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Review of Free  
Review by dblameck (David)
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Rated: E | (4.5)


Review of Free

First and foremost, thank you for sharing your work . I am not an expert reviewer. I am just another writer, but I know it is the reviews that help us to perfect our craft. My opinions are just that; my opinions.

OVERALL IMPRESSIONS:

A four verse free form poem expressing the desire to live and love on this earth.

SUGGESTIONS/EDITS:

Write more and share your poems.

FINAL THOUGHTS:

Well done.


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Review of Love Is...  
Review by dblameck (David)
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Rated: E | (4.5)


Review of Love is...

First and foremost, thank you for sharing your work . I am not an expert reviewer. I am just another writer, but I know it is the reviews that help us to perfect our craft. My opinions are just that; my opinions.

OVERALL IMPRESSIONS:

The old saying is you will know it when you find it. This poem is perfect in the way it sets this to become a reality for the writer.

PLOT & CHARACTERS:

Free form question is then answered with a great expression of the countenance of the writer.

SUGGESTIONS/EDITS:

Good the way it is written.

FINAL THOUGHTS:

Well done.


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Review by dblameck (David)
In affiliation with The Talent Pond  
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)


Review of Amy and Enya, A sisterhood of pain

First and foremost, thank you for sharing your work . I am not an expert reviewer. I am just another writer, but I know it is the reviews that help us to perfect our craft. My opinions are just that; my opinions.

OVERALL IMPRESSIONS:

the story of the interaction of two woman. One of high society and the other a bag lady. what do they have in common. Both are abused women.

PLOT & CHARACTERS:

The two meet in an alley outside the museum. Enya tries to help Amy. Joe, Amy's husband finally gets so possessive He hits Amy and someone kills Joe. The story gets a little confusing at this point.

SUGGESTIONS/EDITS:

Edit the story to try to make it a little clearer.

FINAL THOUGHTS:

Good story line.


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Review by dblameck (David)
In affiliation with The Talent Pond  
Rated: E | (3.5)


Review of My (little) Red Riding Hood

First and foremost, thank you for sharing your work . I am not an expert reviewer. I am just another writer, but I know it is the reviews that help us to perfect our craft. My opinions are just that; my opinions.

OVERALL IMPRESSIONS:

Well it is not quite the way I remember the story. A toned down adaption of the story as to not frighten children.

PLOT & CHARACTERS:

I don't think it has the appeal of the original. But I can understand not wanting to frighten children.

SUGGESTIONS/EDITS:

No new ideas there is enough new thoughts already presented here.

FINAL THOUGHTS:

keep writing.


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Review of The Rose  
Review by dblameck (David)
In affiliation with The Talent Pond  
Rated: E | (4.0)


Review of The Rose

First and foremost, thank you for sharing your work . I am not an expert reviewer. I am just another writer, but I know it is the reviews that help us to perfect our craft. My opinions are just that; my opinions.

OVERALL IMPRESSIONS:

A woman compares herself to a beautiful rose.

PLOT & CHARACTERS:

she thinks of herself as unique. She thinks that the choices she has made have been the best.

SUGGESTIONS/EDITS:

The font is too small.


FINAL THOUGHTS:

Keep sharing your work.


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Review by dblameck (David)
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Rated: E | (4.0)
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Review of Light House Butterflies

First and foremost, thank you for sharing your work . I am not an expert reviewer. I am just another writer, but I know it is the reviews that help us to perfect our craft. My opinions are just that; my opinions.

OVERALL IMPRESSIONS:

Enjoying the seashore while at a lighthouse. Enjoying all the different aspects, day, night, sunny and stormy.

PLOT & CHARACTERS:

Looking to see and feel all the aspects of the seashore. A good poem with many great visuals.

SUGGESTIONS/EDITS:

None.

FINAL THOUGHTS:

Wishing you a great WDC anniversary.


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Review of Valentine's Day  
Review by dblameck (David)
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Rated: E | (3.5)
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Review of Valentine;s Day

First and foremost, thank you for sharing your work . I am not an expert reviewer. I am just another writer, but I know it is the reviews that help us to perfect our craft. My opinions are just that; my opinions.

OVERALL IMPRESSIONS:

The general feeling is that Valentine's Day is a business holiday it that it is only out there for commercial purposes.

PLOT & CHARACTERS:

In the second half the writer states that the holiday is okay for those attached but not meaning everyone has to look for a partner.

SUGGESTIONS/EDITS:

The pink text was difficult to read. The font is a little small too.

FINAL THOUGHTS:

I agree Valentine's Day is for real lovers not want to be lovers


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Review of Silent Hero  
Review by dblameck (David)
In affiliation with The Talent Pond  
Rated: E | (4.0)


Review of Silent Hero

First and foremost, thank you for sharing your work . I am not an expert reviewer. I am just another writer, but I know it is the reviews that help us to perfect our craft. My opinions are just that; my opinions.

OVERALL IMPRESSIONS:

A tribute in the form of a poem. The tribute is for a caregiver who has made this author's life better.

PLOT & CHARACTERS:

With a a rhyming scheme of A B C B the poem shares the depth of feeling for the caregiver.

SUGGESTIONS/EDITS:

None.

FINAL THOUGHTS:

Thank you for writing this poem.


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Review of Golfetery  
Review by dblameck (David)
In affiliation with The Talent Pond  
Rated: 13+ | (4.0)


Review of Golfetery

First and foremost, thank you for sharing your work . I am not an expert reviewer. I am just another writer, but I know it is the reviews that help us to perfect our craft. My opinions are just that; my opinions.

OVERALL IMPRESSIONS:

The idea is not as absurd as it first sounds. Better use of green space is necessary. There are many problems that would have to be worked out.

PLOT & CHARACTERS:

Combining cemetery and gold course seems to need some working. We have combined golf courses with residential complexes so this would be the next step.

SUGGESTIONS/EDITS:

We have to think of environmental concerns.

FINAL THOUGHTS:

Still not sure some people would like the idea.


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Review of Still  
Review by dblameck (David)
In affiliation with The Talent Pond  
Rated: E | (4.0)


Review of Still

First and foremost, thank you for sharing your work . I am not an expert reviewer. I am just another writer, but I know it is the reviews that help us to perfect our craft. My opinions are just that; my opinions.

OVERALL IMPRESSIONS:

Writing a poem about the period of time when people are struggling to awaken. Not really asleep but not yet quite awake.

PLOT & CHARACTERS:

Not able to function as awake and still enjoying the blissfulness of sleep.

SUGGESTIONS/EDITS:

Expand on this idea.

FINAL THOUGHTS:

It is a beginning.


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Review of Sussex  
Review by dblameck (David)
In affiliation with The Talent Pond  
Rated: E | (3.0)


Review of Sussex

First and foremost, thank you for sharing your work . I am not an expert reviewer. I am just another writer, but I know it is the reviews that help us to perfect our craft. My opinions are just that; my opinions.

OVERALL IMPRESSIONS:

Home is always special and the writer thinks just that of Sussex which is in southern England

PLOT & CHARACTERS:

Short remembrances which I failed to understand.

SUGGESTIONS/EDITS:

None

FINAL THOUGHTS:

Write more please.


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Review of D-Day Landing  
Review by dblameck (David)
In affiliation with The Talent Pond  
Rated: E | (4.5)


Review of D-Day Landing

First and foremost, thank you for sharing your work . I am not an expert reviewer. I am just another writer, but I know it is the reviews that help us to perfect our craft. My opinions are just that; my opinions.

OVERALL IMPRESSIONS:

A short direct poem which basically details the action to successfully take the objective which is the German emplacements overlooking the beach.

PLOT & CHARACTERS:

it uses rhyming couplets to deal with an ordered description of the action.

SUGGESTIONS/EDITS:

Well written and easy to read.

FINAL THOUGHTS:

Thank you for sharing.


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Review by dblameck (David)
In affiliation with The Talent Pond  
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)


Review of The Normandy American Cemetery and Memorial

First and foremost, thank you for sharing your work . I am not an expert reviewer. I am just another writer, but I know it is the reviews that help us to perfect our craft. My opinions are just that; my opinions.

OVERALL IMPRESSIONS:

This is a moving description of a visit to the American Cemetery near Omaha beach. The cost in lives for this invasion were immense.

PLOT & CHARACTERS:

A veteran of D-Day tours the cemetery noting the names of people he knew and fought beside.

SUGGESTIONS/EDITS:

Review the spacing.

FINAL THOUGHTS:

Thank you for sharing this story.


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Review of The Water Ran Red  
Review by dblameck (David)
In affiliation with The Talent Pond  
Rated: 18+ | (4.0)


Review of The Water Ran Red

First and foremost, thank you for sharing your work . I am not an expert reviewer. I am just another writer, but I know it is the reviews that help us to perfect our craft. My opinions are just that; my opinions.

OVERALL IMPRESSIONS:

A poetic tribute to those who stormed the beaches in the Normandy invasion of France on June 5, 1944. That was 72 years ago.

PLOT & CHARACTERS:

Good thoughts of the valour expressed on that day and the days after.


FINAL THOUGHTS:

We need to always remember.


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Review of The AllGear  
Review by dblameck (David)
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Rated: E | (3.0)
Well this one is surely short.


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Review by dblameck (David)
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Rated: E | (3.0)


Review of Electronic Devices I've Owned

First and foremost, thank you for sharing your work . I am not an expert reviewer. I am just another writer, but I know it is the reviews that help us to perfect our craft. My opinions are just that; my opinions.

OVERALL IMPRESSIONS:

This is merely a list of electronic devices.

PLOT & CHARACTERS:

Maybe a little detail on each one would be benefcial.

SUGGESTIONS/EDITS:

6. It should be answering machine.

12. Probably should be modem. Wifi is not a device.

FINAL THOUGHTS:

Thank you for sharing.


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Review of The Letter  
Review by dblameck (David)
In affiliation with The Talent Pond  
Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
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Review of The Letter

First and foremost, thank you for sharing your work . I am not an expert reviewer. I am just another writer, but I know it is the reviews that help us to perfect our craft. My opinions are just that; my opinions.

OVERALL IMPRESSIONS:

A very factual letter home from a soldier serving away.

PLOT & CHARACTERS:

The story shares memories of boyhood and playing soldier and then moving to realism of digging a portion of a body from the rubble. It finishes with references to home and the meals he had then.

SUGGESTIONS/EDITS:

Write more and share your work.

FINAL THOUGHTS:

This review was done to wish you a great WDC anniversary.


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Review by dblameck (David)
In affiliation with The Talent Pond  
Rated: E | (4.5)


Review of What is the definition of Love

First and foremost, thank you for sharing your work . I am not an expert reviewer. I am just another writer, but I know it is the reviews that help us to perfect our craft. My opinions are just that; my opinions.

OVERALL IMPRESSIONS:

I guess that is a fair definition of love. I like your definition.

SUGGESTIONS/EDITS:

Write more. This is good work.

FINAL THOUGHTS:

Keeep up the good work and writing.


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Review of Upon The Ledge  
Review by dblameck (David)
In affiliation with The Talent Pond  
Rated: E | (4.5)


Review of Upon the Ledge

First and foremost, thank you for sharing your work . I am not an expert reviewer. I am just another writer, but I know it is the reviews that help us to perfect our craft. My opinions are just that; my opinions.

OVERALL IMPRESSIONS:

Two lifelong friends are looking back at all the things that they did and experienced.

PLOT & CHARACTERS:

It seems the characters had made a pact that their fate would be similiar. Now they are on the ledge together and they must fulfill their destinty.

SUGGESTIONS/EDITS:

Keep writing.

FINAL THOUGHTS:

As usual I enjoy your work.


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Review by dblameck (David)
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Rated: 18+ | (4.5)


Review of another Day, Another DollarXX

First and foremost, thank you for sharing your work . I am not an expert reviewer. I am just another writer, but I know it is the reviews that help us to perfect our craft. My opinions are just that; my opinions.

OVERALL IMPRESSIONS:

The coroner is doing her job when she is overwelhmed by a shooting at a bowling alley.

PLOT & CHARACTERS:

The coroner is doing her job and sends a text to her family to tell them she will be late. Later she finds that her family was at the bowling alley and they are victims. The story is well told and emotionally moving.

SUGGESTIONS/EDITS:

None

FINAL THOUGHTS:

Well done.


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Review of Scales  
Review by dblameck (David)
In affiliation with The Talent Pond  
Rated: 13+ | (4.0)


Review of Scales

First and foremost, thank you for sharing your work . I am not an expert reviewer. I am just another writer, but I know it is the reviews that help us to perfect our craft. My opinions are just that; my opinions.

OVERALL IMPRESSIONS:

Well it seems this story is a sort of scaley zombie story. All the residents of this small town are changing into something else.

PLOT & CHARACTERS:

A small town where people are changing to blue scales. There does not seem to be any reason for this happening. The town seems to be quarantined. The residents are coming for the one telling the story.

SUGGESTIONS/EDITS:

No suggestions.

FINAL THOUGHTS:

keep writing.


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Review of Girl troubles  
Review by dblameck (David)
In affiliation with The Talent Pond  
Rated: E | (3.5)


Review of Girl Troubles

First and foremost, thank you for sharing your work . I am not an expert reviewer. I am just another writer, but I know it is the reviews that help us to perfect our craft. My opinions are just that; my opinions.

OVERALL IMPRESSIONS:

A story about two young men talking about the girl friend of the other. The entire story is done in dialogue.

PLOT & CHARACTERS:

The plot is a little thin and the story does not proceed far enough to rectify this. No real character development.

SUGGESTIONS/EDITS:

Provide more information on characters and plot.

FINAL THOUGHTS:

Keep writing.


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Review by dblameck (David)
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Rated: 13+ | (4.0)


Review of All About Footprints

First and foremost, thank you for sharing your work . I am not an expert reviewer. I am just another writer, but I know it is the reviews that help us to perfect our craft. My opinions are just that; my opinions.

OVERALL IMPRESSIONS:

A story about a family who seem to having their cats being captured by a neighbour who is accusing the cats of walking on her BMW. The cats are being caged and taken to the animal shelter.

PLOT & CHARACTERS:

It is an interesting story but the characters could have been better developed.

SUGGESTIONS/EDITS:

I noticed the requirement was to get a sentence in the story. "I may go to jail, but it's worth it."

FINAL THOUGHTS:

Keep up the good work.


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Review of Why Me?  
Review by dblameck (David)
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Rated: E | (4.0)


Review of Why Me?

First and foremost, thank you for sharing your work . I am not an expert reviewer. I am just another writer, but I know it is the reviews that help us to perfect our craft. My opinions are just that; my opinions.

OVERALL IMPRESSIONS:

A pastor and hospital chaplain tells the story of his early days in a clinical pastoral education program. The story centres on a comment. Why not.

PLOT & CHARACTERS:

The pastor shares his experiences and the successes he sees.

FINAL THOUGHTS:

God works in us and through us even when we don't know which way to turn.


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Review by dblameck (David)
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Rated: E | (4.0)


Review of Keki ya siku ya kuzaliwa

First and foremost, thank you for sharing your work . I am not an expert reviewer. I am just another writer, but I know it is the reviews that help us to perfect our craft. My opinions are just that; my opinions.

OVERALL IMPRESSIONS:

I found this to be a very interesting story as a white female doctor (assumed by clinic rounds) tries to bake and produce a birthday cake for an elderly woman in Uganda.

PLOT & CHARACTERS:

The doctor, unnamed bakes a cake for Mama Ngoto and deals with the difficult to producing and carrying it.

SUGGESTIONS/EDITS:

A good story that shows one trying to adapt in another culture.

FINAL THOUGHTS:

Enjoyable.


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