Listening is a beautiful way to spend time. And bring up memories - we're watching Miami Vice on Amazon Prime again, which has a lot of great music in it.
Wonderful story! I enjoy hearing the version of Bobby Bare and the Hillsiders from time to time. And I sure hope Elliott is not going to give up playing banjo for a long time.
Interesting - I looked up at Wikipedia for some information about Cebuano. There is a lot to learn for me - and now I have to find out which language the wife of my cousin speaks as she is from the Phillipines. I enjoyed reading your poem.
What a lovely story. And partly written in German too - I enjoyed reading. A few tiny tips: In this sentence: "Ich wollte, dass es eine erraschung ist. Ich habe dieses Gefuhl nicht von dir erwartet."
Erraschung should be Überraschung, und Gefuhl needs an Umlaut - Gefühl. And in this sentence:"Wir wandern wie frer als Kinder." frer should be früher. These corrections should make your work perfect.
Last week someone told a dozen school children that his child held 250 spiders in his room. People wondered themselves why. Made me glad that Dozen is not my child... Well written.
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Wonderful story! I enjoy hearing the version of Bobby Bare and the Hillsiders from time to time. And I sure hope Elliott is not going to give up playing banjo for a long time.