*Magnify*
SPONSORED LINKS
BY ONLINE AUTHORS
Printed from https://www.writing.com/main/profile/reviews/dblameck/sort_by/r.review_creation_time DESC/page/16
Review Requests: OFF
3,599 Public Reviews Given
5,181 Total Reviews Given
Public Reviews
Previous ... 12 13 14 15 -16- 17 18 19 20 21 ... Next
376
376
Review by dblameck (David)
In affiliation with The Talent Pond  
Rated: E | (4.5)


Review of The Writer and the Taxman

First and foremost, thank you for sharing your work . I am not an expert reviewer. I am just another writer, but I know it is the reviews that help us to perfect our craft. My opinions are just that; my opinions.

OVERALL IMPRESSIONS:

I found the information that was shared in this article very beneficial. Since I am Canadian I wonder how any deductions would apply to me. I know the CRA (Canadian version of IRS) tends to like to deduct expenses against income as a rule.

FINAL THOUGHTS:

Thank you for sharing this information.


** Images For Use By Upgraded+ Only **


*Gold* My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .
377
377
Review by dblameck (David)
In affiliation with The Talent Pond  
Rated: E | (4.5)


Review of Four Parts to Every Story

First and foremost, thank you for sharing your work . I am not an expert reviewer. I am just another writer, but I know it is the reviews that help us to perfect our craft. My opinions are just that; my opinions.

OVERALL IMPRESSIONS:

Thank you for your overview of important elements that must make up each viable story. I saved this and will probably share it with others as well.

PLOT & CHARACTERS:

thank you for reminding us of the value of these aspects.

FINAL THOUGHTS:

important information.


** Images For Use By Upgraded+ Only **


*Gold* My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .
378
378
Review of What If?  
Review by dblameck (David)
In affiliation with The Talent Pond  
Rated: E | (4.0)
*CakeB* HAPPY WDC ACCOUNT ANNIVERSARY FROM "Anniversary Reviews" *CakeP*




Review of What If?

First and foremost, thank you for sharing your work . I am not an expert reviewer. I am just another writer, but I know it is the reviews that help us to perfect our craft. My opinions are just that; my opinions.

OVERALL IMPRESSIONS:

A good essay about a person just sitting without any plans and just noteing life around him. He then sees potential and see thru eyes seeing colour and feeling the world around him.

PLOT & CHARACTERS:

Some great descriptions.

SUGGESTIONS/EDITS:

None.

FINAL THOUGHTS:

I wrote this review particularly to wish you a great WDC anniversary.


** Images For Use By Upgraded+ Only **



*Gold* My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .
379
379
Review of Never Tell A Lie  
Review by dblameck (David)
In affiliation with The Talent Pond  
Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
*CakeB* HAPPY WDC ACCOUNT ANNIVERSARY FROM "Anniversary Reviews" *CakeP*




Review of Never Tell A Lie

First and foremost, thank you for sharing your work . I am not an expert reviewer. I am just another writer, but I know it is the reviews that help us to perfect our craft. My opinions are just that; my opinions.

OVERALL IMPRESSIONS:

It is no good to talk the talk if you don't walk the walk. The poem is about a mother who gives her child good advice but does not follow that advice herself.

PLOT & CHARACTERS:

Mother directs the child in to the ethics of life. However she does not follow her own direction and that causes her child to get in trouble.

SUGGESTIONS/EDITS:

None.

FINAL THOUGHTS:

I wrote this review to wish you a great WDC anniversary.


** Images For Use By Upgraded+ Only **



*Gold* My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .
380
380
Review of Night Watch  
Review by dblameck (David)
In affiliation with The Talent Pond  
Rated: E | (4.0)
*CakeB* HAPPY WDC ACCOUNT ANNIVERSARY FROM "Anniversary Reviews" *CakeP*




Review of Night Watch

First and foremost, thank you for sharing your work . I am not an expert reviewer. I am just another writer, but I know it is the reviews that help us to perfect our craft. My opinions are just that; my opinions.

OVERALL IMPRESSIONS:

In the middle of the night in the loneliness a man's thoughts turn to the one he cares for.

PLOT & CHARACTERS:

A man is needing something. The night is cold and he is missing this relationship. He spends time thinking and waiting.

SUGGESTIONS/EDITS:

None.

FINAL THOUGHTS:

This review was written to wish you a great WDC anniversary.


** Images For Use By Upgraded+ Only **



*Gold* My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .
381
381
Review of Next Day  
Review by dblameck (David)
In affiliation with The Talent Pond  
Rated: E | (3.5)
*CakeB* HAPPY WDC ACCOUNT ANNIVERSARY FROM "Anniversary Reviews" *CakeP*




Review of Next Day

First and foremost, thank you for sharing your work . I am not an expert reviewer. I am just another writer, but I know it is the reviews that help us to perfect our craft. My opinions are just that; my opinions.

OVERALL IMPRESSIONS:

Worried about her responsibilites a woman has dreams that have a relaxing effect on her. The gentle waves and blowing winds fill her mind.

PLOT & CHARACTERS:

These feeling allow to begin to write again.

SUGGESTIONS/EDITS:

Use a larger font.


FINAL THOUGHTS:

I wrote this review so I could wish you a great WDC anniversary.


** Images For Use By Upgraded+ Only **



*Gold* My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .
382
382
Review of Bad Tires  
Review by dblameck (David)
In affiliation with The Talent Pond  
Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
*CakeB* HAPPY WDC ACCOUNT ANNIVERSARY FROM "Anniversary Reviews" *CakeP*




Review of Bad Tires

First and foremost, thank you for sharing your work . I am not an expert reviewer. I am just another writer, but I know it is the reviews that help us to perfect our craft. My opinions are just that; my opinions.

OVERALL IMPRESSIONS:

The beginning of the story sounds like someone is about to be hung. This is a fact but with a twist.

PLOT & CHARACTERS:

Miranda is the person in control. A tire has failed to maintain pressure so it must be hung.

SUGGESTIONS/EDITS:

I am sure the children with enjoy it as a swing.

FINAL THOUGHTS:

The objective for this review is to wish you a great WDC anniversary.


** Images For Use By Upgraded+ Only **



*Gold* My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .
383
383
Review by dblameck (David)
In affiliation with The Talent Pond  
Rated: E | (4.5)
*CakeB* HAPPY WDC ACCOUNT ANNIVERSARY FROM "Anniversary Reviews" *CakeP*





Review of Late Night Memories

First and foremost, thank you for sharing your work . I am not an expert reviewer. I am just another writer, but I know it is the reviews that help us to perfect our craft. My opinions are just that; my opinions.

OVERALL IMPRESSIONS:

A very emotional story poem. Lovers who tragically fought with their own minds to exist in this world. It is tearful story.

PLOT & CHARACTERS:

youth opens to many things. Some are good and yet some are scary. Dual suicide pacts. One successful the other not but the one remaining scarred in many ways.

SUGGESTIONS/EDITS:

Share more.

FINAL THOUGHTS:

I hope you have a great WDC anniversary.


** Images For Use By Upgraded+ Only **



*Gold* My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .
384
384
Review by dblameck (David)
In affiliation with The Talent Pond  
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)


Review of The Writing Contest

First and foremost, thank you for sharing your work . I am not an expert reviewer. I am just another writer, but I know it is the reviews that help us to perfect our craft. My opinions are just that; my opinions.

OVERALL IMPRESSIONS:

So do you have these feeling of inadequacy every day of only when you log in to Writing.com? Sounds like you are the perfect fit for our group. Believe it or not you don't have to know what happens to Donna. Just start putting down words and they will open your mind. It might not be great writing the first attempt. But as you try and post your work, other will review and open more ideas to your mind. I enjoyed your little essay so I have started a story and Donna who is going to save the world by pushing that green button with her bleeding hand.

PLOT & CHARACTERS:

There is Donna and them damn green button again.

FINAL THOUGHTS:

Thank you for the ten steps.


** Images For Use By Upgraded+ Only **


*Gold* My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .
385
385
Review by dblameck (David)
In affiliation with The Talent Pond  
Rated: E | (4.0)
*CakeB* HAPPY WDC ACCOUNT ANNIVERSARY FROM "Anniversary Reviews" *CakeP*



Review of Raindrops on the Glass

First and foremost, thank you for sharing your work . I am not an expert reviewer. I am just another writer, but I know it is the reviews that help us to perfect our craft. My opinions are just that; my opinions.

OVERALL IMPRESSIONS:

Rain against a window pane creates many feeling the produces an abundance of images. water droplets splattering against glass provide the writer with so many plots and visions.

PLOT & CHARACTERS:

It can be horror. It can be romantic. It can tell of loss or even love found. The write of this piece offers only a few but tantalizes the mind even still.

SUGGESTIONS/EDITS:

More. With maybe a larger font.

FINAL THOUGHTS:

The purpose for this review is to wish you a great WDC anniversary.


** Images For Use By Upgraded+ Only **



*Gold* My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .
386
386
Review of Innocent Mistake  
Review by dblameck (David)
In affiliation with The Talent Pond  
Rated: E | (4.5)
*CakeB* HAPPY WDC ACCOUNT ANNIVERSARY FROM "Anniversary Reviews" *CakeP*






Review of Innocent Mistake

First and foremost, thank you for sharing your work . I am not an expert reviewer. I am just another writer, but I know it is the reviews that help us to perfect our craft. My opinions are just that; my opinions.

OVERALL IMPRESSIONS:

Well a kiss is always appreciated. Not knowing the password for this group of pioneers the woman gives the man wanting the password a kiss. This brings amusement to the group and a smile to the man kissed.

PLOT & CHARACTERS:

An interesting tale of the earl days of expansion across the United States. The characters are well presented and amusing.

SUGGESTIONS/EDITS:

The idea brought a smile to my face.

FINAL THOUGHTS:

This review was written mainly to wish you a great WDC anniversary.


** Images For Use By Upgraded+ Only **


*Gold* My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .
387
387
Review by dblameck (David)
In affiliation with The Talent Pond  
Rated: 18+ | (4.0)


Review of Home is Where the Heart Is

First and foremost, thank you for sharing your work . I am not an expert reviewer. I am just another writer, but I know it is the reviews that help us to perfect our craft. My opinions are just that; my opinions.

OVERALL IMPRESSIONS:

A complex romance story which spans several decades. starting as a high school crush the story gets involved with deceit and lies and ends with teen pregnancy. this causes the characters to separate for several years.

PLOT & CHARACTERS:

The plot is a little tangled and seems to have a lot of information that does not particularly aid the story. The relationship between carol and john is the hub of the story and the other interaction merely helps to develop that story.

SUGGESTIONS/EDITS:

I prefer my stories to be more direct and I found the ending seemed to go on for too long.

FINAL THOUGHTS:

Get to the point. Keep writing and developing your story.


** Images For Use By Upgraded+ Only **



*Gold* My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .
388
388
Review of Dixie  
Review by dblameck (David)
In affiliation with The Talent Pond  
Rated: E | (4.5)


Review of Dixie

First and foremost, thank you for sharing your work . I am not an expert reviewer. I am just another writer, but I know it is the reviews that help us to perfect our craft. My opinions are just that; my opinions.

OVERALL IMPRESSIONS:

A story of a mother and daughter relationship which develops between a foster child and a social worker. There is no other bond than friendship.

PLOT & CHARACTERS:

Dixie is the social worker who befriended this woman when she was fourteen years old. She in a sense became the mother that she never had.

SUGGESTIONS/EDITS:

No suggestions.

FINAL THOUGHTS:

A very moving story.


** Images For Use By Upgraded+ Only **


*Gold* My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .
389
389
Review of Kaden's Lullaby  
Review by dblameck (David)
In affiliation with The Talent Pond  
Rated: E | (4.5)


Review of Kaden's Lullaby

First and foremost, thank you for sharing your work . I am not an expert reviewer. I am just another writer, but I know it is the reviews that help us to perfect our craft. My opinions are just that; my opinions.

OVERALL IMPRESSIONS:

A simple twelve line poem as a lullabye. Composed of six rhyming couplets.

PLOT & CHARACTERS:

A grandmother's opportunity to share her feeling for her first grandchild.

SUGGESTIONS/EDITS:

Write more and share it with all of us.

FINAL THOUGHTS:

this is a good little song.


** Images For Use By Upgraded+ Only **


*Gold* My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .
390
390
Review of Maggie  
Review by dblameck (David)
In affiliation with The Talent Pond  
Rated: E | (4.5)

*CakeB* HAPPY WDC ACCOUNT ANNIVERSARY FROM "Anniversary Reviews" *CakeP*



Review of Maggie

First and foremost, thank you for sharing your work . I am not an expert reviewer. I am just another writer, but I know it is the reviews that help us to perfect our craft. My opinions are just that; my opinions.

OVERALL IMPRESSIONS:

A poem about hurt and pain that overcomes a loved one. I may be reading too much into this piece but that is the feeling I get.

PLOT & CHARACTERS:

there is much feeling in the words of this poem.

SUGGESTIONS/EDITS:

Keep writing and sharing your work with us.

FINAL THOUGHTS:

I want to wish you a great WDC anniversary.


** Images For Use By Upgraded+ Only **



*Gold* My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .
391
391
Review of "His camouflage."  
Review by dblameck (David)
In affiliation with The Talent Pond  
Rated: E | (3.5)


Review of His Camouflage

First and foremost, thank you for sharing your work . I am not an expert reviewer. I am just another writer, but I know it is the reviews that help us to perfect our craft. My opinions are just that; my opinions.

OVERALL IMPRESSIONS:

Not being noticed is different that using camouflage but essentially works out the same.

PLOT & CHARACTERS:

Is the purpose not noticed on purpose? Sounds like a difficult relationship.

SUGGESTIONS/EDITS:

Keep writing and sharing your work.


** Images For Use By Upgraded+ Only **


*Gold* My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .
392
392
Review of Another Storm  
Review by dblameck (David)
In affiliation with The Talent Pond  
Rated: E | (4.0)


Review of Another Storm

First and foremost, thank you for sharing your work . I am not an expert reviewer. I am just another writer, but I know it is the reviews that help us to perfect our craft. My opinions are just that; my opinions.

OVERALL IMPRESSIONS:

A look at storms and how we relate them through our ages.. I identify with much of what was written.

PLOT & CHARACTERS:

How we see storms is much because of the way we feel.

SUGGESTIONS/EDITS:

Write more.


** Images For Use By Upgraded+ Only **


*Gold* My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .
393
393
Review of Angeline Jolie  
Review by dblameck (David)
In affiliation with The Talent Pond  
Rated: E | (3.5)


Review of Angeline Jolie

First and foremost, thank you for sharing your work . I am not an expert reviewer. I am just another writer, but I know it is the reviews that help us to perfect our craft. My opinions are just that; my opinions.

OVERALL IMPRESSIONS:

I read this thinking there would be some erotica in this story. Perhaps it should be reclassified because it is merely a political or economical treatise.

PLOT & CHARACTERS:

Angeline and Donald and the concern about the USA sending money abroad. If you feel this way you should develop this further. this is little better that the National Enquirer.

SUGGESTIONS/EDITS:

I applaud your efforts to make your point.

FINAL THOUGHTS:

None.


** Images For Use By Upgraded+ Only **


*Gold* My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .
394
394
Review of School's Out  
Review by dblameck (David)
In affiliation with The Talent Pond  
Rated: 18+ | (4.5)


Review of School's Out

First and foremost, thank you for sharing your work . I am not an expert reviewer. I am just another writer, but I know it is the reviews that help us to perfect our craft. My opinions are just that; my opinions.

OVERALL IMPRESSIONS:

Adults busy with school girl role play. The story is well told and was a very enjoyable read. The first section with the oyster fooled me completely.

PLOT & CHARACTERS:

two lovers having a picnic on the beach are enjoying each other and begin to engage in role play that she is a naughty school girl.

SUGGESTIONS/EDITS:

No suggestions.

FINAL THOUGHTS:

Keep writing. this is an old piece.


** Images For Use By Upgraded+ Only **


*Gold* My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .
395
395
Review of A Letter Home  
Review by dblameck (David)
In affiliation with The Talent Pond  
Rated: E | (5.0)


Review of A Letter Home

First and foremost, thank you for sharing your work . I am not an expert reviewer. I am just another writer, but I know it is the reviews that help us to perfect our craft. My opinions are just that; my opinions.

OVERALL IMPRESSIONS:

A cute little letter from a young girl away at summer camp.

PLOT & CHARACTERS:

written in seven four line stanzas with a rhyming scheme of A B C B

SUGGESTIONS/EDITS:

Interesting and I enjoyed the idea of Christmas in July.

FINAL THOUGHTS:

Keep writing.


** Images For Use By Upgraded+ Only **


*Gold* My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .
396
396
Review of Vigilance  
Review by dblameck (David)
In affiliation with The Talent Pond  
Rated: ASR | (4.0)



Review of Vigilance

First and foremost, thank you for sharing your work . I am not an expert reviewer. I am just another writer, but I know it is the reviews that help us to perfect our craft. My opinions are just that; my opinions.

OVERALL IMPRESSIONS:

As a retired vet i know the feeling that stand behind your story. I appreciate you writing it. Standing on guard in wartime is dangerous. Standing guard in peacetime can be very boring but it is important. Remembering the coat of standing on guard can be difficult in good times and weather. Remembering in the foul weather is also important.

PLOT & CHARACTERS:

Well written.

SUGGESTIONS/EDITS:

Use a larger font. some of us older guys don't see as well anymore.

FINAL THOUGHTS:

Please keep sharing.


** Images For Use By Upgraded+ Only **


*Gold* My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .
397
397
Review of Livdecar  
Review by dblameck (David)
In affiliation with The Talent Pond  
Rated: E | (3.5)



Review of Livdecar

First and foremost, thank you for sharing your work . I am not an expert reviewer. I am just another writer, but I know it is the reviews that help us to perfect our craft. My opinions are just that; my opinions.

OVERALL IMPRESSIONS:

It is strange how driver examiners don't seem to have mush of a sense of humour.

PLOT & CHARACTERS:

The driver and the examiner and it seems neither is smiling.

SUGGESTIONS/EDITS:

Great little poem.

FINAL THOUGHTS:

Keep writing and sharing.


** Images For Use By Upgraded+ Only **



*Gold* My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .
398
398
Review by dblameck (David)
In affiliation with The Talent Pond  
Rated: E | (4.0)

*CakeB* HAPPY WDC ACCOUNT ANNIVERSARY FROM "Anniversary Reviews" *CakeP*


Review of Dust is Hiding Under There

First and foremost, thank you for sharing your work . I am not an expert reviewer. I am just another writer, but I know it is the reviews that help us to perfect our craft. My opinions are just that; my opinions.

OVERALL IMPRESSIONS:

Another poem that depicts the difference in the sexes. She doesn't have to see the dust because she knows it is there. He doesn't care about it but it is causing her great pain knowing the dust is there.

PLOT & CHARACTERS:

The comparison between man and woman is interesting and certainly made me smile.

SUGGESTIONS/EDITS:

Write more like this.

FINAL THOUGHTS:

I hope you enjoyed your WDC anniversary.


** Images For Use By Upgraded+ Only **


*Gold* My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .
399
399
Review of Silicon ticket  
Review by dblameck (David)
In affiliation with The Talent Pond  
Rated: E | (4.0)

*CakeB* HAPPY WDC ACCOUNT ANNIVERSARY FROM "Anniversary Reviews" *CakeP*


Review of Silicon Ticket

First and foremost, thank you for sharing your work . I am not an expert reviewer. I am just another writer, but I know it is the reviews that help us to perfect our craft. My opinions are just that; my opinions.

OVERALL IMPRESSIONS:

A robot is charged with some driving infractions. The court room discussion is interesting.

PLOT & CHARACTERS:

The robot called Ben and Judge Aaron Goldberg are the main characters and their interaction is interesting and humourous.

SUGGESTIONS/EDITS:

"Alright, Miss Lang you may the people’s case" you should have written "may present the people's case"

FINAL THOUGHTS:

I wish to thank you for your writing and I want you to enjoy your WDC Aniversary.


** Images For Use By Upgraded+ Only **


*Gold* My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .
400
400
Review of The Other Side  
Review by dblameck (David)
In affiliation with The Talent Pond  
Rated: 13+ | (3.0)


Review of The Other Side

First and foremost, thank you for sharing your work . I am not an expert reviewer. I am just another writer, but I know it is the reviews that help us to perfect our craft. My opinions are just that; my opinions.

OVERALL IMPRESSIONS:

You set up a very grim scenario. As the children age I suppose they now have all the skills.

PLOT & CHARACTERS:

Seems like there is just too much compartmentalizing.

SUGGESTIONS/EDITS:

None.

FINAL THOUGHTS:

Does not seem to be a place I would like to live in.


** Images For Use By Upgraded+ Only **



*Gold* My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .
1,284 Reviews · *Magnify*
Page of 52 · 25 per page   < >
Printed from https://www.writing.com/main/profile/reviews/dblameck/sort_by/r.review_creation_time DESC/page/16