come check out my first WDC web page! #1502357 by NickiD89
WOW!!! This is an absolutely beautiful website!!! and your pic...my god woman you are gorgeous! Your handle certainly does not suit you.
I am completely in love with the design of this page. It is tasteful, elegant and highlights your work splendidly. The images you have created are stunning. You have taken the time to share your spotlight with some of the wonderful groups here on WDC. That in itself shows how beautiful you are inside and out!
This webpage has the look of something designed by industry professionals. You have done a spectacular job with it Nicki!
Hello aralls Congratulations on your recent nomination to "Ink Blot Hall of Fame" and your win in Reviewing Wars!.
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I wonder what it would have been like for Danielle at that moment when she looked at the snow angels. I know for me, just reading this story, I was left stunned.
This is an amazing story! It shows us that even when we are in doubt, there is always a reason to believe. You are a wonderful writer Audra and I am never disappointed when I enter your port.
There were no errors found anywhere in this piece.
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The anticipation felt by the character in this poem found its way to me as I read this beautiful piece. The imagery you have created here is wonderful. I could see the beauty of Spring through your words.
I have to admit that a part of me felt sad when I read this because of the character's age and their question about whether or not they would be here to see Spring.
You have a lovely poem my friend and there are no errors.
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It saddens me to think about how many young boys live what this poem speaks about. My heart goes out to them. I feel your poem sends a message to its readers that children are a gift from God and we should cherish them.
The technicalities of this poem are flawless and no spelling errors were found. Thank you for sharing this piece with us.
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This poem is awesome! It has such a tremendous rhyme scheme and meter that I was actually bopping to a beat while reading it. It is fun, whimsical amd very well written. There were no errors found in ths poem. Well done my friend!
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It's a shame these two men met each other for because of a medical condition but can you image the feelings that John would have in the future after having met someone who became the President. It would be a interesting story to tell that's for sure!
I think you did a great job with this story and I can see why you won. It is perfect in every way! Awesome write my friend!
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You and I share the same memory when it comes to summer Saturdays. I live in Nova Scotia, Canada and we have the Atlantic ocean as our back door. I spent countless days frolicking about in its vastness. I wasn't as adventurous as you were going past the drop off.
Your story gave me a moment to recall the days of my childhood and the great times I had. It is filled with vivid imagery and it's well written. There were no errors found.
Thanks for sharing a special part of your past with us.
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You and I share the same memory when it comes to summer Saturdays. I live in Nova Scotia, Canada and we have the Atlantic ocean as our back door. I spent countless days frolicking about in its vastness. I wasn't as adventurous as you were going past the drop off.
Your story gave me a moment to recall the days of my childhood and the great times I had. It is filled with vivid imagery and it's well written. There were no errors found.
Thanks for sharing a special part of your past with us.
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I am not sure how, with all my travels around WDC, that I haven't reviewed this piece before. This mini bio is as honest as it gets. You have bared your heart and soul here. You have given us a part of yourself by writing this piece. Thank you for sharing all of what and who you are with us Sherri.
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I knew the moment I saw this beautiful webpage that is was made by DragonBlue. You are so lucky to have been gifted this from her. She is an amazing artist. The poem she wrote to help you get better is very touching.
You have a light that shines so bright Sherri. I don't think there is anyone here you doesn't know you, or has heard your name. Thank you for letting us all share in your adoration.
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It worries me to think about how many of our traditions will be lost, like the one in this story, as technology and our world advances. I enjoyed this story and the effort Hannah's dad took to make Easter the holiday we know and love. Things just wouldn't be the same without the Easter bunny!
I think you have written this story superbly. There were no errors found.
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ONLY IF (E) A car salesman's first customer #448494 by Joy
I don't think I would have lasted more than 5 minutes with this customer. He would have driven me to distraction. I must say Howard B. Humble handled him quite well though.
This is a hilarious story. You have given your readers something to sink their teeth into. It is action packed and full of humor. It is well written and free from errors. I really enjoyed this one!
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I love the beauty and inspirational message in this poem. The true gifts that we find by believing in our Lord are so rewarding. Your poem highlights all of the blessings we receive by simply accepting God into our lives and believing in his power. Great write Sherri.
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Well I certainly didn't expect that for an ending! What an awesome story ! My thoughts on the guy in this piece were quite the same as Rhonda's; crazy but most likely harmless. Boy was I wrong .
Right from the beginning, I knew that this was one of those stories that reels you in and keeps you glued to your seat. It has all of the necessary elements to make it a true thriller; mystery, suspense and a dramatic ending. Everything about this story is fabulous. Except maybe for the waiter... I would recommend this story to anyone who is looking for a real shocker.
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I am so glad I decided to review this item. It is very informative and educational. There is so much here that I didn't know it's hard not to be drawn in. You have done your homework.
This story is superbly written and there were no errors found.
I can honestly say that I never knew how Thanksgiving came into being. Now thanks to you and this great story I know!
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This is a great poem and a real eye opener. I have heard it say that nothing is ever free. Your poem certainly makes that statement true.
This piece shows the sacrifices others had to make for our freedom. It starts out with a great rhyme sheme but it seems to get lost after the first few lines. There were also a few places where the overall flow was compromised. There were no spelling errors found however. Nice work my friend.
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My World (E) This is what I experience each day, a little different from everyone else. #1495934 by Jewel Busy Busy Busy!
I can't say for one minute that I now what it is like to live like you do. I have closed my eyes and tried to move around in my own home and it isn't easy. I have great admiration for visually impaired people.
Your poem gives us a look at what daily life is like for you. It's very descriptive and has good imagery. Your poem has good form and a nice even flow. There were no errors found.
I can't imagine what finding this out would have been like for you. Personally, I most likely would have chosen to do something drastic. I have read that "positive thinking" can go a long way in healing someone so can the power of prayer.
I am so pleased that you decided to share your story with us. I think there is a lesson here to be learned and if we all look at the 5 things you have done, our lives may start to change for the positive.
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! My thoughts on the guy in this piece were quite the same as Rhonda's; crazy but most likely harmless. Boy was I wrong 
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